Asksuchpeoplewhytheythoughtanewacquaintanceispretentious,andtheywallrephrasethegeneralizationratherthanoffertheevidencethatledtoit:thepersonispretentiousbecauseheputsonairs.
This quote stood out to me because I think that it gives a good example on how to understand the difference between evidence and claims and how they correlate when you are writing an essay. The author used a real world situation where you can apply this concept to, which from my perspective was very insightful and overall helpful. Thinking back to the previous essays that I have written, I know there are many times where I just add evidence, without properly explaining how I got there. By using evidence to explain a claim then also explaining how that evidence led to that said claim will clear up any confusion or other questions someone might have while reading an essay. I think that using this concept would make my essays flow more efficiently and overall make me a better writer.