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  1. May 2021
    1. as they look at their hands so long away from their tools, as they look at themselves, so long gone from their families, so long gone from life itself, so many things have changed.

      So many things have changed for immigrants, and you would think they would be good since these people have left everything to go to a different country and start a new life but that is not the case.

    2. but so very few make it out of here as human as they came in,

      The struggles they went through changed immigrants and made them feel less human, as they feel dehumanized and given unfair opportunities from the rest.

    3. But in the end, some will just sit around talking about how good the old world was.

      Some wish to go back to the past, a place where they thought it was bad but wish to live instead of now.

    4. thinking they’ll get a chance to change their lives.

      Every immigrant moves to a new country in hopes to change there life but sadly many are turned down.

    5. looking around, each with a dream in their heart,

      Every immigrant that traveled to this country, moved to seek there dreams and move to a place where it is possible to achieve these dreams.

    6. new haircuts and brogan boots,

      When I read "new haircuts" it makes me think that they tried to look nice for job interviews or opportunities they come across.

    7. or somebody downstairs hollers angrily about a toilet overflowing, or that the heaters don’t work.

      Immigrants are not given proper opportunities when moving countries.

    8. Across the way Joey is sticking his hands through the bars to hand Felipé a cigarette,

      It is like living in prison, the conditions and opportunities given are terrible.

    9. our minds deteriorate, we learn nothing of value.

      The education system in this country is terrible and the things taught do not provide any valuable learning or skills.

    10. We came here to get away from false promises,

      They wanted to escape there old life where there hopes were built up on fake promises and they were let down, but the same thing is beginning to happen in this new country.

    11. So we go about our business, blacks with blacks, poor whites with poor whites, chicanos and indians by themselves.

      Shows the classification and racial segregation that can happen when struggling to make a living,

    12. Our expectations are high: in the old world,

      They had high expectations for the United States. They expected to have a easy and free life from where they left but instead they are left with people like the old men who sit and judge.

    13. We pass them as they stand around idle,

      They stop doing what they are doing when the immigrants pass by, its as if the immigrants bother the old men enough to stop what there doing to stop and judge.

    14. from deep disturbed eyes, sulking, retreated.

      The old men are judging the immigrants and likely don't accept them and feel like they belong in the country.

    15. But most of us didn’t finish high school.

      Most of the people who are coming to find a better life did not get past high school and it shows that in these countries they are leaving if you do not get a full education it is hard to make something of yourself and have a successful life.

    16. They used common sense like scholars

      By saying this is he stating that the common sense of people good with there heads is greater and have more knowledge.

    17. Some of us were craftsmen in the old world,

      Shows that tests can be unfair because some people worked differently and did not have the same education as others.

    18. At the gates we are given new papers,

      They are given new papers to identify themselves and papers that make them legally able to enter a new country.

      The gates can by a symbol of hope and freedom.

    1. Away from the masonry wall and let her drop.

      People were better off jumping hoping to live because there was no chance of escaping the fire through the building.

    2. On the ninth floor, no hydrants, no fire escapes—

      The building was not up to proper safety standards, so along with the terrible conditions making shirts, there was no escape during a disaster.

    3. At the Triangle Factory in nineteen-eleven.

      It was a fire in Manhattan, New York City on March 25, 1911. It was one of the most deadly industrial disasters in U.S history.

    1. A tiger under a rainbow   at nightfall.

      Shows the Vietnam is a pretty place when there is peace and the rainbow represents peace, the tiger represents when there is war Vietnam is not as pretty.

    2. We stand with our handshanging at our sides,

      Relates to the Vietnam war and how soldiers would stand with hands at there sides during a funeral. Or it be a burning flag?

    1. Or does it explode?

      I feel like you could go two ways with this, does the dream explode and get destroyed being forgotten forever and never sought after or does it make a comeback and become known again after the explosion.

    1. Holding an M-16, see with the pen I'm extreme, now

      Many rappers talk about guns in there songs and Nas calls himself extreme meaning dangerous because he has an M-16.

    1. an underhand pass toward the other guard   

      This is another type of pass but I feel like the poet is trying to describe an something that happened to Dennis Turner which the poem is in memory of.

    1. cultivation of strength to heal and enhance

      The author is now asking for strength to heal and advance instead of just strength in the dark. When reading this I feel like the author is going on the offensive side and fighting back more by using the words heal and enhance.

    2. long blows that you want to give and blows you are going to get.

      I feel like she is trying to say that overcoming a challenge will hurt you and the other person by talking about punching each other.

    3. cultivation of victory Over

      The first line states, "cultivation of strength" and this line states, "cultivation of victory". It shows that she has overcome her challenges and teaches a life lesson that strength can lead to victory.

    1. Nor any know I know the ArtI mention ‑ easy ‑ Here ‑Nor any Placard boast me ‑Itʹs full as Opera

      No one knows that she knows how to do ballet and no one boasts for her. These lines really show that she dances for herself and is independent.

    2. Nor tossed my shape in Eider Balls,Nor rolled on wheels of snow

      I feel like she is saying that she did things her own way and danced for herself and no one else.