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  1. Sep 2019
    1. hand, there is no such thing as "Native American litera- ture

      While I understand what you're trying to say based on a discussion about this article earlier, I dislike your attempt at shock-value statements mainly due to you nailing it and that makes me upset.

    1. This indicates that the Glooskap voyage meant a trip to heaven

      I didn't get that from the rest of the story AT ALL. Please show me more contextual evidence to support this seemingly out-of-nowhere claim from the story you provided.

    2. greatly modernized and altered

      Why? Perhaps in its original wording with a few notes thrown in, it would've made a hell of a lot more sense? Why take it out of historical context?

    3. there he sat smoking his stone pipe

      Does the pipe make him indestructible? He said if they ever gave it away they'd starve but um. Does he just mean generically "to perish"? Does it imbue the user with special abilities? I don't?

    4. They could not hurt the stone canoe

      Makes me wonder what the stone canoe is based on - is it an odd way of saying it's a submarine or sub-marine-like vehicle? Or is it meant to have protection built on top of it to shield its occupants? How wide must this stone have been to carve a damn boat out of it? I'm so curious now

    5. his stick at them

      When did it become his? Did his mom just give it up for him? Where's that in the story? Or are we just under the assumption that, as the male, he owns all? Gendered space/ownership

    6. a deer and a qwah-beet,–a beaver

      Why these animals in particular? If the "pipe" is a reference to an animal-call imitating device, what could draw such drastically different creatures as these?

    7. Whenever you wish to kill anything

      This feels like it would be a point of issue in any other story, but for some reason, I don't know if it will be here? We'll see. It sounds dangerous to just give something like that out for nothing/no reason.

    8. he gave it to her, and said,

      Sentient animals. Does this imply that the deer is also sentient? Why did it deserve death over the beaver, and who decides the value of these creature's lives?

    9. She had lost a boy; she always thought of him. Once there came to her a strange boy; he called her mother.

      Lost in what sense? If he disappeared, this could be her child returning to her? If so, what would this mean symbolically? If not, what might be the reason it's mentioned at all?