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  1. May 2022
    1. Seven months later, King gave another revision of the speech to a gathering of political and spiritual leaders,

      It is amazing to think that such an iconic speech has so much revisions.

    2. Among these useful interventions are participation in a lively revision culture and an interactive and social writing process such as talking over drafts—soliciting feedback from instructors and classmates. Extending the modern definition of writing more broadly to composing in any medium, revision is as bound to writing as breathing is to living.

      Yes. Revision can always occur.

    3. work-in-progress, that they just don’t have time for all this revision today. But this critique echoes the point that writing is social and responsive to its readers. Writing is almost always meant to be read and responded to, not hoarded away.

      I think this holds true: One can always improve whether they like it or not.

    4. The more writers push through chaos to get to the good stuff, the more they revise. The more writers revise, whether that be the keystrokes they sweat in front of a blinking, demanding cursor or the unofficial revising they do in our heads when they’re showering or driving or running, the more the ideal reader becomes a part of their craft and muscle memory, of who they are as writers, so at some point they may not know where the writing stops and the revision begins.

      I see this. I feel like I am always revising while writing and coming to the conclusion last.

    5. Effective revising isn’t making changes for the sake of change, but instead making smarter changes.

      I agree with this: We need to make changes that actually make sense: Not because we want to see changes in general.

    6. Anne Lamott calls “shitty first drafts” and all the ones that follow, the revision of a tenth and a thirteenth and a twenty-third draft. I show a YouTube video by Tim Weninger, a computer scientist and engineer at the University of Notre Dame. In the video, Weninger stitches together his revisions of a research paper. In my class, we play a game, guessing how many revisions Weninger did. The answer—463!

      Sometimes I feel like I need to do a lot of revisions to finalize something. Not this much but still a lot.

    7. writers need revision because revision is not a discrete step. Revision is not the thing writers do when they’re done writing. Revision is the writing.

      I can see this. I need to re-word my writing all the time because I need to make sure if I wrote something adequately enough.

    8. The fantasy that good writers summon forth beautiful, lean, yet intricate sentences onto a page without sweating is an unhealthy fiction, and it is wrong.

      I agree with this. Within my essays, I need to actually look over what I write to make sure I phrase it right.

    1. Writing developed not from speech but out of a need to represent numbers

      With this definition, writing seems to be more of an aide rather than a need to represent emotion and idea. Why is it important then?

    2. the author’s voice is always a fabrication—a fiction—in the mind of the reader.

      I think that this can prove to be problematic if the voice is misinterpreted. I always try to stay clear of that when I always write something.

    3. writing more accurately—not as a series of individual disruptions, but as a continual integration of knowledge and a way of making sense of the world.

      I think you need your own voice in some parts of readings. Others you do not as much.

    4. Not much—except, perhaps, a clumsy metaphor that gets in the way of more accurate descriptions of a reader’s response. Conversely, letting go of the author’s voice turns writers’ and writing teachers’ attention toward more important aspects of learning to write.

      I think an author's voice can be important in some contexts, such as giving commentary. Yes, there is room for misinterpretation but it is an author's original opinion and way of speaking.

    5. Removing writing from the constraints of a single author’s voice

      To some extent, I think this can be overdone to the point of complexity. To use an analogy: Too many cooks in a kitchen.

    6. practical issues like the ability to make and support a claim, the ability to select and ethically represent evidence and experience, or the ability to write in a way that readers might recognize as important.

      I think that writing is a process where all of this, as well as the above, is valued. However, I think it really depends on context as well.

    7. writing is some kind of divined gift, talent, or genetic trait that some people have and others do not. Removing this obstacle to writing helps people see writing as not only important to their lives, but also an ability that is learnable, teachable, and can grow with practice.

      I can see this but I believe writing comes easier to others. Like, I can write but it takes me much longer than others I know.

    8. In other words, any voice of a text is contingent upon the particular ways a reader might apply emphasis to certain ideas, prioritize certain linguistic devices, and make inferences about an author’s motives, intents, or aims—all at the expense of other ideas, devices, or aims.

      I can see this: An author can try to have themselves perceived via any way trough voice. However, it is only the reader who decides how to interpret that.

    9. Using the author’s words, the reader weaves together an interpretation based on the reader’s own previous experience

      I agree with this. Sometimes, it does not matter how something is said. Words can have an effect based off of past experience.

    10. You would likely interpret this letter differently depending on what you know about its author.

      Yes. This is true. I think this also goes for most forms of communication as well. It all depends on the person speaking.

    11. Reading is itself a constructive act—quite literally, reading is meaning making.

      I can understand this. Reading is more or less how our brain processes writing.

    12. That shorthand also prevents us from thinking and talking about writing as its own form of communication.

      It is important that writing be considered its own form of communication. The expression of ideas is completely unique from speech within its own regard. Different rules and codes of conduct are followed.

    13. Such work seems particularly difficult in an era of excessive information.

      Yes. There is so many choices on what to write about and how to gain the information to do it.

    14. must spend time cultivating their voice.

      I agree with this. A voice is, in my opinion, what gives a writer their personality.