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  1. Nov 2019
    1. dreading every moment that I should swoon amid the narrow and intricate windings of the lumber, in which event I had nothing but death to expect as the result.

      God, Poe, you're... I have no words to describe how overdramatic you are.

    2. Most people love their dogs—but for Tiger I had an affection far more ardent than common; and never, certainly, did any creature more truly deserve it.

      Best Friend, Tiger, goodest pup

    3. I was overpowered, too, with a desire to sleep, yet trembled at the thought of indulging it, lest there might exist some pernicious influence, like that of burning charcoal, in the confined air of the hold.

      Like I said...

    4. I drew every breath with difficulty

      Hmm maybe Carbon Monoxide Poisoning that only didn't kill you because something ripped open an air hole in the damn cubby you're being held in?

    5. leaving with me the lantern, together with a copious supply of tapers and phosphorous, and promising to pay me a visit as often as he could contrive to do so without observation. This was on the seventeenth of June

      This feel claustrophobic and I'm not even there. Won't you run out of air, with that lantern lit?

    6. d—d

      I was pretty sure this was a stutter until I remembered old novels censor themselves... I wonder why they do? Is it some old christian habit, or a publication issue, or? Why?

    7. .

      All this bullshit just reminds me of the, "This is what 'boys will be boys' should really mean - doing goofy hijinks and having fun" thing to be completely honest

    8. This hiding-place, he assured me, would be rendered sufficiently comfortable for a residence of many days, during which I was not to make my appearance.

      More hiding on a boat; this time with far lower stakes.

    9. I have since frequently examined my conduct on this occasion with sentiments of displeasure as well as of surprise. The intense hypocrisy I made use of for the furtherance of my project—an hypocrisy pervading every word and action of my life for so long a period of time—could only have been rendered tolerable to myself by the wild and burning expectation with which I looked forward to the fulfilment of my long-cherished visions of travel.

      Okay.

    10. Augustus thoroughly entered into my state of mind. It is probable, indeed, that our intimate communion had resulted in a partial interchange of character.

      ...

    11. My visions were of shipwreck and famine; of death or captivity among barbarian hordes; of a lifetime dragged out in sorrow and tears, upon some gray and desolate rock, in an ocean unapproachable and unknown. Such visions or desires—for they amounted to desires—are common, I have since been assured, to the whole numerous race of the melancholy among men

      you mean... depression? Or?

    12. he most strongly enlisted my feelings in behalf of the life of a seaman, when he depicted his more terrible moments of suffering and despair.

      The Call of the Void: Sailor Edition

    13. In one of our conversations Augustus frankly confessed to me, that in his whole life he had at no time experienced so excruciating a sense of dismay, as when on board our little boat he first discovered the extent of his intoxication, and felt himself sinking beneath its influence.

      Poor boy

    14. vigorous friction with flannels bathed in hot oil—a proceeding suggested by Augustus.

      What? Like defibrillators? That shit doesn't work for blood loss - wasn't he impaled?

    15. Augustus, paler than death, was busily occupied in chafing my hands. Upon seeing me open my eyes, his exclamations of gratitude and joy excited alternate laughter and tears from the rough-looking personages who were present.

      God that's. Really cute

    16. plunge forward, the sea behind fell combing over our counter, and deluged us with water. I was so utterly benumbed, too, in every limb, as to be nearly unconscious of sensation.

      This is overdramatic as shit, 9/10

    17. still I was ashamed to betray any trepidation, and for almost half an hour maintained a resolute silence

      WHY - call him out! Maybe you could have helped! Are you trying to protect his ego or something?

    18. he suddenly started up, and swore with a terrible oath that he would not go to sleep for any Arthur Pym in Christendom, when there was so glorious a breeze from the southwest. I never was so astonished in my life

      This would be cute if I had any promise that it was queer but like. Good buddies is also fine, I suppose

    19. I owned a sailboat called the Ariel, and worth about seventy-five dollars. She had a half-deck or cuddy, and was rigged sloop-fashion—I forget her tonnage, but she would hold ten persons without much crowding.

      Oh, oh, you just - own a BOAT. Of COURSE you do you fucking rich bastard

    20. I used frequently to go home with him, and remain all day, and sometimes all night. We occupied the same bed, and he would be sure to keep me awake until almost light

      This feels pretty queer, just omitting certain intimate details.

    21. allow him to draw up, in his own words

      OH oh I see. Tryna do that whole. Give it false legitimacy bs again. I see your tricks, you gothic little fuck

    22. Among those gentlemen in Virginia who expressed the greatest interest in my statement, more particularly in regard to that portion of it which related to the Antarctic Ocean, was Mr. Poe, lately editor of the “Southern Literary Messenger,”

      Hhhhhhh self-referential BULLSHIT again, Poe?

  2. Oct 2019
    1. (insert your favorite widely consumed television show)

      At least try an example - some shows are not worth considering to have changed/be changing the course of history.

    2. Mind that the war Stowe allegedly “made” was the costliest war ever fought on American soil.

      What does this have to do with the larger point you're making? "Costliest" is also a very strange way to put this sentiment.

    3. worthy of canonization in American Literature

      Dicey, as American Literature shouldn't exist in the first place, but do try to continue your convincing.

    4. isn’t as sophisticated

      Pretension is not necessarily "sophisticated" as it is self-important, as you earlier accurately described - I would argue that Harriet Beecher-Stowe's use of manipulation is, in fact, sophisticated, indicated by its importance in the lens of history known to this day.

    1. He then slowly begins to question America within his palpable shock of how the slaves are actually caring human beings.

      I've stayed quiet for too long - WHERE? SHOW Us the TEXTUAL EvidENCE

    1. Although, I can’t say I’d do the same if I freed someone and they made the brash decision to walk right on back into the claws of danger.

      I just called you out for this sentence a paragraph ago, and you have the Audacity to repeat it.

    2. Although, I can’t say I’d do the same if I freed someone and they made the brash decision to walk right on back into the claws of danger.
      1. This is passive-aggressive as fuck, 2. This tone sounds mocking of abolitionism, and 3. He didn't free Madison Washington, he just helped him? Please set your tone and facts straight
    3. Douglass is very overt

      I mean. He kind of had to be in the era that this was written in and panders to because people needed (and still need) the idea of compassion spoonfed to them, but. Go on.

    4. a kind of abolitionist narrative.

      Douglass WAS an abolitionist. This, like all else, was an abolitionist text? "A kind" is um. Rude. When just using it as a way to compare Melville to a hero like Douglass

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    1. On the other side, none were killed, though severalwere wounded

      HOW you were outnumbered SO BADLY how fucking unrealistic fucking white cishet male power fantasy

    2. For a few breaths’ space there was a vague, muffled, innersound as of submerged sword-fish rushing hither and

      (and the rest of this sentence, if Hypothes.is would freakin let me highlight it) Comparing the fight to nature, with a named creature on one side and a mass, a "shoal" on the other.

    3. Huddled upon the long-boat amidships, the Negressesraised a wailing chant, whose chorus was the clash of the steel.

      Third mention of women in the text.

    4. with all his remainingstrength, Don Benito entreated the American not to give chase,either with ship or boat; for the Negroes had already provedthemselves such desperadoes, that, in case of a present assault,nothing but a total massacre of the whites could be looked for.

      Oh. When I read the summary, I thought this was a caring gesture, as in, "they killed the real oppressors, let us go, and now have their freedom, please let them be" but like. This is perpetuating racist stereotypes and general fear of slave revolt, isn't it

    5. death for thefigurehead, in a human skeleton; chalky comment on the chalkedwords below, “Follow your leader.” At the sight, Don Benito,covering his face, wailed out: “’Tis he, Aranda! my murdered,unburied friend!

      ...

    6. When the two captains met, the Spaniard again fervently took thehand of the American, at the same time casting an earnest glanceinto his eyes, but, as before, too much overcome to speak.

      Hm

    7. as hischarmed eye and ear took in all these, with the chained figure ofthe black, the clenched jaw and hand relaxed

      Black people remaining enslaved, remaining in a servitudal position, brings him comfort equivalent to that he takes in nature - he sees slavery as their "natural state". Implications lead to his ideas of "the noble slave", or more towards them being part of "the majesty of nature"? One and the same?

    8. Did this imply one brief, repentant relentingat the final moment, from some iniquitous plot, followed byremorseless return to it?

      Delano realizes?

    9. he Spaniardglanced feverishly up, casting a longing look toward the sealer,while with mute concern his servant gazed into his face. Suddenlythe old ague of coldness returned, and dropping back to hiscushions he was silent

      At Babo's attentive glare, Benito falls silent, as though his dreams have been crushed.

    10. sudden involuntaryassociation in his mind of Babo with Atufal.

      Captain of The Slaves, as he's been put, and the Main Prisoner? Interesting connection to make

    11. perhaps additionally incited to rejoin himby the hope of snatching a moment’s private chat while his servantwas engaged upon deck

      Any excuse to get him alone, huh?

    12. assented the man with an inward chuckle, grasping thetiller-head firmly. Upon this, unperceived by the American, thetwo blacks eyed the sailor askance

      Excitement at the prospect of rescue seen as suspicious and dealt with with an air of authority

    13. both spectacles showed, that lax asDon Benito’s general authority might be, still, whenever he choseto exert it, no man so savage or colossal but must, more or less,bow

      Power dynamics

    14. He made random reference to the differentconstitutions of races, enabling one to offer more resistance tocertain maladies than another. The thought was new to hiscompanion.

      Hm

    15. African’s, should, far from improving the latter’s quality, have thesad effect of pouring vitriolic acid into black broth; improving thehue, perhaps, but not the wholesomeness.”

      jesus fucking christ on a bicycle

    16. Presently master and man came forth; Don Benito leaning on hisservant as if nothing had happened.But a sort of love-quarrel, after all, thought Captain Delano

      Ben's romance theme - textual evidence?

    17. Ah, when will master get better from his sickness; only the sourheart that sour sickness breeds made him serve Babo so; cuttingBabo with the razor, because, only by accident, Babo had givenmaster one little scratch; and for the first time in so many a day,too. Ah, ah, ah,” holding his hand to his face.

      Lines in a play...

    18. like anyresigned gentleman in barber’s hands, Don Benito bore all, muchless uneasily, at least, than he had done the razoring; indeed, he satso pale and rigid now

      With the steel away, Don Benito seems still and calm

    19. there was something so hollow in the Spaniard’s manner, withapparently some reciprocalhollowness in the servant’s dusky comment of silence, that the ideaflashed across him, that possibly master and man, for someunknown purpose, were acting out, both in word and deed, nay, tothe very tremor of Don Benito’s limbs, some juggling play beforehim

      !!!

    20. byyour account, have you been these two months and more gettingfrom Cape Horn to St. Maria, a distance which I myself, with agood wind, have sailed in a few days. True, you had calms, andlong ones, but to be becalmed for two months, that is, at least,unusual

      incongruities

    21. Captain Delano took to Negroes, notphilanthropically, but genially, just as other men to Newfoundlanddogs.

      Comparing black people to animals, or reinforcing his "noble slave" ideology by making them, in his head, a kind of "beloved, close-knit creature to Mankind"? Garbage either way, but the textual evidence remains

    22. .

      The other comments say it well. This is definitely a huge giveaway that the author (or character?) believes in the idea that some human beings were "born to serve", an honestly disgusting way of rationalizing your own racism as "but they really LOVE to do other people's work!" No, no human should be forced to do another's dirty work for nothing in return but cruelty and punishment.

    23. as if waiting hismaster’s good pleasure

      I know what it's actually about, and I feel like I'm actively looking for queers, now, but. Is this line not the accentuation of their previous queer-coded relationship? It's so strongly not-straight and I want to point it out

    24. This seems a sort of dormitory, sitting-room, sail-loft,chapel, armoury, and private closet together,

      This line of dialogue could have summed up pretty much the last page - oh, what was that thing we were all taught? "Show, don't tell"? That's because of romantic writers, isn't it

    25. the ship was not broughtto anchor by sunset, he need be under no concern, for as there wasto be a full moon that night, he (Captain Delano) would remain onboard ready to play the pilot, should the wind come soon or late

      You think it's haunted but you're completely chill staying aboard? Cool, okay?

    26. He complied, with republican impartiality as to thisrepublican element, which always seeks one level, serving theoldest white no better than the youngest black

      Hm

    27. Instantly the blacks paused, justwhere they were, each Negro and Negress suspended in his or herposture, exactly as the word had found them- for a few secondscontinuing s

      That, I'll admit, is somewhat unusual

    28. Delano’s home, and, brought to its threshold forrepairs, had familiarly lain there, as a Newfoundland dog; thesight of that household boat

      Oh, yeah, y'know. The universal imagery of having a household boat. Almost as universal as owning a pony, or, better yet, a yacht... I'm just getting bitter about rich, entitled asshats, don't mind me

    29. upon the whole with regained confidence in BenitoCereno.

      How many times are we going to overhear your thoughts as you flake out of opinions and flip-flop your way back to them? Fuck's sake, I thought I was indecisive

    30. There was a difference between the idea of Don Benito’s darklypreordaining Captain Delano’s fate, and Captain Delano’s lightlyarranging Don Benito’s

      Contrast

    31. scarce an uneasiness entered the honest sailor’s mind but,by a subsequent spontaneous act of good sense, it was ejected. Atlast he began to laugh at these forebodings

      It takes a certain kind of person to just. Reject suspicion as this

    32. By a curious coincidence, as each point was recalled, the blackwizards of Ashantee would strike up with their hatchets, as inominous comment on the white stranger’s thoughts.

      Implying a connection between them and thought - giving a kind of spiritual power. Is this at all empowering, or a way to say that their power could do nothing to stop them from getting into this situation in the first place?

    33. your black here seems high in your trust; a sort of privy-counsellor, in fact.” Upon this, the servant looked up with a good-natured grin, but the master started as from a venomous bite.

      Master/Slave relationship mirroring an uncomfortable Dom/Sub? Submissive, proud, in a way, to be owned, and more than ready to discuss with any stranger; Dominant, insistent that no one "owns" anyone, not really, and has, in some aspects, a loving relationship with their Sub. I might be reading too much into this but it feels in some way to be what was intended (the author is dead to me(?))

    34. In short, to the Spaniard’s black-letter text, it was best,for a while, to leave open margin.

      A comment on annotations being unceremonious and thoughts not ought to be spoken aloud?

    35. skyligh

      Light from the sky, or window from above - I thought they were outside, so much more likely the former, but the latter makes this feel confusing

    36. From no train of thought did these fancies come; not from within,but from without; suddenly, too, and in one throng, like hoar frost;yet as soon to vanish as the mild sun of Captain Delano’s good-nature regained its meridian.

      Jess is going to want to mention the uncanny because of this line I feel it in my soul

    37. a young knave of talent andspirit? But the Spaniard was apale invalid

      Maybe because he hasn't eaten in days or is ill? Has this dumbass never been sick or seen someone else be - I'm not finishing that sentence, of course he has, what is this, the 18--somethin's? You watched motherfuckers die dude you should be able to recognize sickness when you see it

    38. now seemed anything but dignified;while the menial familiarity of the servant lost its original charm ofsimple-hearted attachment.

      Closeness with another human seen as a "simple" and "charming" affair until it is shown to be a deeper connection

    39. as much as to say, “No, I am content.”

      Are you speaking for him, authoring his actions from afar, or interpreting excess meaning into his actions? That is to say, are you certain that this is what this action represents?

    40. An iron collar wasabout his neck, from which depended a chain, thrice wound roundhis body; the terminating links padlocked together at a broad bandof iron, his girdle.

      More of a prisoner than the rest onboard?

    1. .

      This feels like the conclusion to a completely different essay, one started in the last half of the piece. Why is the introduction still the same if the conclusion doesn't fit?

    2. not as sinister as other pieces they’d seen. There is, however, an undeniable “Americanness” in the piece.

      affirming that, before, the consensus was upon "American" literature being sinister, by and large

    3. a more palatable read

      certainly far more sexually charged and melodramatic, as you might expect from poetry, but I wouldn't use the word "palatable"

    4. there is a baseline to the human experience

      Though I understand where they're coming from, some textual evidence might be helpful to drive the point home.

    5. preaching an inherent unity that allows him to claim the suffering of others as his own.

      Giving himself omnipresence in a way not unlike you'd expect from a god

  4. Sep 2019
    1. 15Such generosity was not without its effect, even upon the invalid.His face lighted up; eager and hectic, he met the honest glance ofhis visitor. With gratitude he seemed overcome

      I get queer vibes from most romantic texts, and this one is no exception

    2. Eyeing Don Benito’ssmall, yellow hands, he easily inferred that the young captain hadnot got into command at the hawse-hole but the cabin-window,and if so, why wonder at incompetence, in youth, sickness, andaristocracy united? Such was his democratic conclusion.

      Well... okay

    3. as tosweep away, as by billows, whole families of the Africans, and ayet larger number, proportionally, of the Spaniards

      So, not a larger number, but you want us to sympathize with them as though it were. Cool

    4. to accost

      "approach and address (someone) boldly or aggressively." Okay maybe it does mean that. I thought it meant about the same as "assault" and I was... hm

    5. whose multitude of living freight are someindividuals, doubtless, as little troublesome as crates and bales

      I someday wish to be labeled "as little troublesome as [a crate or bale]" to be completely honest

    6. notwithstanding the present condition of his ship, theSpaniard should still persist in a demeanour,

      I get that you want to be detailed, but could we move on with it, please? Your excessive chattiness is giving me a headache only romantic writers manage to work up.