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  1. Dec 2021
  2. Nov 2021
  3. Sep 2021
    1. (Note: The author describes the poster's imagery and typography, what the poster denotes.

      I found this statement confusing. "The author describes the poster's imagery, typography, and what the poster denotes" or are you saying the author describes the imagery and typography to explain what the poster denotes.

    2. lengthy

      You may want to capitalize the "l" which is the American rule, the British rule does not.

    1. In our analysis, we will want to consider the larger purpose of the argument, and the constraints it has to work with, or the factors limiting it. 

      The font is smaller on this one section.

    2. to

      "A colon is not normally followed by a capital letter in British usage, though American usage often prefers to use a capital." http://www.sussex.ac.uk/informatics/punctuation/colonandsemi/colon

    1. that

      The word that here would be considered an unnecessary filler. See the rule below: "To decide whether you can omit “that” from a sentence, check how naturally and intelligibly the sentence reads without it. Usually, you can drop “that” if it follows a verb that essentially means “to say.” This omission mimics natural speech and shouldn’t change the meaning of the sentence.

      The children claimed an ice cream break would help them study more effectively.
      She insisted she wasn’t responsible for the houseplant’s untimely death.
      

      However, it’s usually better to keep “that” if other words fall between the verb and the dependent clause.

      The kids also said this morning that a television break would enhance their studying.
      She admitted begrudgingly that she might have contributed to the plant’s demise."
      
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