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  1. Aug 2018
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    1. “Come down, dear. Mr. Doran wants to speak to you.”

      An open ending again. The comparison of the couple's different attitudes about this affair makes me guess that Polly might get a bad news in the end.

    2. She felt sure she would win.

      This reminds me of the usage of repetition in Dubliners we discussed in today's class.I think the original idea of this sentence is to show the confidence of Mrs. Mooney, but the repetition here weakens this confidence and shows a kind of uncertainty.

  3. Jul 2018
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    1. “Dinner is on the table, sir!”

      It seems like in this family,only Charles cares about Mr.Neave,who is even not Mr.Neave's real family member (but probably just because of Charles's job).

    2. It was dark in his dressing-room; the window shone pale.

      Mansfield seems to be good at using the contrast between light and dark to show the conflict,which is the bright outside and the lonely inside,like Mr.Neave.

    3. forgotten

      The forgotten Mr.Neave here seems to tell us that his existence in his family is just as negligible as he is in this scene. Is a family with a hard working father but only pleasure-seeking children an ideal family?

    4. “Pardon!” The faint voice sounded surprised. Leila said it again.

      I think the dialogue here is showing vividly how awkward Leila feels, although not a direct way.

    5. “Oh, London’s not much changed,” answered William. “Good old London,” said Bobby, very hearty, spearing a sardine.

      Doesn't that seem to use London to imply that William hasn't changed and yet Isabel has changed a lot?

    6. Suddenly there came a loud screech of laughter and an equally loud “Sh!” They had remembered him.

      I think here we can guess that those servants were probably discussing about the couple.This description can further show the estrangement between William and Isabel, and the loneliness of William at the moment.

    7. the rose-red glow had paled

      As mentioned previously, Isabel used to be William's rose, red and beautiful.However, now the roses paled, which seems like a metaphor to show that Isabel's image in William's mind changed totally.

    8. sentimentality

      I think "sentimentality" appears again("dreadfully sentimental” in the fourth paragraph).So here we can kind of understand why William does care about Isabel throwing those old toys away, probably because it was like Isabel trying to let go those images and feelings in the past and to live a new life now,which seems like she've changed a lot in William's mind.

    9. When he looked up again there were fields, and beasts standing for shelter under the dark trees. A wide river, with naked children splashing in the shallows, glided into sight and was gone again. The sky shone pale, and one bird drifted high like a dark fleck in a jewel.

      I don't think this is a pleasant scene. First,"...glided into sight and was gone again."looks like a kind of dizzy view. Second,“...one bird drifted high like a dark fleck in a jewel.” seems like a metaphor to show a picture of imperfectness.Do these descriptions show his life in his mind or his present feelings?

    10. Really, if the poor pets have to spend their infant years staring at these horrors, one can imagine them growing up and asking to be taken to the Royal Academy

      It seems that Isabel is very unhappy with William's toys for Paddy and Johnny. Also, I guess she might be William's wife or probably his oldest daughter from her tone in the dialogue.

    11. Even her little feet looked as though they scorned to carry her down the steps to us.

      I think here is a use of personification, which makes a vivid image of the scene rise before our eyes.

    12. on the steps of the Casino.

      At the beginning of the story, it shows a surprising comparison. A girl with a beautiful appearance, which makes her quite indestructible, stands on the steps of a casino,where can be a symbol of a luxury and dissipation life. I really want to know what will happen next.

    13. Josephine was silent for a moment. She stared at a big cloud where the sun had been. Then she replied shortly, “I’ve forgotten too.”

      I love this ending.Although it seems like two sisters are being polite to each other, it actually shows that they are both not sure about the future. The sunshine and cloud probably symbolize freedom or hope here. However, in the face of a new life without their father, they seem like a little overwhelmed by the new freedom and don't know what to do with the uncertainty of life.

    14. pale

      I think the word "pale" is frequently appeared in this story, such as being an adjective before the color words and being used to describe Constantia's face.Probably it aims to create an atmosphere with a kind of pale color to highlight the sad tone of the whole story. It might be interesting to analyze it with computational method.

    15. “Well, why didn’t you say so immediately?” Josephine reproached her gently. “How could you expect us to understand, Kate? There are a great many things in this world you know, which are fried or boiled.” And after such a display of courage she said quite brightly to Constantia, “Which do you prefer, Con?”

      I think their dissatisfaction and anger with the servant is a bit like pouring the anger and frustration, which they get from their father, on the servant. Perhaps in the relationship between the master and the servant, it is the only place where they can be a ruler.

    16. “Don’t know?” almost snapped Josephine. “Don’t know a thing like that about your own father, Cyril?”

      The father-son relationship shown here reminds us of the relationship between two girls and their father. This kind of family phenomenon, caused by the estrangement between the child and the father, potentially leads to the personality of the children, which is worth analyzing.For example, Con and Jug are lack of courage and Cyril is a kind of bad-mannered.

    17. But the idea of a little Communion terrified them. What! In the drawing-room by themselves—with no—no altar or anything! The piano would be much too high, thought Constantia, and Mr. Farolles could not possibly lean over it with the chalice. And Kate would be sure to come bursting in and interrupt them, thought Josephine. And supposing the bell rang in the middle? It might be somebody important—about their mourning. Would they get up reverently and go out, or would they have to wait... in torture?

      The omission and repetition here indicate the hesitation, incompleteness of the sentence and lack of courage of the two daughters.It seems like even after their father's death, they are still afraid to do what they want to do.

    18. And proud young Kate, the enchanted princess, came in to see what the old tabbies wanted now.

      This sentence is so interesting! The first half of this sentence is evidently written from the point of view of two old, unhappy women,who expressed their anger and admiration for this proud and young maid,while the latter part of the sentence is written from the eyes of Kate, the maid, who calls those two ladies "tabbies" who frequently ring the bell to upset her.

    19. Josephine arched her spine, pulled up her knees, folded her arms so that her fists came under her ears, and pressed her cheek hard against the pillow.

      Josephine sleeps in the foetal position here, which seems like she is seeking comfort and lack of security.The description of action here probably can show the mood of the character.

    20. It was simply marvellous.

      I think the inspiration of the whole event makes Laura become a real mature girl rather than a girl who only pretends to be mature.It seems like this event disenchants Laura’s idealism and probably makes her understand that it is not one person's sympathy that can save all the people’s lives in the lower class.

    21. she said, copying her mother’s voice. But that sounded so fearfully affected that she was ashamed, and stammered like a little girl,

      Laura is pretending to be mature here, and I am looking forward to seeing her become real mature in the future through latter stories.In addition to this,the idea of letting the child be independent was expressed in the preceding paragraph by Meg's mother.Is “grow up” the theme of this story?

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    1. I dropped her hand, and rose, and took a turn in the room. Every question that I could put had been answered. Every detail that I could desire to know had been placed before me.

      We can know that Franklin wasn't sleepwalking at the time, but what was it that kept him in control and even made him know nothing about it when he woke up?This reminds me of those three indians who came to Lady Verinder’s house and used magical power to confuse a boy to tell them what they wanted. Would Franklin also be hexed by those three indians?

    2. It appeared that Godfrey, far from being discouraged by Rachel’s withdrawal from her engagement to him had made matrimonial advances soon afterwards to another young lady, reputed to be a great heiress. His suit had prospered, and his marriage had been considered as a settled and certain thing. But, here again, the engagement had been suddenly and unexpectedly broken off–owing, it was said, on this occasion, to a serious difference of opinion between the bridegroom and the lady’s father, on the question of settlements.

      Mr Godfrey’s real face is gradually revealed in this part. It seems that what he truly cares about it’s money rather than marriage itself. In addition, his sweet words towards women in the previous part of the story change into a kind of hypocrisy. I think Mr. Godfrey is a character who tells us that we can't judge a person only by his/her appearance because appearances sometimes are not what they seem.

    3. “What do you mean by pitying me?” she asked in a bitter whisper, as she passed to the door. “Don’t you see how happy I am? I’m going to the flower-show, Clack; and I’ve got the prettiest bonnet in London.” She completed the hollow mockery of that address by blowing me a kiss–and so left the room.

      Rachel's moodiness seems bizarre and creepy to me, and I suspect that huge disturbance to one's mind might be one of the verifications of the curse from the moonstone.Of course, I also think that the description of Rachel’s abnormal behavior here may because of Miss Clack's prejudice against her, which magnifies those negative qualities.I have to say,we can vividly feel from this part that a strong subjectivity of the narrative content is a significant feature of using first-person perspective to describe a story.

    4. Neither father nor mother knew more than I knew.

      The author sets Betteredge as the first narrator, who describes most of the story , seems reasonable. Being the Verinders' head servant, Betteredge seems to be trusted by a lot of people, so people are willing to confide in him, which helps him to get a lot of information about the whole event .

    5. She had lived a miserable life, Mr. Betteredge–vile people had ill-treated her and led her wrong–and it hadn’t spoiled her sweet temper. She was an angel.

      It does sadden me when I read this part. I am deeply impressed by this tragic character.

    6. I also think a rose much better worth looking at than a diamond. Where is the gardener, Mr. Betteredge?”

      Lady Verinder shows a mother figure with toughness and bravery, which makes Sergeant Cuff “stood speechless with amazement”. Therefore, I guess in this context, the rose, which is beautiful but also with daunting piercing thorns, seems to imply those beautiful and also respectable and tough women like Lady Verinder. I think, though the author shows many stereotypes about women at that time in the story especially through Betteredge’s narration, some gender stereotypes are debunked by creating characters like Lady Verinder who is sympathetic (gave Rosanna a chance to work in her house), loving and caring for her family and also, especially, with a sense dignity.

    7. People in high life have all the luxuries to themselves–among others, the luxury of indulging their feelings. People in low life have no such privilege. Necessity, which spares our betters, has no pity on us. We learn to put our feelings back into ourselves, and to jog on with our duties as patiently as may be. I don’t complain of this–I only notice it.

      The author devotes a large amount of space to writing those shining points of human nature,such as sympathy,faithfulness and gratefulness,from people at the bottom of society, especially from Gabriel Betteredge and Penelope Betteredge. This might be one of the themes the author wants to convey: the evaluation of a person depends more on his/her true character rather than on the wealth or the social class.

    8. As I got near the shore, the clouds gathered black, and the rain came down, drifting in great white sheets of water before the wind. I heard the thunder of the sea on the sand-bank at the mouth of the bay. A little further on, I passed the boy crouching for shelter under the lee of the sand hills. Then I saw the raging sea, and the rollers tumbling in on the sand-bank, and the driven rain sweeping over the waters like a flying garment, and the yellow wilderness of the beach with one solitary black figure standing on it–the figure of Sergeant Cuff.

      Color description is frequently applied in this paragraph,which helps to depict a dark stormy seaside scene.It also seems to express a profound sense of fear and foreboding. Does the previous negative portrayal of quicksand imply that something bad is going to happen here? In addition,the figure of Sergeant Cuff, mentioned at the end of the paragraph, really makes me nervous and be curious about the development of subsequent stories.

    9. Rosanna

      Rich in negative portrayals of Rosanna’s strange behavior, this seems to deliberately draw protagonists and readers’ attentions to this potentially unpopular girl, in order to create a illusion of she is the thief and conceal a bigger secret under the surface.

    10. June twenty-first, the day of the birthday, was cloudy and unsettled at sunrise, but towards noon it cleared up bravely.

      The cloudy day may be a sign of the worries of yesterday's strange events, and the midday sun may be a sign of the joy of birthday. The change of weather here hints of the changing moods. Using weather to indicate moods is a commonly used function of environmental description in writing.

    11. I looked where she pointed. The tide was on the turn, and the horrid sand began to shiver. The broad brown face of it heaved slowly, and then dimpled and quivered all over. “Do you know what it looks like to ME?” says Rosanna, catching me by the shoulder again. “It looks as if it had hundreds of suffocating people under it–all struggling to get to the surface, and all sinking lower and lower in the dreadful deeps! Throw a stone in, Mr. Betteredge! Throw a stone in, and let’s see the sand suck it down!”

      This description fills Rosanna with mystery.But why does this terrifying image attract her?Perhaps it is an allusion of her personal preference for the dark side of life. It mades me curious about her so much.