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Maybe remove the parenthetical here?
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- Jan 2024
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berkeley.pressbooks.pub berkeley.pressbooks.pub
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and
This sentence would benefit from some copy edits to clarify the clauses. My suggestion would be to leave this and and use ; to set off the previous clauses (and remove any confusing ands)
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- Oct 2022
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pressbooks.pub pressbooks.pub
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Meet Margo (desired patron)
copyright notice
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Meet Robert (current patron)
copyright notice
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Current vehicle (Buick Lacrosse)
Are there CC licensed car images we can use?
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Loew’s Theatre in Louisville, Kentucky circa 1933
copyright notice
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The Kentucky Center for the Performing Arts in Downtown Louisville.
copyright notice
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- Sep 2019
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en.wikipedia.org en.wikipedia.org
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the result of close partnership between both and thereafter, her performance turned more rocker.
This paragraph needs to be revised to add citations and to improve grammar and comprehension. Reads as if it was translated from another language
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Other artists and bands associated with the Jovem Guarda include Eduardo Araújo (and his late wife, Sylvinha Araújo), Martinha, Renato & Seus Blue Caps, Os Incríveis, Golden Boys, Os Vips, Vanusa and The Fevers.
possibly move into a list?
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#52 on the year's charts.
Needs Citation
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- Aug 2019
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en.wikipedia.org en.wikipedia.org
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a few months of many years in London and participated in Popular Concerts with Joachim and Piatti.
Should this have a citation?
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Austria's highest musical honor.
She must have been quite good to get this honor!
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