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  1. Mar 2025
    1. I would say that it is unhelpful because its prescriptions presuppose the knowledge most of our students don’t have. What good is it to be told, “Do not join independent clauses with a comma,” if you don’t have the slightest idea of what a clause is (and isn’t), never mind an “independent” one? And even if a beginning student were provided with the definition of a clause, the definition itself would hang in mid-air like a random piece of knowledge. It would be like being given a definition of a drop-kick in the absence of any understanding of the game in which it could be deployed.

      I agree. But rules in writing, more than any other, are meant to be broken. To work from a correct definition supposes that that definition is correct, easy to learn, worth learning, or not subject to change. Adaptability is key to good writing, and you learn adaptability best when you're comfortable, not being whipped by rulers. Tests of comprehension and knowledge are easy to pass for those who can memorize and conform.

    2. I cannot see, however, why a failure of secondary education relieves college teachers of a responsibility to make up the deficit. Quite the reverse. It is because our students come to us unable to write clean English sentences that we are obligated to supply what they did not receive from their previous teachers. No doubt this obligation constitutes a burden on an already overworked labor force, but (and this is one of those times a cliché can acquire renewed force), somebody has to do it.

      True enough.

    3. These include (1) asking students to make a sentence out of a random list of words, and then explain what they did; (2) asking students to turn a three-word sentence like “Jane likes cake” into a 100-word sentence without losing control of the basic structure and then explain, word-by-word, clause-by-clause, what they did; (3) asking students to replace the nonsense words in the first stanza of Lewis Carroll’s “Jabberwocky” with ordinary English words in a way that makes coherent (if silly) sense, and then explain what they did, and how they knew what kind of word to put into each “slot.” (The answer is that even in the absence of sense or content, the stanza’s formal structure tells them what to do and what not to do.)

      A better method. Not only does it involve close reading and understanding of structure, but an imaginative exercise of creativity. Still hindered by the obsession with proper rules and forms.

    4. In the final exercise, about which I’ve written before in this space, the class is divided into groups of four or five and each group is asked to create its own language — complete with a lexicon, and a grammar capable of conveying the distinctions (of number, tense, mood, etc.) conveyed by English grammatical forms. At the end of the semester each group presents a text in its language and teaches the class how to translate it into English, and how to translate English sentences into sentences in the new language, to which the group always gives a name and about which it is always fiercely proprietary.

      To my mind, a truly awful method of teaching writing. This is a rigid linguist's path to mastery, not an attainable method for most.

    5. that very truth is a reason for teaching it to students who are being prepared for entry into the world as it now is rather than the world as it might be in some utopian imagination — all dialects equal, all habit of speech and writing equally rewarded.

      Why not try? Students struggle even to master their own languages in writing, how cruel to take them from any progress they may have made and place them into a rigid structure of grammar and standardization.

    6. prejudices

      Fish argues heavily for vulnerability to prejudice as a motivator for encouraging conformity. If one becomes a part of the power structure, no less, masters it, they are far less incentivised to tear it down.

  2. Aug 2024
    1. implied that pro-union graduate workers would be voting against their self-interest, since a union could result in a reduction of university jobs for them, if it increased costs for the university.

      Disingenuous tactics again

    2. Cornell students organized to hold the corporation accountable, and successfully pressured the university not to renew its contract with Starbucks. This was the beginning of the Starbucks Off Our Campus movement, which spread to a couple dozen campuses, a direct response to the company’s anti-labor practices.

      Parallel to the washerwomen, similar and affected communities banded together to increase pressure in industries outside those specifically in dispute

    3. The effects of inflation and the need for a COLA clause came up often, when speaking with UAW Local 2300 members. “Over the years, you know, it seems as if our paycheck does not go as far,” said Louise Braron, a Cornell custodial worker at a previous rally. “We can tell just going grocery shopping that we don’t buy the foods we once used to buy because we can’t afford them any longer.”

      Parallel to the washerwomen, changing times create the need for collective action

    4. “they are saying that they don’t know how they would budget for it, and all kinds of excuses.” However, by the final night of bargaining before the strike, the university did offer a COLA clause, but without other counteroffers that would compel the union not to strike.

      Disingenuous tactics from university administration

    1. willingness to pay the fees — so long as the city agreed to formally grant them control over the local hand-laundering industry.

      Union was willing to engage with institutions fairly

    2. Atlanta City Council got involved. Its solution: a $25 annual business license fee on any member of a washerwomen association (more than $670 in 2021 dollars)

      Union-busting measure

    3. She refused to pay, and as punishment, the 49-year-old asthmatic mother of two was sentenced to work on a chain gang for 40 days.

      Punishment for disruption is disproportionate and inconsiderate

    4. On the employers’ side, the strike hit like a wrecking ball. As washerwomen began returning soiled or still-wet laundry to clients who refused to pay the higher wage, White employers scrambled to find workers to fill the laundry gap as they feared the strike would spread to other industries.

      High-impact and well organized striking can cause panic and create the potential for other workers to become conscious of unfair practices

    5. declined to print the White women’s names to protect their privacy (a courtesy not extended to the Black female strikers)

      Racial bias in media divorced from class bias

    6. brought in the city’s White washerwomen (who made up only 2 percent of the workforce) to support their cause.

      Early example of intersectional organizing and recognition