38 Matching Annotations
  1. Mar 2018
    1. it has brought him forcibly to the attention of his own people among whom for so long, unless the other race had noticed him beforehand, he was a prophet with little honor.

      Even with this strict division of the community within the Harlem Renaissance, the black artist is important because even though they may not be revered by everyone, they are still knowledgable of the fact that they can be famous artists with their own aesthetics.

    2. “I want to write like a white poet”; meaning subconsciously, “I would like to be a white poet”; meaning behind that, “I would like to be white.”

      This immediately makes me think about the idea of racial uplifting, where some middle class black citizens felt the need to disconnect themselves from the past of slavery and instead focus on a life of purity, piety, and a more Eurocentric culture. Also, it makes me think about Claude McKay, who didn't want to be known as a black poet but instead to just be a 'poet'

    1. Spread out in fiery points Glowed into words, then would be savagely still.

      Here is another instance of the motif of being stuck, because her once fluid hair becomes "savagely still"

    2. A crowd flowed over London Bridge,

      This image contrasts the distinct imagery of water within the poem. Here, we see a crowd of people characterized as water flowing over a bridge, instead of under it, which created a doubled contrast to the images of water.

    3. cricket no relief, And the dry stone no sound of water.

      Here, there is a distinct contrast between these two images in terms of sound. First, the crickets won't stop chirping insinuating nature is going wild, but then there is no sound of water thus showing how nature has been twisted and broken.

    4. shower of rain;

      The poem begins with the mention of seasons, yet there is an element of death tied to their mention. However, this is the second mention of rain and this time it's a harsher form of it

  2. Feb 2018
    1. Indeed vers libre has become as prolix and as verbose

      I just find it kind of funny and ironic how he's calling out free verse for being too "prolix" in a way that is not concise. Plus, he continues on with this notion for a few more sentences!

    1. in such a spiny land

      There is a contrast between the smooth "unthroned" stalk of the delphinium flower, in relation to this "spiny land." It's also important to note that the delphinium flower is extremely toxic, so even thought it's a beautiful flower that looks unthreatening it's essentially more dangerous than a rose because of it's thorns.

    2. incessant

      This specific word choice has a connotation of something that is unpleasant, which creates a sort of conflict within the poem due to the fact that no one grieves for this man except for the ocean, but the ocean itself seems to be a sort of annoyance.

    1. call it good.

      The poet is mocking there idea of what these people in Spoon River call "good". Because one cannot know what good 'means' if there is no opposing 'evil' to contrast the notion.

    1. little girl?” he said. “Don’t go walking about like that—you’ll get cold.

      I find it weird that he calls his wife his "little girl" however it is fitting to the patriarchal/controlling aspects of the short story.

    2. what is one to do?

      This reality of being trapped without agency is similar to Du Bois' essay when highlighting the oppressive life the black community faced at that time. While the two narratives of oppression are incorrigible, they both resonate to have a similar feeling of being stuck without a voice.

  3. Jan 2018
    1. Through history, the powers of single black men flash here and there like falling stars, and die sometimes before the world has rightly gauged their brightness.

      This sentences is reminiscent of Adam's "The Dynamo and The Virgin" due to this idea of the ghost. For Adams it was him as a character who was stuck in the past but, simultaneously confronted with the future. However, instead of the narrator feeling like a ghost, they acknowledge the ghosts and spirits of the various black men and women of their past, which is also part of their future.

    2. And yet, being a problem is a strange experience,

      I find it interesting how Du Bois takes up this racist/oppressive point of view and acknowledges how he is considered a "problem" by society

    1. He made up his mind to venture it; he would risk translating rays into faith.

      interesting line comparing science to religion, just due to the fact that science and religion do not mix. In other words, science is based off of facts that can be proven through experimenters and religion is a type of faith or belief in something.

    2. storehouses

      Interesting how an art museum is initially called a storehouse, which discredits the work of cultivating great pieces of art, as well as the pieces of works. To me it seems like Adams looks down on art.

    1. From my five arms

      I'm curious to why Levin wrote "From my five arms"due to the fact that there is no mention to anything else numerical. One assumption I have is that it may have something to do with a rebellion as Levine wrote that "From 'Bow Down' come 'Rise Up'" and this poem is charged with a rebellious theme.

    2. Out of black bean and wet slate bread, Out of the acids of rage, the candor of tar, Out of creosote, gasoline, drive shafts, wooden dollies, They Lion grow.

      To me, this poem begins off with a celebration of the working class life. Even though the imagery initially used connotes a hard lifestyle full of "wet slate bread" and "black beans" there is still the idea that these people are the ones who metaphorically feed the lion, or essentially keep the industrial wheels moving.