never, surely, was there a more tantalizing state of anxiety and suspense.
that's what you think, bucko
never, surely, was there a more tantalizing state of anxiety and suspense.
that's what you think, bucko
dreading every moment that I should swoon amid the narrow and intricate windings of the lumber, in which event I had nothing but death to expect as the result.
God, Poe, you're... I have no words to describe how overdramatic you are.
Most people love their dogs—but for Tiger I had an affection far more ardent than common; and never, certainly, did any creature more truly deserve it.
Best Friend, Tiger, goodest pup
I lay in an utterly helpless, and, I fancied, a dying condition beneath him.
God you're a wreck
morasses
"an area of muddy or boggy ground", or "a complicated or confused situation."
I could not imagine a reason for the absence of Augustus
Ah fuck, he's dead, isn't he?
I was overpowered, too, with a desire to sleep, yet trembled at the thought of indulging it, lest there might exist some pernicious influence, like that of burning charcoal, in the confined air of the hold.
Like I said...
I drew every breath with difficulty
Hmm maybe Carbon Monoxide Poisoning that only didn't kill you because something ripped open an air hole in the damn cubby you're being held in?
putrefaction
"the process of decay or rotting in a body or other organic matter."
it was run down
As in, broken?
leaving with me the lantern, together with a copious supply of tapers and phosphorous, and promising to pay me a visit as often as he could contrive to do so without observation. This was on the seventeenth of June
This feel claustrophobic and I'm not even there. Won't you run out of air, with that lantern lit?
d—d
I was pretty sure this was a stutter until I remembered old novels censor themselves... I wonder why they do? Is it some old christian habit, or a publication issue, or? Why?
ran full tilt at me, with his umbrella uplifted.
wh...why
.
All this bullshit just reminds me of the, "This is what 'boys will be boys' should really mean - doing goofy hijinks and having fun" thing to be completely honest
This hiding-place, he assured me, would be rendered sufficiently comfortable for a residence of many days, during which I was not to make my appearance.
More hiding on a boat; this time with far lower stakes.
a hiding-place for me in the Grampus.
I thought you wanted to work on the damn thing, not stow away?
I have since frequently examined my conduct on this occasion with sentiments of displeasure as well as of surprise. The intense hypocrisy I made use of for the furtherance of my project—an hypocrisy pervading every word and action of my life for so long a period of time—could only have been rendered tolerable to myself by the wild and burning expectation with which I looked forward to the fulfilment of my long-cherished visions of travel.
Okay.
Grampus
wheeze Grampus! Wonderful name
Augustus thoroughly entered into my state of mind. It is probable, indeed, that our intimate communion had resulted in a partial interchange of character.
...
My visions were of shipwreck and famine; of death or captivity among barbarian hordes; of a lifetime dragged out in sorrow and tears, upon some gray and desolate rock, in an ocean unapproachable and unknown. Such visions or desires—for they amounted to desires—are common, I have since been assured, to the whole numerous race of the melancholy among men
you mean... depression? Or?
he most strongly enlisted my feelings in behalf of the life of a seaman, when he depicted his more terrible moments of suffering and despair.
The Call of the Void: Sailor Edition
gloomy although glowing imagination
Poe...
his stories of the ocean (more than one half of which I now suspect to have been sheer fabrications)
Hrm.
In one of our conversations Augustus frankly confessed to me, that in his whole life he had at no time experienced so excruciating a sense of dismay, as when on board our little boat he first discovered the extent of his intoxication, and felt himself sinking beneath its influence.
Poor boy
vigorous friction with flannels bathed in hot oil—a proceeding suggested by Augustus.
What? Like defibrillators? That shit doesn't work for blood loss - wasn't he impaled?
Augustus was buoyed up with it, and thus escaped a terrible death.
Convenient
back water! black water!
?
the special interference of Providence
oh god not again with this shit
dismasted
"(of a ship) having a broken or missing mast or masts".
Augustus, paler than death, was busily occupied in chafing my hands. Upon seeing me open my eyes, his exclamations of gratitude and joy excited alternate laughter and tears from the rough-looking personages who were present.
God that's. Really cute
a loud and long scream or yell, as if from the throats of a thousand demons, seemed to pervade the whole atmosphere
Nice shit
carried away the mast short off by the board
Wh-what just happened? Did you lose the sail or something?
plunge forward, the sea behind fell combing over our counter, and deluged us with water. I was so utterly benumbed, too, in every limb, as to be nearly unconscious of sensation.
This is overdramatic as shit, 9/10
A storm was evidently gathering behind us
Oh ya nevermind y'all're Fucked
to destruction.
Starvation, surely. Destruction? I dunno about that?
I was altogether incapable of managing the boat
Me @ every situation I encounter
The whole truth now flashed upon me. I flew to him and raised him up.
Drunk Augustus tryna save Arthur from homophobes...
still I was ashamed to betray any trepidation, and for almost half an hour maintained a resolute silence
WHY - call him out! Maybe you could have helped! Are you trying to protect his ego or something?
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Gently good queer vibes, mixed with Hitchhiker's vibes, and general good shit for this last part of the paragraph
he suddenly started up, and swore with a terrible oath that he would not go to sleep for any Arthur Pym in Christendom, when there was so glorious a breeze from the southwest. I never was so astonished in my life
This would be cute if I had any promise that it was queer but like. Good buddies is also fine, I suppose
I owned a sailboat called the Ariel, and worth about seventy-five dollars. She had a half-deck or cuddy, and was rigged sloop-fashion—I forget her tonnage, but she would hold ten persons without much crowding.
Oh, oh, you just - own a BOAT. Of COURSE you do you fucking rich bastard
I used frequently to go home with him, and remain all day, and sometimes all night. We occupied the same bed, and he would be sure to keep me awake until almost light
This feels pretty queer, just omitting certain intimate details.
he had managed to lay by a tolerable sum of money.
Hm. A wealthy white dude. We Sure Haven't Heard This Story A Million Goddamned Times.
Here I became intimate with the son of Mr. Barnard, a sea-captain
Queers? Dare I get my hopes up again?
the difference in point of style will be readily perceived.
SURE THING PAL
to carry with them sufficient evidence of their own authenticity
not again, poe, my friend
under the garb of fiction.
Not falling for that again. No, sir. No gonna be another fucking "Eliza Winkfield"
allow him to draw up, in his own words
OH oh I see. Tryna do that whole. Give it false legitimacy bs again. I see your tricks, you gothic little fuck
its very uncouthness
Not typically a word used by those considered to be so
Among those gentlemen in Virginia who expressed the greatest interest in my statement, more particularly in regard to that portion of it which related to the Antarctic Ocean, was Mr. Poe, lately editor of the “Southern Literary Messenger,”
Hhhhhhh self-referential BULLSHIT again, Poe?
A distrust in my own abilities as a writer
I hate that that's relatable.
unsupported as my assertions must necessarily be (except by the evidence of a single individual, and he a half-breed Indian)
Excuse? Me?
(insert your favorite widely consumed television show)
At least try an example - some shows are not worth considering to have changed/be changing the course of history.
Mind that the war Stowe allegedly “made” was the costliest war ever fought on American soil.
What does this have to do with the larger point you're making? "Costliest" is also a very strange way to put this sentiment.
the magnitude of impact
Whelp, there goes half the canon, in that case
worthy of canonization in American Literature
Dicey, as American Literature shouldn't exist in the first place, but do try to continue your convincing.
sorry Emerson
Never apologize to the father of transcendentalism. He doesn't deserve it.
isn’t as sophisticated
Pretension is not necessarily "sophisticated" as it is self-important, as you earlier accurately described - I would argue that Harriet Beecher-Stowe's use of manipulation is, in fact, sophisticated, indicated by its importance in the lens of history known to this day.
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So What's the Point. Tell us. Have a conclusion
on the other,
hhhh use Some effort, please
America was slowly trying to move into a place of more racial acceptance
Not really, not yet
an epiphany
He's always seen them as dogs, comparable to "man's best friend", why is this an epiphany
c
...
s
no
a confusing wreck
no
if not, he is lesser
With how he constantly talks down to Cereno?
and how he begins to understand that maybe they aren’t the best ideals.
Does He? WHeRE
He then slowly begins to question America within his palpable shock of how the slaves are actually caring human beings.
I've stayed quiet for too long - WHERE? SHOW Us the TEXTUAL EvidENCE
Although, I can’t say I’d do the same if I freed someone and they made the brash decision to walk right on back into the claws of danger.
I just called you out for this sentence a paragraph ago, and you have the Audacity to repeat it.
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The fuck was that for an ending? Nick why
but still
Slapping on a "but still" and not going anywhere with it is worth one (1) writing sin
Although, I can’t say I’d do the same if I freed someone and they made the brash decision to walk right on back into the claws of danger.
Douglass is very overt
I mean. He kind of had to be in the era that this was written in and panders to because people needed (and still need) the idea of compassion spoonfed to them, but. Go on.
a kind of abolitionist narrative.
Douglass WAS an abolitionist. This, like all else, was an abolitionist text? "A kind" is um. Rude. When just using it as a way to compare Melville to a hero like Douglass
the entity that is Babo
??? What? Is that Phrasing?
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Eek, and, may I add, yikes.
...
-As this seems to be the only pause, I'm using it to do so. Will be back to finish reading maybe tomorrow-
hoping to meet some Spanish or foreign vessel that wouldsave them
hm
Notary Public ofthe Holy Crusade
It can't have been? The same time period? i thought the crusades were ages ago
The following extracts
...I knew it wasn't over-over yet, but also... IT'S NOT OVER WITH YET? CHRIST ON A BIKE
secured
...like cargo. ugh
On the other side, none were killed, though severalwere wounded
HOW you were outnumbered SO BADLY how fucking unrealistic fucking white cishet male power fantasy
Exclusive of those by theballs
??What?
Their red tongues lolled, wolf-like,from their blackmouths
Animalistic/dehumanizing language
For a few breaths’ space there was a vague, muffled, innersound as of submerged sword-fish rushing hither and
(and the rest of this sentence, if Hypothes.is would freakin let me highlight it) Comparing the fight to nature, with a named creature on one side and a mass, a "shoal" on the other.
Huddled upon the long-boat amidships, the Negressesraised a wailing chant, whose chorus was the clash of the steel.
Third mention of women in the text.
One extended arm of the ghost seemed beckoning thewhites to avenge it.
Racial Divide made both by plot and text
uponthe second volley, Indian-like, they hurtled their hatchets.
The ideas of "the Noble Slave" and "the Noble Savage" converge here?
with all his remainingstrength, Don Benito entreated the American not to give chase,either with ship or boat; for the Negroes had already provedthemselves such desperadoes, that, in case of a present assault,nothing but a total massacre of the whites could be looked for.
Oh. When I read the summary, I thought this was a caring gesture, as in, "they killed the real oppressors, let us go, and now have their freedom, please let them be" but like. This is perpetuating racist stereotypes and general fear of slave revolt, isn't it
cawing crows escaped from the hand of the fowler.
????
death for thefigurehead, in a human skeleton; chalky comment on the chalkedwords below, “Follow your leader.” At the sight, Don Benito,covering his face, wailed out: “’Tis he, Aranda! my murdered,unburied friend!
...
eredescried, helplessly mixed in, on deck, with the blacks
The idea of being "mixed in", the phrasing here is awful
He smote Babo’s hand down, but his own heartsmote him harder. With infinite pity he withdrew his hold fromDon Benito
The plot, revealed
past, present, and future seemedone
Not to a reader, they don't
seemingly
Words like this and "as if" give away the idea that it's not what's actually happening
God guard you better than me, my bestfriend
...
When the two captains met, the Spaniard again fervently took thehand of the American, at the same time casting an earnest glanceinto his eyes, but, as before, too much overcome to speak.
Hm
fter good actions one’s conscience isnever ungrateful, however much so the benefited party may be.
ha
as hischarmed eye and ear took in all these, with the chained figure ofthe black, the clenched jaw and hand relaxed
Black people remaining enslaved, remaining in a servitudal position, brings him comfort equivalent to that he takes in nature - he sees slavery as their "natural state". Implications lead to his ideas of "the noble slave", or more towards them being part of "the majesty of nature"? One and the same?
he benign aspect of Nature
look for other ways Nature interacts with the story in the text
He seemed a sentry
!!!
wasthe Spaniard less hardened than the Jew
what in the fuck is this supposed to mean
Did this imply one brief, repentant relentingat the final moment, from some iniquitous plot, followed byremorseless return to it?
Delano realizes?
In images far swifter than these sentences
But you're going to go ahead and describe them anyway, aren't you
To be brief
Thank the goddesses
Himself became reserved
Grammatically, um. Eek.
“I cannot go,”
Being stopped by something/someone?
he Spaniardglanced feverishly up, casting a longing look toward the sealer,while with mute concern his servant gazed into his face. Suddenlythe old ague of coldness returned, and dropping back to hiscushions he was silent
At Babo's attentive glare, Benito falls silent, as though his dreams have been crushed.
bore the San Dominick swiftly on
Not swiftly enough, there's another 24 pages of this nonsense
Again Don Benito shrank; and this time, as the good sailor thought,from a genuine twinge of his conscience
Loyalty to the rebellion
sudden involuntaryassociation in his mind of Babo with Atufal.
Captain of The Slaves, as he's been put, and the Main Prisoner? Interesting connection to make
what avexatious coincidence
Are you sure he's not watching you?
perhaps additionally incited to rejoin himby the hope of snatching a moment’s private chat while his servantwas engaged upon deck
Any excuse to get him alone, huh?
assented the man with an inward chuckle, grasping thetiller-head firmly. Upon this, unperceived by the American, thetwo blacks eyed the sailor askance
Excitement at the prospect of rescue seen as suspicious and dealt with with an air of authority
Why see, the very women pull and sing,too
"The noble slave", mentions of women in the text
both spectacles showed, that lax asDon Benito’s general authority might be, still, whenever he choseto exert it, no man so savage or colossal but must, more or less,bow
Power dynamics
Don Benito seemed to have evenless welcome for the breeze than the calm
Hm
.
-Pausing here once more, to return-
upon beingleft ungratified in so inconsiderable a wish, by one, too, for whomhe intended such solid services
Loyalty theme
captain of the slaves
HMM
He made random reference to the differentconstitutions of races, enabling one to offer more resistance tocertain maladies than another. The thought was new to hiscompanion.
Hm
stilltrue to his master; since by facing him he could the more readilyanticipate his slightest want
Or direct him as to how to speak.
African’s, should, far from improving the latter’s quality, have thesad effect of pouring vitriolic acid into black broth; improving thehue, perhaps, but not the wholesomeness.”
jesus fucking christ on a bicycle
Presently master and man came forth; Don Benito leaning on hisservant as if nothing had happened.But a sort of love-quarrel, after all, thought Captain Delano
Ben's romance theme - textual evidence?
Ah, when will master get better from his sickness; only the sourheart that sour sickness breeds made him serve Babo so; cuttingBabo with the razor, because, only by accident, Babo had givenmaster one little scratch; and for the first time in so many a day,too. Ah, ah, ah,” holding his hand to his face.
Lines in a play...
tossed back into the flag-locker
seems disrespectful
like anyresigned gentleman in barber’s hands, Don Benito bore all, muchless uneasily, at least, than he had done the razoring; indeed, he satso pale and rigid now
With the steel away, Don Benito seems still and calm
there was something so hollow in the Spaniard’s manner, withapparently some reciprocalhollowness in the servant’s dusky comment of silence, that the ideaflashed across him, that possibly master and man, for someunknown purpose, were acting out, both in word and deed, nay, tothe very tremor of Don Benito’s limbs, some juggling play beforehim
!!!
some of which were butrepetitions of former statements
As an unpracticed liar leans heavily on
More like as if himself were to be done for.
foreshadowing
here’s Babo’s first blood
then why are you so calm?
byyour account, have you been these two months and more gettingfrom Cape Horn to St. Maria, a distance which I myself, with agood wind, have sailed in a few days. True, you had calms, andlong ones, but to be becalmed for two months, that is, at least,unusual
incongruities
thevagary, that in the black he saw a headsman, and in the white, aman at the block.
Foreshadowing
Not unaffected by the close sight of thegleaming steel, Don Benito nervously shuddered
Lack of trust implied here
Captain Delano took to Negroes, notphilanthropically, but genially, just as other men to Newfoundlanddogs.
Comparing black people to animals, or reinforcing his "noble slave" ideology by making them, in his head, a kind of "beloved, close-knit creature to Mankind"? Garbage either way, but the textual evidence remains
a limited mind
Time to throw the bitch off the ship. This is not okay
.
The other comments say it well. This is definitely a huge giveaway that the author (or character?) believes in the idea that some human beings were "born to serve", an honestly disgusting way of rationalizing your own racism as "but they really LOVE to do other people's work!" No, no human should be forced to do another's dirty work for nothing in return but cruelty and punishment.
his cravat.
OF COURSE you wear a cravat GOD
as if waiting hismaster’s good pleasure
I know what it's actually about, and I feel like I'm actively looking for queers, now, but. Is this line not the accentuation of their previous queer-coded relationship? It's so strongly not-straight and I want to point it out
This seems a sort of dormitory, sitting-room, sail-loft,chapel, armoury, and private closet together,
This line of dialogue could have summed up pretty much the last page - oh, what was that thing we were all taught? "Show, don't tell"? That's because of romantic writers, isn't it
the ship was not broughtto anchor by sunset, he need be under no concern, for as there wasto be a full moon that night, he (Captain Delano) would remain onboard ready to play the pilot, should the wind come soon or late
You think it's haunted but you're completely chill staying aboard? Cool, okay?
He complied, with republican impartiality as to thisrepublican element, which always seeks one level, serving theoldest white no better than the youngest black
Hm
Instantly the blacks paused, justwhere they were, each Negro and Negress suspended in his or herposture, exactly as the word had found them- for a few secondscontinuing s
That, I'll admit, is somewhat unusual
the very wordSpaniard has a curious, conspirator, Guy-Fawkish twang to it.
That's? Not? Proof? Of anything?
Among others, four curious points recurred
I want to slap him and shout "DECIDE" into his face. Fucking hell
the Spanish sailor who hadseemed to beckon from the main-chains
Siren song...
What a donkey I was. This kind gentleman
Indecisive prick
haunted pirate-ship
? ?? ?
Who would murder Amasa Delano? Hisconscience is clean
Not how murder works
Delano’s home, and, brought to its threshold forrepairs, had familiarly lain there, as a Newfoundland dog; thesight of that household boat
Oh, yeah, y'know. The universal imagery of having a household boat. Almost as universal as owning a pony, or, better yet, a yacht... I'm just getting bitter about rich, entitled asshats, don't mind me
Jack of the Beach, as they called me whena lad
Captain Jack-xposition
with outline defined, sothat its individuality, like a man’s, was manifest;
interesting word choice
To his delight, it was nowagain in view, leaving the rocky spur astern.
Why does it keep leaving and returning again? I don't recall
begging the knot, for of course the stranger would not care to betroubled with it
eccentricities abound
“What are you knottingthere, my man?” “The knot,”
oh good lord
The old man looked like an Egyptian priest, making Gordian knotsfor the temple of Ammon.
And how, exactly, would he know that?
.
-again pausing for now-
upon the whole with regained confidence in BenitoCereno.
How many times are we going to overhear your thoughts as you flake out of opinions and flip-flop your way back to them? Fuck's sake, I thought I was indecisive
congratulating Don Benito upon possessing such a servant
...Hm
but dutifully remaining within call of a whisper.
Strong descriptor
There was a difference between the idea of Don Benito’s darklypreordaining Captain Delano’s fate, and Captain Delano’s lightlyarranging Don Benito’s
Contrast
scarce an uneasiness entered the honest sailor’s mind but,by a subsequent spontaneous act of good sense, it was ejected. Atlast he began to laugh at these forebodings
It takes a certain kind of person to just. Reject suspicion as this
By a curious coincidence, as each point was recalled, the blackwizards of Ashantee would strike up with their hatchets, as inominous comment on the white stranger’s thoughts.
Implying a connection between them and thought - giving a kind of spiritual power. Is this at all empowering, or a way to say that their power could do nothing to stop them from getting into this situation in the first place?
your black here seems high in your trust; a sort of privy-counsellor, in fact.” Upon this, the servant looked up with a good-natured grin, but the master started as from a venomous bite.
Master/Slave relationship mirroring an uncomfortable Dom/Sub? Submissive, proud, in a way, to be owned, and more than ready to discuss with any stranger; Dominant, insistent that no one "owns" anyone, not really, and has, in some aspects, a loving relationship with their Sub. I might be reading too much into this but it feels in some way to be what was intended (the author is dead to me(?))
They had the air ofconspirators.
Interesting
.
Feels intimate in some way. Close
In short, to the Spaniard’s black-letter text, it was best,for a while, to leave open margin.
A comment on annotations being unceremonious and thoughts not ought to be spoken aloud?
skyligh
Light from the sky, or window from above - I thought they were outside, so much more likely the former, but the latter makes this feel confusing
From no train of thought did these fancies come; not from within,but from without; suddenly, too, and in one throng, like hoar frost;yet as soon to vanish as the mild sun of Captain Delano’s good-nature regained its meridian.
Jess is going to want to mention the uncanny because of this line I feel it in my soul
a young knave of talent andspirit? But the Spaniard was apale invalid
Maybe because he hasn't eaten in days or is ill? Has this dumbass never been sick or seen someone else be - I'm not finishing that sentence, of course he has, what is this, the 18--somethin's? You watched motherfuckers die dude you should be able to recognize sickness when you see it
The man was an impostor.
For? Having a close advisor and/or trusted friend?
now seemed anything but dignified;while the menial familiarity of the servant lost its original charm ofsimple-hearted attachment.
Closeness with another human seen as a "simple" and "charming" affair until it is shown to be a deeper connection
padlock and key- significantsymbols, truly.”
Significant foreshadowing, surely
as much as to say, “No, I am content.”
Are you speaking for him, authoring his actions from afar, or interpreting excess meaning into his actions? That is to say, are you certain that this is what this action represents?
An iron collar wasabout his neck, from which depended a chain, thrice wound roundhis body; the terminating links padlocked together at a broad bandof iron, his girdle.
More of a prisoner than the rest onboard?
a theme so unspeakably distressing
Hm.
.
This feels like the conclusion to a completely different essay, one started in the last half of the piece. Why is the introduction still the same if the conclusion doesn't fit?
Whitman’s task was to reconcile the vast chasm of difference
With poetry alone? No wonder the man failed
not as sinister as other pieces they’d seen. There is, however, an undeniable “Americanness” in the piece.
affirming that, before, the consensus was upon "American" literature being sinister, by and large
a more palatable read
certainly far more sexually charged and melodramatic, as you might expect from poetry, but I wouldn't use the word "palatable"
.”
They should... cite their source...
there is a baseline to the human experience
Though I understand where they're coming from, some textual evidence might be helpful to drive the point home.
preaching an inherent unity that allows him to claim the suffering of others as his own.
Giving himself omnipresence in a way not unlike you'd expect from a god
authors
white cis-male authors
goes beyond
Is "going beyond" the senses meant to be a kind of spiritual awakening?
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-Stopping here for today, to be picked up at a later date-
shepherds to your flock of black sheep?
Comparing the enslaved to animals
the Bachelor’s Delight
uhhhhh okay
febrile
"having or showing the symptoms of a fever."
This excitement is bad for master,” whispered the servant, takinghis arm, and with soothing words gently drawing him aside
Such as here
15Such generosity was not without its effect, even upon the invalid.His face lighted up; eager and hectic, he met the honest glance ofhis visitor. With gratitude he seemed overcome
I get queer vibes from most romantic texts, and this one is no exception
Eyeing Don Benito’ssmall, yellow hands, he easily inferred that the young captain hadnot got into command at the hawse-hole but the cabin-window,and if so, why wonder at incompetence, in youth, sickness, andaristocracy united? Such was his democratic conclusion.
Well... okay
adhered to their provincial costume,picturesque as any in the world.
Stereotyping.
with his composed, deprecatory air at times, made him looksomething like a begging friar of St. Francis.
Hmm
as tosweep away, as by billows, whole families of the Africans, and ayet larger number, proportionally, of the Spaniards
So, not a larger number, but you want us to sympathize with them as though it were. Cool
thesubstance only will here be set down
Hopefully, thank fuck
to accost
"approach and address (someone) boldly or aggressively." Okay maybe it does mean that. I thought it meant about the same as "assault" and I was... hm
accosted
I do not think this word means what you think it means
whose multitude of living freight are someindividuals, doubtless, as little troublesome as crates and bales
I someday wish to be labeled "as little troublesome as [a crate or bale]" to be completely honest
notwithstanding the present condition of his ship, theSpaniard should still persist in a demeanour,
I get that you want to be detailed, but could we move on with it, please? Your excessive chattiness is giving me a headache only romantic writers manage to work up.