I feel like this is of up most importance when critiquing while feedback is good it only has an affect if you are respectful about it

This is something I would like o improve on from last project

in my first paper I felt like I used commas too much but it turned out I could use more and benefit from more

I feel like I'm always kinda nervous to use these in fear of using them wrong but after going to the writing center for my first paper they showed how sentences could really benefit from them

bias or brutally honest

In psycology this is known to be perception. We use past knowledge without consciously realizing and apply it to what we see everyday creating a false reality we believe as true

rhetorical question- like asking the reader when the argumentative subject or persuasion is clear?

When being able to connect with the text I find that it not only makes the text more engaging but also makes the author more agreeable .

Main idea concept feels like it's been drilled into my head since like 3rd grade. However it was hard to ignore erorrs. We actually once found an error in a piece of writing about pacemakers and when I went home I asked my Dad about it since he worked for a pace making company at the time. He concluded the information was in fact incorrect

I find that looking at a screen and trying to read is MUCH more difficult than having a physical copy

I like this organizational process

I've always thought being more intune with the text, not just skimming?

The compliment sandwich: 1. postive feedback, 2. something they could improve on, 3. then a compliment.

this is nice to do along the way and at the end

this is harder to apply to work (or simply be okay with mistakes) when you take into the account of a grade being associated with it.

I've never looked at it like this, I always assumed more of an formative info text

I cant decide if this is super clever or super sketchy

This is uncomforting

The digital creation of you in your device

this reminds me of a book i read called Wildwood by Colin Meloy. It was set in a fictionary world and in the beginning of the book there was an illustrated map which made the book much easier to understand when the author was describing the location of the characters and the interactions between them

this reminds me of "show don't tell" that teachers told us to do when writing

I think I struggle with this in my writing- feeling pressured to find more and ending up with a piece of writing that isn't as strong as a result

I like this elaboration on the quote

I like collecting quotes that I think are worthy and I really appreciate this one

I feel like this can be hard coming into college from high school with such a structured paper expectation. Being able to take an assignment in many directions can be so freeing but also overwhelming

I feel as though it can be hard to go back to basics after realizing the big picture.

I think there is a big risk in this but also I can think of celebreties who get a lot of support when they come out about mental health and their personal stories

I think this can be considered uncomforting and disturbing

I think this is applicable to life and relationships/ interactions outside the internet as well