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  1. Oct 2024
    1. That completes thesteps and then repeat the process three times for each beverage i

      This isn't in past tense, and its also in a step by step process. Should be restated at "The steps are then repeated."

    2. 1Density

      This title isn't the most formal, doesn't quite make sense.

    1. Next measure and record the mass of the beaker using the balance. This processwas repeated 2 more times for a total of 3

      It goes from steps back to past tense. It doesn't entirely make sense given that this should all be in past tense and not in a step by step format like how this sentence describes. The first sentence is in present tense to begin with, instead it should be "The mass of the beaker was then recorded using a balance."