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  1. Dec 2019
    1. where fifty more shocks will never return your soul to its body again from its pilgrimage to a cross in the void

      Both Ginsberg and Solomon found themselves subjected to shock therapy. Apparently it didn't do much good for them.

    2. Moloch who entered my soul early! Moloch in whom I am a consciousness without a body! Moloch who frightened me out of my natural ecstasy! Moloch whom I abandon! Wake up in Moloch! Light streaming out of the sky!

      Tying back to his analogy of Moloch to a dystopian prison state, Moloch apparently is modernity itself, something which those who live and die in the city are bound to, forced upon it and seemingly unable to free themselves.

    3. sexless hydrogen

      Definitely a reference to the H-bomb. Hydrogen is the most abundant chemical in the universe and is often linked with water and life. Defining it here as sexless implies some opposite of life and vigor.

    4. Moloch whose mind is pure machinery!

      Ginsberg seems to tie modernity and machinery to war and death consistently. With the Moloch repetition he seems to be building a dystopian image of children's futures sacrificed for the sake of trains and printing presses running on time.

    5. Moloch the heavy judger of men!

      Heavy judge of men because he is associated with the death of children? Is there some Spartan ideology here of deciding which children are the most fit and deserving to grow into strong adults?

    6. What sphinx of cement and aluminium bashed open their skulls and ate up their brains and imagination?

      The sphinx, an icon of ancient Egyptian civilization is here represented through modern building materials. This modern sphinx eats imagination, likely a comment on the forward thrust of modernity diminishing a true connection to the mystical and creative.

    7. ah, Carl, while you are not safe I am not safe, and now you’re really in the total animal soup of time—

      An interesting break here where Ginsberg sympathizes with Carl Solomon, whom the poem is dedicated to. Considering they met in a psychiatric hospital, it seems that Ginsberg got out, left his friend behind, and is now suddenly worried for his safety and sanity in the midst of writing this poem.

    8. who threw potato salad at CCNY lecturerson Dadaism and subsequently presented themselves on the granite steps of the madhouse with the shaven heads and harlequin speech of suicide, demanding instantaneous lobotomy,

      Every time I try to read about Dada I get headaches. It's some form of avant-garde, anti-art, art movement that embraces nonsense. So I suppose this section describes it pretty well.

    9. hotrod-Golgotha jail-solitude watch Birmingham jazz incarnation,

      Golgotha - the place where Jesus was crucified Birmingham - where MLKJR was imprisoned and wrote some of his most famous letters. This was written before MLK was imprisoned there but it's an interesting coincidence at the very least.

    10. who jumped off the Brooklyn Bridge this actually happened and walked away unknown and forgotten into the ghostly daze of Chinatown soup alleyways & firetrucks, not even one free beer,

      The lack of punctuation around "this actually happened" heightens the sense of rambling that comes with each of these anecdotes. Not even one free beer after surviving a plunge from the Brooklyn Bridge... can't catch a break.

    11. who cut their wrists three times successively unsuccessfully, gave up and were forced to open antique stores where they thought they were growing old and cried,

      Really brutal anecdote here. An attempted suicide that ends in resignation to the frailty of age, trapped in a self-made tomb of aging debris.

    12. who scribbled all night rocking and rolling over lofty incantations which in the yellow morning were stanzas of gibberish,

      Probably how Ginsberg wrote most of his poems... Honestly I do love this. Incantations of Gibberish is a great Lovecraftian image, and the inclusion of yellow here only accentuates that.

    13. especially secret gas-station solipsisms of johns, & hometown alleys too,

      A strange vignette of presentness, being "in the momemnt" in a secret back alley meetings with sex workers.

    14. America and Eternity, a hopeless task

      A nice way of saying that no empire lasts forever. With all the rhetoric of America being the "greatest nation", Ginsberg makes a point to say that nothing is certain or eternal. I'd direct you to Percy Shelley's poem Ozymandias for more of this sentiment...

    15. who studied Plotinus Poe St John of the Cross telepathy and bop kabbalah because the universe instinctively vibrated at their feet in Kansas,

      Plotinus was a Hellenistic philosopher whose works focused on the trinity of The One, The Intellect, and The Soul. St John of the Cross was a 16th century priest whose writings focused primarily on the soul. Ginsberg seems to be making a connection between mysticism, the soul, and other eclectic studies as speaking to those who feel an instinctive connection to the universe and the energies surrounding them within it. This line (as with much of Howl) seems like a call for a modern revitalization of mysticism, most likely through the focus of sex, drugs and rock and roll.

    16. starry dynamo

      Remembering Henry Adam's glorification of "the dynamo", Ginsberg also relates mechanical modernization to some celestial unknown.

    1. Of turning deaf-ear to your call      Time and time again!

      The pain comes with the repetition of the denial. This is not a one time occurrence, and this fact lends weight to the idea "You know"

    2. Commune—The altars will reveal . . . We then shall be impulsed to kneel

      In relation to the previous mention of "A meeting place-a common ground", an Altar can be considered a meeting place with a higher power. The juxtaposition of communion and impulsion is very powerful.

    1. Red mouth; flower soft,

      Relating lips to the color and softness of a flower (a rose?). A feature that the speaker finds beauty in both sight and touch.

    2. Why dream I here beneath my homely thatch, When there they lie in sodden mud and rain, Pitifully calling me, the quick ones and the slain?

      Sewing is generally considered a relaxing activity, but here the speaker can't shake thoughts of soldiers gone to war. What good does sitting and sewing do while others give their lives?

    1. But say, I was where I could see his face, And somehow, I could see him dancin’ in a jungle,

      The music transports him, he seems to exist in both places simultaneously

  2. Nov 2019
    1. song of waters

      Throughout these poems Bennett uses plenty of elemental nature imagery, and each of these elements is given some humanly characteristic as well. Fire is heretical, sands are silents observers, water is melodic.

    2. We claim no part with racial dearth; We want to sing the songs of birth!

      These lines coupled with the previous "if any have a song to sing..." seems to be calling for a new era of art and poetry. according to the speaker, the time of dreariness and "dearth" are done and the next step should be one of cultural "birth" and prosperity.

    1. “You been travelin’ rascal In yo’day. You kin roam once mo’; Den you come to stay.

      Saint Peter notes Slim as a wanderer and thus tasks him with one more adventure before he gets his peace. It's like the start of some southern american Divine Comedy.

    2. You sang: Ain’t no hammah In dis lan’, Strikes lak mine, bebby, Strikes lak mine.

      This song seems to speak to a self-empowerment of an otherwise powerless situation. The previous stanza shows hammers being forced upon workers and emphasizes the class separation between them and those riding along in cars and trains, but the workers find some pride in their work nonetheless.

    3. Flocks in to hear Ma do her stuff;

      Before we learn what exactly Ma's "stuff" is, we already know people comes from miles around to see it. Whatever the "stuff" is, it's something she's crafted and made her own.

    1. But I laugh, And eat well, And grow strong.

      Being "sent to the kitchen", separated for the group, doesn't bother the speaker now, as they seem to have their sights set on the future. The speaker laughs at these small injustices and simply hones their body and mind, preparing for a future where power will shift in their favor.

    2. flow of human blood

      The use of "flow" immediately relates the rivers to the human body in a physical, rythmic way as well as a spiritual one. With what we've seen in DuBois, there is a strong sentiment of ancient blood and ancestral memeory that is likely at work here as well.

  3. Oct 2019
    1. Here is no water but only rock Rock and no water and the sandy road The road winding above among the mountains Which are mountains of rock without water

      Seems like a reference to Moses drawing water from a stone while wandering the desert after escape from Egypt. God provided many miracles to the the people of Israel while they wandered the desert, but Eliot says there are no miracles here.

    2. After the torchlight red on sweaty faces After the frosty silence in the gardens

      Great contrast, bringing the reader fully into the winter chill, but introducing it first with a flash of fire.

    3. Turn upward from the desk, when the human engine waits Like a taxi throbbing waiting,

      Gives a stark image of monotony. Upward from the desk as if slaving away at an office all day, like a taxi waiting to get back on the road again. Restless, yet bored.

    4. The nymphs are departed.

      Nymph is used often to refer to a mystical young beauty, but their absence here speaks to the end of summer and the start of the cold season of decay. Hence the "brown land" and "cold blast" mentioned in the stanza as well.

    5. “That corpse you planted last year in your garden, “Has it begun to sprout? Will it bloom this year?

      Taps into the idea of "burying memories with the garden". A corpse buried in a coffin will rot, but one buried in a forest might grow.

    6. And down we went.

      Spring, Summer and Winter are all mentioned by name in this first stanza, but not fall. Perhaps this "down we went" is a double meaning.

    7.   April is the cruellest month, breeding Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing Memory and desire, stirring Dull roots with spring rain. Winter kept us warm, covering Earth in forgetful snow, feeding A little life with dried tubers.

      Each of these lines ends with an action that is only completed by the next line.

    1. peasant traditions to give them character

      Traditions here deemed quaint or base as opposed to the bustling of civilization. "Imagination" in the line before gives the sense of the surreal, breaking from the mundane and elevating into something new.

    2. products of America

      I love this phrasing. Leaning fully into the "product of environment" mindset on a national scale and amplifying it to a national scale.

  4. Sep 2019
    1. Oh, I kept the first for another day! Yet knowing how way leads on to way, I doubted if I should ever come back.

      Acknowledgment that the path (or decision) is not infinite. Leaving something "for another day" means risking it not being there when you wish to return.

    2. He moves in darkness as it seems to me, Not of woods only and the shade of trees.

      Moving behind this manufactured barrier, alienating oneself not in the woods and trees but behind some emotional or spiritual wall.

    3. And to whom I was like to give offense.

      A wall is a physical manifestation of a desired distance or alienation from something. The sudden construction of a barrier would definitely be offensive if I was on the wrong side of it.

    1. Degenerate sons and daughters,

      Given the fact that the speaker has lost so many children, this may be a message to children who have strayed from their families. Life is too short for bad blood between family members.

    2. WENT

      It seems like the first or second word of each of these poems is capitalized, which helps to set the scene. SEEDS are a subject, WHEN is a sense of setting and here WENT is an action. All different elements that set the stage for the piece.

    1. with only two moons listening

      Another instance of doubleness, possibly mirroring Mr. Flood's talking with himself as two characters, but also likely that Flood is just very drunk and seeing double.

    2. Below him, in the town among the trees, Where friends of other days had honored him

      Perhaps Mr. Flood is something of a hometown hero, but all of his old friends and fans have left, moved on to bigger and better things.

    3. And you that feed yourselves with your descent, What comes of all your visions and your fears?

      Seems to suggest that people who spend all their time "feeding" themselves with troublesome thoughts don't anything new or exciting to the bigger picture.

    4. And you that ache so much to be sublime

      Paining oneself to achieve greatness is a common theme, but the wording here gives it a lot of weight. Great juxtaposition.

    1. If only that top pattern could be gotten off from the under one!

      Another notion of "doubleness". The narrator believes there are two aspects of the wallpaper, mirrors of each other. Just as the woman behind the wallpaper mirrors the narrator and the narrator's dual aspects of the person she presents herself to be and the person she is when she's alone.

    2. The only thing I can think of that it is like is the COLOR of the paper! A yellow smell.

      The only thing that can describe the wallpaper is the wallpaper itself. A singular entity.

    3. I don’t want to leave now until I have found it out.

      The wallpaper was once the object of her suffering, but now the idea of solving it seems liberating to her.

    4. At night in any kind of light, in twilight, candle light, lamplight, and worst of all by moonlight, it becomes bars! The outside pattern I mean, and the woman behind it is as plain as can be.

      The motif of prison bars returns, this time with the figure of a woman behind them. Perhaps the wallpaper is a mirror.

    5. It is as good as gymnastics, I assure you. I start, we’ll say, at the bottom, down in the corner over there where it has not been touched, and I determine for the thousandth time that I WILL follow that pointless pattern to some sort of a conclusion.

      A great Lovecraftian trope here of trying to determine meaning from something that has none, or at least none that the human mind can fathom.

    6. It dwells in my mind so!

      At first we see the narrator stuck indoors looking out at the tress and shrubbery and other bits of nature through her window. Now though, even when she is walking through the gardens and fresh air, the thought of the wallpaper is poisoning her thoughts.

    7. they must have had perseverance as well as hatred. Then the floor is scratched and gouged and splintered, the plaster itself is dug out here and there, and this great heavy bed which is all we found in the room, looks as if it had been through the wars.

      The fact that this room was simultaneously so sturdy and so torn up further enforces the idea of it being a prison or a cage, designed to keep things trapped inside no matter how ravenously they try to claw their way out.

    8. they must have had perseverance as well as hatred. Then the floor is scratched and gouged and splintered, the plaster itself is dug out here and there, and this great heavy bed which is all we found in the room, looks as if it had been through the wars.

      The fact that this room was simultaneously so sturdy and so torn up further enforces the idea of it being a prison or a cage, designed to keep things trapped inside no matter how ravenously they try to claw their way out.

    9. He knows there is no REASON to suffer, and that satisfies him.

      john does not care for his wife's feelings on the matter, only acknowledging that it SHOULD get better and therefore waits for it to run its course.

    10. “The Yellow Wallpaper”

      Yellow is a color often associated with unease or fear. Yellow Wallpaper, The King in Yellow, the Yellow Sign, Yellow Journalism, Sinestro's Yellow Lantern Corps, etc.

    11. It is dull enough to confuse the eye in following, pronounced enough to constantly irritate and provoke study, and when you follow the lame uncertain curves for a little distance they suddenly commit suicide—plunge off at outrageous angles, destroy themselves in unheard of contradictions.

      The wallpaper itself seems impossible to focus on and creates a sense of unrest in studying it. The lines and patterns cannot commit suicide or destroy themselves, so perhaps our narrator is reading into things a bit too closely.

    12. The most beautiful place! It is quite alone, standing well back from the road, quite three miles from the village. It makes me think of English places that you read about, for there are hedges and walls and gates that lock, and lots of separate little houses for the gardeners and people.

      Of course the "ancestral hall", potential haunted house and place of mental recovery is secluded from civilization and even if one were to stumble across it, tall hedges, walls and gates keep it even further isolated. "English places that you read about" - like in Wuthering Heights perhaps?

    13. So I will let it alone and talk about the house.

      The physicians around the narrator do not permit her to express her feelings about her condition so she turns her attention towards the house. In doing so, perhaps some feelings that could have easily been aired out and dealt with slowly become more and more projected on the walls around her.

    1. After the Egyptian and Indian, the Greek and Roman, the Teuton and Mongolian, the Negro is a sort of seventh son, born with a veil, and gifted with second-sight in this American world

      I'm no expert on the subject, but Du Bois seems to be tapping into the idea of the black people as the "original" people. The first founders of civilization across the globe. As such, black people are old souls entering a new nation, redefining their place in the world and their place in history.

    2. co-worker in the kingdom of culture

      The true American culture is ultimately the melting pot, but as we know, it is not an easy process for a new culture to be included in the greater scheme of the American way. Du Bois seems to acknowledge the importance of embracing all cultures. Whether they belong to a nation or an individual, they all add to the greater "kingdom of culture" that is being built.

    3. In this merging he wishes neither of the older selves to be lost.

      It is extremely difficult to recognize two qualities about oneself that seem to at odds or incompatible with each other and learn to reconcile them. Du Bois points out that "two souls" do not always agree, even if they see through the same eyes. By recognizing this spiritual combativeness, hopeful some greater truth can be reached rather than being forced to side with one soul or the other.

    4. Why did God make me an outcast and a stranger in mine own house?

      The idea of humanity being a collection of God's children coupled with the reality of inequality among them is a powerful image. If we are all God's children, does he still play favorites?