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  1. Nov 2020
  2. scalar.usc.edu scalar.usc.edu
    Empathy in E-Literature: Scene 6
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    1. bbm38 13 Nov 2020
      leaving us to wallow in our own loss of grasp. This page has paths: 1 media/My Landing Splash.png 2020-11-07T13:29:24-08:00 Daniel Popp fad0737eff8cb225b5db738caa8bb6dcd189fb20 "Loss of Grasp" Daniel Popp 9 An Analysis by Daniel Popp splash 1032410 2020-11-12T18:33:43-08:00 Daniel Popp fad0737eff8cb225b5db738caa8bb6dcd189fb20 Contents of this path: 1 media/My Landing Splash.png 2020-11-09T13:23:21-08:00 Introduction 6 "Loss of Grasp" image_header 2020-11-12T18:36:13-08:00 1 2020-11-09T13:23:48-08:00 Scene 1 8 "Loss of Grasp" Scene 1 plain 2020-11-12T17:53:50-08:00 1 2020-11-09T13:24:00-08:00 Complicated Relationships 18 Scenes 2-3 of "Loss of Grasp" deal with the narrator's relationship with his wife gallery 2020-11-12T18:53:59-08:00 1 2020-11-09T13:24:16-08:00 Scene 6 8 The final scene of "Loss of Grasp" the narrator regains confidence in himself but the reader loses any control over what happens plain 2020-11-12T18:18:25-08:00 1 2020-11-12T16:15:19-08:00 Associated Page shit idk man 2 help plain 2020-11-12T19:03:03-08:00 This page references: 1 media/Essay3LOGScene6Start_thumb.png 2020-11-12T16:19:07-08:00 LOG_6_Goals 1 Screenshot from scene 6 of "Loss of Grasp" media/Essay3LOGScene6Start.png plain 2020-11-12T16:19:07-08:00 1 media/Essay3LOGScene6Popup_thumb.png 2020-11-12T16:22:12-08:00 LOG_6_Popup 1 Screenshot from scene 6 of "Loss of Grasp" media/Essay3LOGScene6Popup.png plain 2020-11-12T16:22:12-08:00

      Again very solid and also helpful word choice that stays concise but packs a lot of meaning and carries the emotional theme with it. Also the heavy amounts of annotating are quite useful, as they allow the reader of this Scalar page to learn more about the specifics in each screenshot as they read.

    2. bbm38 13 Nov 2020
      However, no matter what the user inputs, the same text fills the window, as seen in the image below.No annotations to display.

      Good portrayal of the crushing idea that the person in question may indeed have control, but it ends up just being a lost hope with receiving the same response no matter what you do. I'm also very glad that your saying this because it drives in how loss of control is not only shown in the presented story, but also in how the user interacts with the work itself, operating on both levels of play.

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    Empathy in E-Literature: Complicated Relationships
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    1. bbm38 13 Nov 2020
      This scene progresses the author's loss of grasp by exhibiting the way he is beginning to question his relationship with his wife. This page has paths: 1 media/My Landing Splash.png 2020-11-07T13:29:24-08:00 Daniel Popp fad0737eff8cb225b5db738caa8bb6dcd189fb20 "Loss of Grasp" Daniel Popp 9 An Analysis by Daniel Popp splash 1032410 2020-11-12T18:33:43-08:00 Daniel Popp fad0737eff8cb225b5db738caa8bb6dcd189fb20 Contents of this path: 1 media/My Landing Splash.png 2020-11-09T13:23:21-08:00 Introduction 6 "Loss of Grasp" image_header 2020-11-12T18:36:13-08:00 1 2020-11-09T13:23:48-08:00 Scene 1 8 "Loss of Grasp" Scene 1 plain 2020-11-12T17:53:50-08:00 1 2020-11-09T13:24:00-08:00 Complicated Relationships 18 Scenes 2-3 of "Loss of Grasp" deal with the narrator's relationship with his wife gallery 2020-11-12T18:53:59-08:00 1 2020-11-09T13:24:16-08:00 Scene 6 8 The final scene of "Loss of Grasp" the narrator regains confidence in himself but the reader loses any control over what happens plain 2020-11-12T18:18:25-08:00 1 2020-11-12T16:15:19-08:00 Associated Page shit idk man 2 help plain 2020-11-12T19:03:03-08:00 This page references: 1 media/LOG_3_BreakUpNote_thumb.png 2020-11-09T10:34:18-08:00 LOG_3_BreakupNote 1 Text as breakup note from section 3 of "Loss of Grasp" media/LOG_3_BreakUpNote.png plain 2020-11-09T10:34:18-08:00 1 media/Woman Starting Questions_thumb.png 2020-11-09T10:35:30-08:00 LOG_2_questions 1 Questions begin to form an image in section 2 of "Loss of Grasp" media/Woman Starting Questions.png plain 2020-11-09T10:35:30-08:00 1 media/Woman Complete_thumb.png 2020-11-09T10:23:34-08:00 LOG_2_womanCompleted 1 Screenshot from part 2 of "Loss of Grasp" with the image of the woman completed media/Woman Complete.png plain 2020-11-09T10:23:34-08:00 1 media/LOG_3_LovePoem_thumb.png 2020-11-09T10:32:49-08:00 LOG_3_LovePoem 1 Text as love poem from section 3 of "Loss of Grasp" media/LOG_3_LovePoem.png plain 2020-11-09T10:32:49-08:00

      Another solid description. By the way, as a reader reading this Scalar path, I'm really liking this format of concisely going through the scenes in very digestible paragraphs, it's just very smooth and friendly to understand and take in, even having never actually played the work before.

    2. bbm38 13 Nov 2020
      author's loss of grasp in his life as he begins to struggle to control his words

      Paragraph shows a very interesting way that the work shows loss of control, and introduces the emotional feeling that comes with that as well.

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    Empathy in E-Literature: Scene 1
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    1. bbm38 13 Nov 2020
      the user feels a reflection of the narrator's described loss of grasp and control.

      Nice vivid description of scene and again relation to theme. Also the video is extremely helpful for getting someone who has never played the game oriented with the work.

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    Empathy in E-Literature: Introduction
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    Empathy in E-Literature: "Loss of Grasp"
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