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  1. Jan 2022
    1. but Doja now is beginning to disappear in the pop music void, instead of remaking it in her image. Rather than playing into her strengths, she showcases her weaknesses. One of the many differences between Doja Cat and Ariana Grande is vocal caliber, and on “I Don’t Do Drugs” Grande’s voice outshines Doja Cat’s with ease. Even when she unleashes a bit of her signature rap tone in “Payday,” the uber-online weirdo is out-weirded by featured artist Young Thug.

      This whole section is a mex of 2nd hand and qualitative.

    2. nto the divine feminine trope, with a very hollow look into women’s abilities to lead with intellect as well as blow minds in the bedroom.

      2nd hand evidence

    3. he kept fans on their toes with a series of ever-transforming live performances, while essentially writing the playbook for how to capitalize on having a song blow up on TikTok.

      1st/2nd hand again, depending on if he went to concerts or events!

    4. Planet Her is built upon the quintessential bop: a song that’s easy on the ears, something you can dance to, and non-controversial through and through. Much of it sounds no different than what’s landed on the top of the charts in recent years: The beats in Planet Her mirror those found in music by artists like Bad Bunny,

      claim of value and fact

    5. With “Ain’t Shit” casting light on what’s missing, Planet Her leaves something to be desired, an album with one too many songs that blend into the existing pop noise.

      Hasty generalization.

    6. but Doja now is beginning to disappear in the pop music void, instead of remaking it in her image.

      Slippery slope: This is a HUGE claim that really isn't supported at all..

    7. As successful these influences are, it presents problems for Doja Cat, because she didn’t pioneer these now-popularized sounds, just copy and pasted them.

      post hoc ergo propter hoc and hasty generalization: SImilarity doesn't equal copying especially when Doja LITERALLY collaborates with these artists in the album and in songs that have been criticised. Of course their going to seem similar to another person if that person is in it...

    8. Planet Her is built upon the quintessential bop: a song that’s easy on the ears, something you can dance to, and non-controversial through and through. Much of it sounds no different than what’s landed on the top of the charts in recent years:

      red herring: This really isn't relevant at all. Just because the music is based on a "bop" doesn't take away from the fact that her music holds a deep meaning and it is very empowering to many of people.

    9. So while the pleasant-enough arrangements may make for an effective summer record, Planet Her lacks the originality Doja made her name on, and no amount of stunning and spacey visuals (as in the music video for “Need To Know”) can make the songs better than they are.

      red herring: the visuals are used to enhance the songs meaning. It seems as though the only real criticisms he even has is that he doesn't like that Doja is creating songs that appeal to a wide audience.

    10. Here, Doja Cat loses her individuality in an obvious effort to make more commercial TikTok bops, already achieved on early single “Kiss Me More.”

      slippery slope, straw man, and bandwagon: A clear assumption with no real evidence is made here. Doja cat can grown as an artist and try new things and take steps away from her old music. This makes her no less talented and make her old music no more valid than her new music. It really shows how experimental and brave she is actually.

    11. Many of the sexually charged lyrics throughout the album continue to float on the surface like pool toys, fun and perfect for the summer, but unfit for reaching any depths.

      Style over substance: Just because something is sexual doesn't make it inherently "bad". Many people find sex to be empowering and beautiful, you assume that these sexual lines have no real meaning.

    12. In the opening track, “Woman,” she plays into the divine feminine trope, with a very hollow look into women’s abilities to lead with intellect as well as blow minds in the bedroom.

      straw man: The words hold so much more meaning than this. It is a song about women empowerment and it is used as an album opener to show the power and strength of women.

    13. Doja Cat throws what she knows to the wayside, opting to dive into the crystalline pool of predictable pop sounds. The problem with such clear waters is that you can see straight to the bottom—and Doja Cat is wading in the shallow end.

      style over substance

    14. Doja Cat throws what she knows to the wayside, opting to dive into the crystalline pool of predictable pop sounds. The problem with such clear waters is that you can see straight to the bottom—and Doja Cat is wading in the shallow end. ReviewsC+Planet HerArtistDoja CatLabelRCA/Kemosabe Records

      Ambiguity: The author not only hasn't introduced his real topic yet, but the connection is also rendered senseless because he was just praising doja cat.

    15. wasn’t the result of some sensational, game-changing track crafted through years of dedicated artistry,

      unfalsifiability: whos to say this is even true?

    16. Doja Cat’s first breakthrough into the mainstream music scene wasn’t the result of some sensational, game-changing track crafted through years of dedicated artistry, but with a goofy song called “Mooo!”

      Partially claim of fact and partially band wagon with opinion.

    17. Doja Cat loses herself in the pop space of Planet Her

      The argument as a whole is a classical Oration in style. It uses something similar to a 5-paragraph formula and attempts to prove it's claim with evidence from the album. Additionally, it attempts to prove it's claim by drawing comparisons to her former album.