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  1. Feb 2019
    1. The age lines on my forehead removed. Really thinking about it, I might be giving a false perspective of myself to whomever comes to my page to meet me, but honestly that was intentional. That was the game plan. See me how I want to be seen not how you want to view me. Control is huge part of that. In this era we are in complete control of what we want people to see.

      see if you can combine the smaller sentences into the larger one so it flows better. Maybe list the imperfections you think you have and how you changed them in the photo

    2. If we all really want to be honest we meet through the internet unless we are put in the same settings by class, work, or any other extra curricular activities we may involve involve ourselves in

      literal truth!!!!

    3. As seen on the staged picture to the left, I am very programmed as a millennial, to put my best version of myself out there…Looking as pretty as I can, adding filter, different lights, all the things to make people see me the way that I want to be seen

      I would format this sentence a little differently so it flows better. example of that wold be...

      The picture on the left pictures someone who is a millennial by putting the best version of myself out there. In this picture I am trying to look as pretty as i can by adding filters and having different lighting so, all of those things can help persuade people to see me the way i want to be seen.

    4. Bad habits are not grown over night, but accumulated like old knick knacks sitting in your curio cabinet, dust filled, waiting to be addressed.

      great introduction. has a nice attention getter.