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  1. Nov 2020
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      Maybe a little more explanation in this paragraph that is more than just paraphrasing from the quote in the previous paragraph. Honestly, I think this could be merged with the previous paragraph to conclude the explanation of the quote.

    1. The music in the annotation “Introducing: You!” has a more upbeat tone as the reader is introduced to the main character and they begin to explore the ship. It gets the reader into a positive mood to start the character’s day and it persuades the reader to carry on in the story. 

      Music definitely is so important in games because it adds to the experience for the reader, so this is a really strong point!