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  1. Nov 2022
    1. <button class="button button1">Find Out How We Can Help You</button>

      There seems to be some redundancy in this statement...I don't think you needed it to say "button button1" I'm not even sure you needed 2 button classes, but maybe it doesn't hurt?

    1. t blurry.

      Should this have been an end paragraph and then a beginning paragraph on the next line? I see they both reference your recommendations but maybe an unordered list of bullet points would be more concise.

  2. Oct 2022
    1. Offering talented stylists with varied personalities, outgoing customer service, and an eclectic, fun atmosphere, Hairpins is striving to be one of a kind.</p> <p>By evolving with their clientele and constantly offering the latest trends and services, they are ensuring every visit is a unique one. Hairpins is filled with its own special brand of magic.</p> <p>Come in and sit down, the Hairpins' Girls are waiting for you!

      I don't think you need to specify paragraph with each line. You could add breaks in between to separate them. I could be wrong about this :).

  3. Sep 2022
    1. My name is Gillian!

      Hey Gillian! It's great to get to know you a little bit. Wow that is a lot of school! Super cool. Your paragraph lines are a bit long, so maybe shorten up the line length a bit or add more breaks. (I think we will learning how to do this later).

    1. Hello World

      Hello Gillian! I'm still trying to figure this all out, so this is really a test note :) your coding looks good, though I'm not sure I would know otherwise at this point.