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  1. Mar 2020
  2. hamiltondiged.blogs.bucknell.edu hamiltondiged.blogs.bucknell.edu
  3. hamiltondiged.blogs.bucknell.edu hamiltondiged.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. I’m so blue

      It has been widely documented that George III suffered from some form of mental illness - which might have been porphyria or bipolar disorder. The medical treatments of the time were what we might consider barbaric, and the way the doctors treated George's ailments probably made them worse.

    2. King George

      George III was personified by the colonist (and in Hamilton) as all that was wrong and evil about British rule in the 18th century. It's debatable .... but that is another story entirely.

    1. ELIZA

      This is a curious self-statement by Eliza, who almost always identifies herself in the play as having value if/when she's thinking about Hamilton.

    2. How long have you known?

      This reference only makes sense if you see the play (although it becomes clear later in the song). Hamilton arrives home and sees Eliza, who is visibly pregnant.

  4. Feb 2020
    1. By counting the number of songs that Angelica appears in and analyzing the lyrics it is to be assumed by the audience that she has feelings that go beyond those of a sister-in-law. Hamiltons’ influence on Angelica is one that shapes the show and Hamiltons’ relationship with his wife. 

      Where are your Voyant visualizations? The essay was supposed to showcase your use of the tools in your analysis. Without them you haven't completed the assignment.

  5. lancianohumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu lancianohumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. or example, this voyant tool shows on the right side of  the screen the usages of important words between acts 1 and acts 2.

      You've actually not demonstrated using one tool ... you just show the dashboard without demonstrating word choices.

    2. In addition to this, it is very easy to see that there is a serious link because of the tools given and the repeated name usage of the two characters.

      I'm not sure what you mean here. Which tools are you looking at?

    3. This conclusion can easily be identified through the voyant tool ‘cirrus’, which elicits the two most frequently used words are ‘Hamilton’ and ‘Burr’ (Voyant Tool).

      But in the dashboard view you link to, you're just saying how often those words appear (as with all of those with "Speaker" tags. ) Also, I asked you not to use the Cirrus tool, since that is just an easy introduction.

    1. Without using Voyant to visualize this process, I would never have realized the connections and differences between Act 1 and Act 2 in relation to the characters.

      Ok. Good. Continue to build on that in future.

    2. This simple visualization allows me to infer that Thomas Jefferson was basically uninvolved in the first act, while he had a much more prominent role in the second act. The same principle applies when I searched the term “Burr” which was used 162 times in the first act and 182 times in the second act.  Thus, telling me that the character essentially had an equal role in both acts of the play, just slightly more in the second.

      True, but you might want to choose characters that are both in both acts (remember that Jefferson isn't introduced until the second act - in the first act that character focus is on Lafayette)

    3. For this reflection, my goal is to conduct a differential reading of Hamilton and write about my experience.  To begin the process I will upload Act 1 and Act 2 of Hamilton’s scripts and observe the visualizations that appear on Voyant while also listening to the soundtrack of the play.  I will be concentrating my attention on the words and phrases that I see in Voyant and the words and phrases I hear when listening to the complex range of songs. There are two main questions that I seek to answer within this reflection.  The first, is a certain character or group of characters present in some sections of the play more than others? The second, is there a way to connect those character presentations to words or word clusters that I see as defining their impact on Alexander Hamilton and/or on the play?

      Excellent introduction of method and analysis!

    1. In all, the tools available on Voyant have many many ways of telling readers deeper meanings and relationships between characters.  By doing this, we can better understand and interpret the text in ways that give us different perspectives than we would have otherwise gotten.

      Your reflection is very vague and general. Remember to be specific in presenting word forms and/or trends across a text, and explaining to the reader which words formed your analysis.

    2. Then, the microsearch tool could be used to see where and when characters are mentioned to see their relevance throughout parts of the play.

      Microsearch will only properly follow one word and where it appears in a corpus (you can't see a contrasting pattern through this tool).

    3. If it happens often, it is likely they have a strong relationship, and depending on some other variables, a positive and mutually respectful relationship. 

      I'm not sure that you can pursue this properly (because they are in songs together theirs is a positive and respectful relationship?)

    4. If it’s all or mostly all positive things being said, it is logical to assume those characters have a positive and maybe even close or romantic relationship.

      Ok! What types of positive words might they use? Do you have examples?

    1. The data collected from both sets of data in Voyant are contributions to the argument that text analysis is a beneficial method to fully understanding the text. In this case, text analysis has presented that the character of Alexander Hamilton was more frequent in act one versus act two. This was because the musical introduction consisted of introducing Hamilton to the audience. On the other hand, Aaron Burr was more frequent in act two versus act one because this segment of the musical contained the climax of the musical, Hamilton and Burr’s duel.

      Ok, but you haven't pursued the relationship between the two men - which is something you could have done very well with Voyant.

    2. In both sets of data, Hamilton is shown to be more frequent than Burr in both acts.

      It's not clear what you mean here. To be more frequent in what way? Do you mean that one appears more than the other, one is referred to more than the other (and if so, what are you using to demonstrate this difference?)

    3. According to Pennebacker’s statements, I would argue that Alexander Hamilton is a high-status individual. This claim is supported as the pronouns that are associated with Hamilton throughout the musical are the pronouns that are affiliated with high-status individuals (we, you, and I).

      But doesn't Hamilton refer to himself all the time? (or to himself in the third person)? It would be very helpful if you could demonstrate particular songs that demonstrate your hypothesis. Or, better, since this is your thesis, compare between Hamilton and Burr in terms of their uses of pronouns.

    4. For instance, in the first act the most frequent words were Hamilton, Burr, Company, Eliza, and Washington. Whereas in the second act the most frequent words were I’m, know, da, Hamilton, and wait.

      I think you're looking at act 1 with speaker tags ... there would be no reason for the word "Company" to appear otherwise.

    5. Furthermore, the data that was presented by Voyant when the speaker tags were removed were parallel in terms of duration to the speaker tags results.

      Do you mean that when the speaker tags were removed that the percentage length for each act remained the same?

  6. donohuehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu donohuehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. From paying close attention to these examples, Aaron Burr appears to show status and power over Hamilton in the song “My Shot”.

      Unclear - is Burr paying close attention, or are you?

    2. I included speech tags when I used Voyant Tools and was able to determine the relationships between certain characters and the influence they have on one another. 

      good

    1. At the beginning of the play, during the song “My Shot” Hamilton compares himself and his fellow revolutionaries, Lauren, Lafayette, and Mullington, to their country

      Where are the Voyant tools to show your evidence?

  7. sutherlandhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu sutherlandhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. In the differential reading of Hamilton, I discovered that there are some characters who appear significantly more than others throughout this play.

      Reflection essays are supposed to be 500 words in length. This one is less than 200 words long.

    2. I used the word cloud to discover that Hamilton and Burr were two of the top five most used words in the dialogue

      Alex - the instructions were that you NOT use the Cirrus in your analysis.

    1. I believe Burr plays a very important role in the play and certainly a very crucial part in Hamilton’s life.

      Ok, but you've already stated this. If you're going to restate, then you should build upon it with more evidence (e.g, not only is he ... but more importantly he is ...)

    2. You can notice that in segment 9 in the second act, in Voyant it shows a spike in the trend graph, showing that Burr has more dialogue in that section which is when he kills Hamilton.

      sentence structure, grammar.

  8. bridgehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu bridgehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. While they are all strong aspects of the site, the timeline is very text-heavy and can be confusing.

      Your observation is a good one ... it can be difficult to manage data presentation, and so we need to think about how we're trying to do it as well as what we're trying to present.

    2. Historians would benefit greatly from the use of TEI. It would allow them to look at older documents in one spreadsheet rather than have to deal with damaging actual documents.

      True. Some of my best colleagues in DH are historians.

    3. For example, in the song ‘My Shot’ Alexander Hamilton refutes Magnus’ point by saying “I’m just like my country, I’m young scrappy and hungry and I’m not throwing away my shot.” He talks about his country, the United States, to overlook where he came from and solidify himself as an American.

      Good!

  9. cushinghumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu cushinghumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. Text-encoding may help us think differently about Hamilton in this course because we will be able to better understand the roots and historical contexts of some of the lyrics Miranda decides to use in his songs.

      Yes, indeed. I hope that we'll be able to tie together text and context!

    1. This is the Hamilton Miranda wanted the world to see, when in reality if we look at facts and history, this is an inaccurate representation of the man and his ideas.

      Yes. The challenge is always in looking at evidence and then analyzing it. I don't know whether Magness or Miranda is correct, but they both certainly turn the subject to their own ends!

  10. mittmanhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu mittmanhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. Thus, a diverse cast, rap basis, and specific dialogue was vital for our country’s well-being.

      Do you mean that through the rap and diversity in the musical we can capture Hamilton's true vision, or that it changes our connection with the subject matter?

  11. mittmanhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu mittmanhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. In this embedded visualization from Voyant, it presents a text analysis of both speakers speeches. With that being said, I agree with the authors argument that Obama distance himself from Wright to promote his message.

      Good

  12. orzellhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu orzellhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
  13. orzellhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu orzellhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. For example, if someone were to use TEI to analyze someone’s autobiography, it could help find realizations about that person that were not even mentioned in their story. 

      Indeed!

    2. This was surprising to me when I read it because, obviously Hamilton is an immigrant himself, and the fact that he began to develop such strong nationalist ideals to the point where he essentially discriminated against people not born in the United States is very odd to me. 

      Agreed. I find I have to reshape my understandings of the world with each new piece I read, movie I watch, song I listen to ...

    1. I did not like the timeline just because since things overlap I found that harder to follow and I am more likely to miss information that is important.

      It's a testament to how we all respond differently to information.

    2. I think that text encoding will help us think differently about the course because since the musical is so complex there are certain things that as humans we will not be able to pick up on but a computer will and it will bring a new perspective.

      Yes - and/or you will be able to tie those analyses together.

    3. Magness almost alines with burr and his view of Hamilton as an immigrant. Magness points out all of the times that Hamilton is called an immigrant almost to prove to that in the context that it is said it is not endearing.

      How might you clarify this?

  14. stoopshumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu stoopshumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. I think anyone in the digital humanities that is trying to perform analysis on reading should use TEI. 

      I'll be interested to learn what you think because of your interest in English literature.

  15. torreshumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu torreshumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. After looking at specific song lyrics, yes we can see some vulgar words but I believe that with this rap style, we can feel the intensity of the situation. In these specific songs, the words used have a stronger meaning, giving the situation more importance.

      Well done.

    2. In Obama’s speech, you are able to see how he mainly talks about what the United States Constitution was made for and how his purpose is to unify the nation even more than what the Constitution did. in Wright’s speech, he focuses more on examples where African Americans have experienced racial abuse, transmitting to the audience what the average African American has had to deal with. Both speeches are incredible works, but attack the audience in different ways.

      Good!

  16. torreshumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu torreshumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. The most compelling format from the website for me is the “Interaction map,” the reason for this is because it gives a description of specific people in different locations, making it a very interesting way of accessing information, creating it in a sort-of “fun-way” for all the audience.

      I feel the same. I respond to spatial visualizations, and I look forward to that module of the course.

    2. ext-encoding might help us to think differently about the Hamilton play because we may be able to find specific trends in words that give a double meaning in something we have not caught, or better understand the use of words in different situations.

      Agreed. We should find a way to analyze those.

    3. Hamilton was not an angel that we can say, he had an affair and all, so people like Magness who see all the flaws in someone that is praised, may annoy them that the public is not fully aware of the type of person they are

      Yes - it can be hard to distinguish between heroic behaviour and hero-worship.

  17. cushinghumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu cushinghumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. For example, Burr often sings negatively about Hamilton during the play, which indicates he never understood why Hamilton received such praise from other characters. Therefore, Burr used his skepticism to influence Hamilton to answer his questions and defend himself. 

      Great!

    2. Burr and Hamilton appear near each other 154 times in Act One and 101 times in Act Two.

      Interesting that the frequency for each character is so similar!

    3. In Voyant Tools, I uploaded the texts from both Act One and Act Two in one tab, but also made two tabs where I separated the Act One and Act Two texts.  In the combined tab, I used the Collocates Tool to determine if there were any character connections and the number of times their names appeared near one another throughout the play. 

      Good!

    4. singing above or higher

      Do you mean the key in which the character sings, or a kind of emphasis of one character singing more frequently? Be more specific.

  18. bridgehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu bridgehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. If another person makes us exuberantly happy, furiously angry, or deeply sad, we often can’t stop thinking about him or her…if the speaker is thinking about a friend, expect high rates of third-person singular pronouns.”

      Good.

    2. When we separate the text into act 1 and act 2 we can look at the love story aspect of Hamilton. In the first act, Elizabeth/Eliza, Hamilton’s wife is mentioned a total of 18 times and has a relative frequency of around 1,669.

      Good!

    3. we can see how the plot changes just from looking at character names.

      Are you rooting this argument in the version of the corpus with speech tags? If so, is there a distinction between how many times are character sings (e.g., Lafayette) and how important they are to the plot?

    4. Although, in the second act, he becomes Hamilton’s #1 problem.

      Style: maybe word this as "In the second act, however, he becomes Hamilton's main problem."

    1. This is true in the case of Jefferson, Lafayette, and Hamilton for the fact that the second act is shorter than the first.

      See above ... you have made a different argument about Lafayette and Jefferson.

    2. Hamilton is still the most used word but since the second act is shorter it therefore decreases in frequency. Also, the frequency of Burr increase from the first to second act.

      So if act 2 is shorter than act 1, and that is the reason for the lesser frequency of Hamilton's name, can you apply the same thing to Burr? is there more density in terms of total number of words in each act and total number of times Hamilton and Burr are referred to?

    3. Therefore, the characters are basically not mentioned at all in the acts that they are not involved in.

      Good point. I can think of only one instance in act 2 when Jefferson refers to Lafayette in the context of accusing Hamilton of being a false friend to him (that Hamilton had promised to be France's ally, but doesn't seem to be that now). As far as I recall there is no reference to Jefferson in act 1 at all.

    1. Having my grandparents be immigrants from Italy has taught me many things.

      Style: flip this sentence, so that it emphasizes your grandparents' role, e.g.: 'My grandparents immigrated from Italy in [?]; this has taught me ...'

    2. “What’s your name, man?” 500-word autobiography in the style of your choosing Write in complete sentences and full paragraphs; proofread spelling, grammar, punctuation. Add at least three images (can be photos, graphics, memes …) that you think to present your personality, perspective, or life-experience, Add at least two contextualized links to websites that you check frequently that demonstrate your worldview.

      No need to repeat the prompt here. Make sure not to include in future essays.

    1. Throughout my life, I believe everything has played a significant role in preparing me for the real world and now this experience in college will make me more of a professional and prepared to go out and work.

      Style: there are some ways in which you could strengthen this last section to emphasize how your experiences have prepared you for what comes next.

    2. I had to drive to different parts of the island searching for places with Wi-Fi in order to study. I even had to study all of my summer of 2018 and I had periods where I would be studying for around 12 to 15 hours a day trying to go ahead in workload or catchup.

      That must have been so frightening and frustrating.

    3. I played High School Tennis, I traveled to the U.S. to play nationals, and I was also part of the National Davis Cup Team.

      Sentence structure: no need to capitalize high school tennis unless it is a formal team. Place a conjunction between tennis and I (so it reads, 'high school tennis, and I). Start a new sentence after nationals.

    4. I would live with a tennis academy and study in The Palmas Academy. During that period, I played Junior Davis Cup for Puerto Rico in the Dominican Republic and El Salvador,

      Wow! Impressive!!

    1. .

      Well-written essay. My only recommendation would be in future work to think about breaking your text into paragraphs. There are some natural breaks here that would be emphasized by "chunking" the text.

    2. My grandparents on my dad’s side of the family live in New Canaan along with a slew of my aunts, uncles, and cousins.

      The New Canaan vs. Darien rivalry continues! ;-)

    1. Finally, the championship game came and we played just about perfectly. We beat the second best team in the section by almost 30 points.  The feeling of holding the trophy was amazing and one I’ll never forget.

      I like the way you build tension here. Until the last sentence I assumed you were going to lose in spite of everything!

    2. with relative ease once we started getting used to the team.

      Do you mean that you needed to get to know one another as a team, or that you were comparing yourselves to another team that you needed to understand in order to win against them?

    3. Basketball is what I really stuck with in high school since I suffered a serious shoulder injury which prevented me from throwing baseballs as well as I used to.  After this, I really dedicated myself to getting better at basketball. Being on the shorter side, I was always at a disadvantage. This really helped me in the long-run, however. I worked on things that helped me get around the height disadvantage and worked on my speed, quickness, shooting, and ball-handling.  Despite all of this, I always found it difficult to earn playing time on my school teams. I took this as a challenge and an opportunity to keep improving.

      I really admire your tenacity!

  19. donohuehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu donohuehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. I started to enjoy learning about current events which influenced me to start checking the news and learn more about the world (https://www.nytimes.com/).

      Unclear. Is this because of your sister's influence?

    2. She often says that one of her biggest accomplishments is the fact that she has taught me how to be a respectful, honest and caring young man.

      Sentence structure: 'She often says that one of her biggest accomplishments has been teaching to be a respectful, honest, and caring young man.' or something like that

    3. My family has transformed my identity to become a hardworking and caring individual and I am so thankful of how close and connected we are with each other. 

      That is a great thing to learn about all of you. Sounds like you have a wonderful family!

    4. helped me through my problems and has provided me with all the opportunities I ever needed to succeed.

      Style: perhaps stronger if verbs were 'helping' and 'providing'

    5. During a snowstorm on the night of December 29th, 2000, I was born as Andrew Thomas Donohue with blue eyes and brown hair. I was born the youngest of three where I was given an older brother and sister and brought to my new home in Roseland, New Jersey.

      Great intro from a narrative point of view. Tweak for stronger style: 'There was a snowstorm the night of December 29, 2000 ... and that was the night Andrew Thomas Donohue chose to be born ...' or something clever like that.

  20. baberhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu baberhumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. There were two main reasons on why I decided to spent my next four years at Bucknell. The first being that my high school and Bucknell have so many similarities.

      Sentence structure - watch out for sentence stubs. You could shape these two sentences into three that would be more seamless.

    2. I really love competition which is why I have been addicted to sports from a young age.

      Sentence structure - comma needed here: 'competition, which'

    3. My sophomore year I came in second place in a short video contest which was published in the New York Times.

      Awesome! I would really love to see the film sometime!

    1. heartbreak

      What about fishing is heartbreaking? You point at an interesting drama here (as well as below, when you speak briefly of 'bad trips'). It would make your essay stronger if you gave more detail.

    2. I’ve faced adversity in this sport that 99% of athletes have not encountered, and I say this with extreme confidence.

      Do you mean athletes in other sports, or the other 99% of wrestlers?

    3. Wrestling is the reason I am here at Bucknell today. Wrestling is about fifty percent of the reason I am the man I am today, that other fifty percent rightfully belongs to my parents.

      Style: this is a strange compilation of statements. Think about how to separate them to make the impacts on you stronger.

    4. I wouldn’t change the many trials and tribulations that guided me.

      Style: perhaps, 'I wouldn't change it, despite (or including) the many trials and tribulations I've experienced, which have guided my development.

    5. It all started April 6, 2001- the day I was brought into the world. First child in a family that would later consist of two brothers and two amazing parents.

      Sentence style: this might be stronger if you blended it into one sentence, e.g.: '... into the world: the first child in a family with two younger brothers and two amazing parents.'

    1. As an avid sports lover, I frequently visit the ESPN(https://www.espn.com/) website to read news about my favorite teams and catch up on scores.

      I wonder if this sentence fits here. You might think of it as a new thought ... sort of. If there were more than one sentence here, you could use it to shape a new paragraph.

    2. Living in my household meant that sports and academics were taken very seriously.  My parents’ expectation was that school comes first, and then sports, and I was expected to dedicate the time on studying to receive high grades. 

      Style: enhance the parallel here. Academics and sports / studying and and play on teams.

    3. he same goes for my relationships with my friends. I have stayed extremely close to my friends with whom I attended first through eighth grade with.

      Sentence structure and style: perhaps indicate that you remained close to your Westfield friends even though you were worried that would not be the case when you moved away. Also, don't end a sentence with 'with'.

    4. I grew up in Westfield, New Jersey, where I lived in the same house for the first fifteen years of my life until we moved to the town over, Mountainside.

      Sentence structure: 'I grew up in Westfield, New Jersey; I lived in the same house for the first fifteen years of my life. Then we moved one town over, to Mountainside.

    5. attribute them for a majority of my best qualities.

      Sentence style: perhaps 'and recognize that they have influenced me and helped me to develop some of my best attributes' or something like that.

    6. Kelly also had a special role in my life, being my biggest fan.

      Grammar: present tense. Also - great to have a family with whom you have such close relationships!

  21. bridgehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu bridgehumn100.blogs.bucknell.edu
    1. And being from Vermont, which I have yet to meet another first-year Vermonter, I am going to need to put myself out there more than I am used to.

      Not sure what you are trying to communicate here - is it that you are unique among BU students because you are from Vermont, or that you understand that it's more of a challenge to stand out in a larger pool of your peers?

    2. I have had the great opportunity of being able to travel around the world. I have been to places like Italy, Argentina, Brazil, France, Germany, and Ireland, along with many Caribbean islands.

      Again, sentence structure: 'I have had the great opportunity to travel around the world: places like ...'

    3. The people that I have met have been the most genuine and nicest people I have ever met.

      Repeating: 'I have met' ... 'I have ever met'. Try to avoid this kind of structure.

    4. It was a complete change for me. New place, new friends, new climate;

      Sentence structure: better to write 'It was a complete change for me: new place, new friends, new climate.' That is the complete sentence. The next will be a new sentence.

    1. By the time I graduate I hope to have accomplished everything I set my mind to. More importantly, I must ensure that I cannot get too stressed and overwhelmed as the most important thing to achieve in life is happiness.

      Sentence style optimization: Maybe a stronger way to demonstrate that your goals are high, that you understand that achieving them will be stressful, and that in order to do so you know you must find a balance that also ensures your happiness.

    2. In sum, this decision was important to me because my outgoing personality was in need of a more diverse social life.

      Sentence structure: you might want to tweak this a bit ... it's not your personality, but you who wanted a diverse social life.

    3. Placing myself in a soccer environment allows me to clear my head and escape the real world.

      Again, active voice, e.g.: 'I find that when I am on the soccer field my head clears and I can escape real-world stresses' or something like that.

    4. More importantly, this sport has relieved me from times where I have been struggling academically or socially

      Use a more active voice here, e.g.: 'At many times in my life I have found that being a part of a soccer team has helped me to overcome academic and social challenges' or something like that.