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  1. Oct 2016
    1. She says she is Jewish and from Toronto and claims the right to write on salsabecause of her mixed ethnic culinary experiences.

      Interesting outlook, race and being true to who you are is authentic. I think in a perfectly authentic world people wouldn't see color, gender or nationality.

    2. danceworld of salsa provides an excellent case in point. Salsa, which in Spanish meanssauce, is a mixture of several Latin dance forms and has attracted dancers frommany non-Latin ethnicities. Studying salsa dance clubs in London, Urquia (2004)found that such outside patrons regularly engaged in inventive authenticity-workto show that they have the ‘right’ to dance salsa

      This shows that authenticity comes in many forms and is an artist goal. Originally leads to authenticity.

    1. In this paragraph I will be using the works from Morgan and McCann to illustrate the importance of rap as both a political and social expression but also to point emphasis to the fact that the “mark of criminality” has been rendered a masculine narrative not embodying the experiences and struggles of black women. We can see this glossing over at the beginning of McCann’s work as he focuses in on the post-Cold War politics of the Reagan administration and how there was a heavy push to mass incarcerate Black men. Morgan says that black women are always pushed to the sidelines in these re-tellings of history to embody the political landscape because the voices of the struggle were seen as collective cry between black men through their bars. McCann even admits that this type of symbolism, i.e. the goals and signification of “gangsta” rap, were the fantasies of masculine bravado. The problem with this is then that the women are pushed to the margins and their voices are spoken for because the narrative of the hood encapsulate their experiences. The danger in this is that it gives a one-sided view point that could never reach the political and social aims of the black community where a large demographic weren’t incorporated in the grammar of rap to articulate their thoughts and feelings on the poor conditions and treatment by the government on black communities. However, both Morgan and McCan agree that rap became and still is this break away narrative of using language against itself [OK! does Morgan use the concept/ vocabulary of “signifying”?] to break a social order in order to bring to light the frustrations within the community over the overtly racist and *sexist system. Morgan agrees that there is a voice in rap for black women but it is one of communal accountability to not privilege those more masculine accounts of transgression and freedom but an intersection of both the masculine and feminine perspective. Jaz–So, then, the potential “better politics” that McCann is thinking about at the end of his essay needs to involve an understanding of how the mark of criminality is gendered?  I could be persuaded! 
      1. The claim is strong and the paraphrasing of the evidence supports your claim quite nicely. African American women aren't always given the credit they deserve, and this is a theme not only in history but as well as in modern day rap culture.
      2. The evidence presented is well chosen, even though there is no quotes included the paraphrasing is extremely well written and to the point. It supports your claim 100% and if you continue with such a strong evidence your essay will be very strong.
    1. N.W.A.’s song “F*ck the Police” asserts a profound position of fighting against the oppression of African Americans in the late Twentieth Century, despite the negative, and even combative, diction and tone of the song.
      1. The argument is strong because there are two different perspectives presented between the violent lyrics. One that it is a form of art and a healthy outlet and one is that the hateful language and violent context is a crime in itself.
      2. The evidence included will create a strong claim and the short and to the point quotes included convey the misunderstanding and injustice well.
      3. The explanations for the sources are clear and will create a good argument for your paper.
      4. The structure is well organized and well thought out. I would focus and explain the "social revolution" in detail and how it is perceived in both perspectives.

      Sorry I wrote more and then it got deleted :)

  2. Sep 2016
    1. itself a repeated motif in poetry

      I think repeating things can be a powerful tool and make the song or poem more influential.

    2. Dylan is a songwriter, nog a poet'

      Many songs are poetic so maybe they go hand and hand,

    1. one-stop shop for the general-interest, budget-mindedconsumer.

      Interesting claim, but i agree, why would people use websites they have to pay for if youtube is cheaper with a more variety?

    2. “The notion that a song has to sell in order to be a hit feels a little two or three yearsago to me,”

      Because of technology this is clearly not sure anymore. People can post their songs on vine and twitter and have other people sharing it to spread popularity.

    3. By now your Facebook feed is flooded with these videos. The charm is wearing off.A backlash is brewing.

      When the motivation and influence is gone, the cyber back lash begins. If the video didn't have a clear point and purpose how long does it stay popular?

    1. I have therefore altogether declined to enter regularly upon this defence; yet I am sensible, that there would be something like impropriety in abruptly obtruding upon the Public, without a few words of introduction, Poems so materially different from those upon which general approbation is at present bestowed.

      they say

  3. Aug 2016
    1. keenly interested to find out that others see the real differently from us.

      I agree to a point. I think it is human nature and mostly everyone recognizes that nobody is completely the same and we strive to find out why and to become a better world. Not everyone is interest in differences or sees them as a good thing, some people can't see past their own mindset because of a false feeling of superiority.