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This seems to be a lexis used within your discourse community. If it isI would go back and make it clear to the audience this is one of the lexis used within the DC. A quote by Murray " The writer does plan, but keeps adapting those plans to what is discovered on the page." A bit of revising might help you figure out what you feel you might want to change or add in this essay.
he price list, another genre that Bridgory cleaner uses, is the most important printed text, after the Bridgory cleaner family rules, used by the tailors. The price lists sometimes bring some discussion, this is where the tailor must show his ability to convince.
The price list is a great example of a genre and you clearly explained what is contained within the genre.
, I was so confused due to it being my first week at my job, I didn’t know the lingo or lexis of my discourse community. That is where I knew that each and every discourse community has its similar yet very different and diverse lexis, lexis in a discourse community is very important in order to get around your community.
I think you should include which lexis are being used in your discourse community and explain the meaning behind them. It gives the audience more insight on your community. A quote by Murray
he genres my discourse community utilizes daily are blueprints
This genre just caught my eye and maybe you can slightly touch base ion how a blueprint works as a genre.
As an interior design company, the goal focuses on providing our customers with the most at home-luxurious experience. As a company we want to create a comfortable setting and inviting experience towards our clients proposal. We get this goal across by keeping everything on track, each and everyone has a role to execute. Our company’s president and his wife have discovered the most effective way to utilize communication to complete our projects.
Christine Think you did great job on describing what exactly your DC does its clear.
In it, I asked similar questions to those used for the University of Dayton coaches. (Interview questions are attached as Appendix A.) I asked questions about how coaches go about reading their players and the game and also about the coach’s personal history and motivation for coaching.
He made sure to ask similar questions in order to be able to accurately compare their techniques.
I recorded football coaches at the University of Dayton during their pregame speeches and interviewed those coaches afterwards; I also interviewed a coaching graduate assistant at the University of Cincinnati via email
he introduces his method in this case it is an interviewing process he has with different coaches.
As aforementioned, discourse communities are complex
There is a quote by David Murray "They read as an outsider". When editing revise it as if you didn't belong to the DC, this way you can see what the audience may or may not grasp from your essay.
The terms we are familiarized with are; vpn, offline, kda, smurf
You included lexis which is good. If you want maybe explain what some of them mean. Your audience can learn something.
Elo boosting in an analogy would be using someone else’s body to climb up a ladder. The customer pays to reach a certain rank of his choice, more higher equals more expensive. Once they purchase it, they give us the details of their accounts to log on, and we start as soon as possible.
David I think you can break down the things your discourse community does a bit more clearly for the part of the audience who has no knowledge on gaming.