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Finally, the assumptions of utilizing a multiple linear regression model may have limited the study data and conclusions that can be drawn from modeling as a linear model assumes a clear cut relationship between a predictor and the outcome.
This sentence is a bit confusing. Consider rewording (e.g., "Finally, the assumptions inherent in a multiple linear regression model may have constrained the data and the conclusions, given that linear models presume a clear, linear relationship between predictors and the outcome variable.")
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questions
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distrust
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Similarly
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safety
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For instance difference ,as a predictor of feelings of distrust and lack of safety in one’s community being a person of color was only associated with a 0.13 point increase in scores while being nonsignificant with a p value of 0.6.
This sentence is a bit confusing. Consider rewording (e.g., "For instance, being a person of color was associated with only a 0.13-point increase in reported distrust and lack of safety, a difference that was not statistically significant (p = 0.6).")
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Similarly,
I really like the way you break up the blocks of writing by listing them with their corresponding code chunks. This is definitely something I want to include in my report as I revise for my final submission!
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significant
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consider making this part after the comma a new sentence
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well
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average
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safety
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consider making this part after the comma a new sentence
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safety
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Figure 2.4
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women
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6/10)
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Overall
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or possibly even a slight negative relationship as social status increases, feelings of safety decrease.
This end of the sentence here gets a bit confusing. Consider rewording (e.g., "Alternatively, for females, increases in social status appear to be largely unrelated to feelings of safety, with a potential slight negative trend in which greater social status corresponds to lower perceived safety.")
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Alternatively
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males
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females
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safety
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could make this an em dash if wanted!
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dataset
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variable
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status
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variables
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could replace this comma with "and" if wanted!
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overlap
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However, plots visualizing social status in relation to community and non community variables revealed more variation
I would consider rewording this topic sentence to help the flow out a bit. For example, you could say, "Unlike the largely flat patterns observed for political beliefs, social status demonstrated more distinct variation in perceived community trust and safety across genders."
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I wasn't sure how to do this in my own report, so now seeing this code and how you approached it is super helpful to inspire revisions for my final report!
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#explanation:
These explanations are super helpful for the reader due to their depth (something I will definitely place more emphasis on in my revisions now that I realize their significance)!
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Quatrics
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multiple linear regression
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dataset
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sociodemographic
just change this to "sociodemographics"
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of
delete this "of" to fix the grammatical flow of this sentence!
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