wedding photos
A reference to Angel and the narrator's wedding. However, in the previous poem "Because You Don't Have a Social Security Number," there is line that includes "...why we never married..." Which one is true?
wedding photos
A reference to Angel and the narrator's wedding. However, in the previous poem "Because You Don't Have a Social Security Number," there is line that includes "...why we never married..." Which one is true?
Strange,only one dog came to our wedding
I'm confused why Angel thinks it is strange that only one dog was at their wedding? What is the underlying meaning?
Some days a dog is hardly seen
Angel feels forgotten and insignificant
He becomesa dog in the lurch, sharp with teeth
Angel starts feeling uneasy and restless, like the dogs suffering from ennui and malaise?
Judas, come here, Judas.He imagines them as forgiven traitors
I think this "Judas" reference may be rooted in the Bible. Judas was one of Jesus' twelve disciples. He was also the one who betrayed Jesus and turned him in to the Jewish officials, hence the "traitor" reference.
ennui
Definition: a feeling of listlessness and dissatisfaction arising from a lack of occupation or excitement
malaise
Definition: a general feeling of discomfort, illness, or uneasiness whose exact cause is difficult to identify
home
Does "home" refer to Ciudad Juarez or El Paso?
cacti that bloom into tunasthat turn our fists red.
"Tunas," like in the fish?
I
The format of this poem is three lines per stanza. This differs from many previous poems that have two lines in between each break, possibly a reference to the two cities at the heart of this collection.
Let me washyour face in numbered sections
"Numbered sections" like the border fence
because you don’t have a social security number
Such a specific and interesting title
kiss throughthe diamond mouth of a metal fence
The physical border (a fence) that separates the two lovers, in addition to the legal status that separates them.
why we never married
I thought they were married? Unless this is not referring to Angel and the narrator?
hate this number
Does she hate it because it separates the two of them? Meaning, the social security number represents how she is a legal U.S. citizen, while the "you" is not. This difference forces them a part
357
Is there a significance to this number? Not only is it repeated several times in this poem, but also it is mentioned in a previous poem.
dust storm
This reminds me of the Dust Bowl and the hardships faced by the Americans who endured it. The story told in this poem is much more horrific, however it is not publicized or well known.
when it will rain againto pulp this paper into somethingsolid
Insinuating that these flyers are not doing any "solid" or beneficial work since the girls in them are most likely already dead?
these flierswill never quit
Will these flyers also never quit being posted because femicide will not be stopped and the young women will not stop from going missing?
Her physical description readslike an epitaph looking for its grave
I felt that this should be highlighted, however I do not know what to say about it. It is simply shocking and saddening...
epitaph
Definition: a phrase or form of words written in memory of a person who has died, especially as an inscription on a tombstone.
a seventeen-year-old girl I knew
How many girls and women have fallen victim to femicide? Specifically, how many has the author lost to this horror?
barbed wire rustof the border fence
One of many incidences where the author utilizes the senses to help us readers really imagine the setting
bleached quiet
Usually the phrase is "bleached white." Why is this "bleached quiet"?
human skull was of a girl aged 16–22.
A very young girl...extremely sad. I wonder if she was a victim of femicide or if she attempted to cross the border and failed?
I’d never really seen violenceuntil that day
This encounter obviously left a significant impact on the archeologist. I wonder if this poem is telling a true story, and if so, what is this archeologist doing now. Is he stilling hunting trilobites and ferns? Or has he started looking for my bodies to provide closure for grieving families?
remainsnot worth burial or the glass case of a museum
I think this is the most powerful sentence in the entire poem, so it is fitting that it is the final line. Furthermore, this statement may be the most impactful one I have read thus far within The Verging Cities.
to love a place quiet, pull it off you,
What are the underlying meanings of these phrases?
A woman,her teeth blanched yellow, her cartilageslooped over her face. The archeologistleft her severed body for the sunto eat
Why was his initial instinct to just leave the human remains? Was he afraid? In shock? Unsure of what to do?
trilobites
According to Wikipedia, these are "extinct marine arthropods"
I found your ten-year-oldface under the laminate of the border crosservisa
He used to be legal? What happened that resulted in him losing his ability to cross the border?
bt
Again, who is "BT"?
Cashier’s Check: 1500 dollars paid tohomeland security. Check: 600 dollars paid
I think that the author truly loved Angel, but the marriage was still forced. The had to pay these fees to go through with the forging of the documents.
Wife’s name: natalie scenters-zapicode maldonado, to show commitment
The "commitment" to make the marriage look more real?
Bertha’s Immigration: We Are Not A Legal Service.
Fake documents to help with Angel's immigration status
We leak letters, small check mark
Getting married should be an intimate, celebrated, and powerful experience, not one that is composed of filling out a questionnaire and redundantly checking boxes. However, due to their circumstances, this route is what they had to take.
bt and mb and utb
Who do the "BT," "MB," and "UTB" initials refer to?
A signatureof a man, the ink a black hole that swallowseach memory of light.
Is the signature from his father? Does the "swallows each memory of light" mean that this man took away the happiness in Angel's life? Did they have a poor relationship, if one at all?
broken initials
Is this the story of the illegal forging of marriage papers to help Angel stay in the United States?
Above me, leavesare suspended from the ceiling, leavesthat float up to the bare lightbulb that isto them a moon.
Perspective of the ants; does the author feel insignificant and small like the ants?
ants
Ants are mentioned several times throughout this poem. What is the significance?
Whenhe called you Illegal, he askedhow I’d made love to an angel of other,how our bodies had not shatteredin sin
This further exemplifies that they are from two different backgrounds, and probably one from each of the sister-cities (the author from El Paso and Angel from Ciudad Juarez?). I would classify them as "star-crossed lovers." Like in Romeo and Juliet, others look down upon their pairing.
the border agent, how he put his handon your head, how he lead youto the car, how he arrested your body
Angel, I'm assuming, was arrested for being an illegal immigrant. The author's sorrow is probably a result of this trauma
perform Mass
Like a funeral?
i light the house on fire and lie down
Produces the ideas of despair, giving up
The stanzas are in groups of three in this poem, unlike two in many other poems in this collection.