"all of Moab"

So how do we want to address these issues in poetry?

Not entirely clear what this means.

I'm not sure I'd want to use a highly irregular (probably scribal error?) as one of our examples. I'd think it'd be best to stick to conventional orthography.

I'm not sure this is a good example. אורב is probably a conventional noun here rather than something that might otherwise be taken in a verbal sense.

Might it be more accurate to say a nominative meaning?

"...and both are definite."

I think it would be much easier to just translate this "ambushers" which would help to not lose the sense of the Hebrew as well as bring clarity to the translation.

I think its actually done with "O'".... rather than with "oh"

It seems to me that you could put this in bold as well, making it an even stronger example.

inanimate

independent

This translation feels a little loose and interpretive to me. I prefer the more literal translation on the line above... but that may just be a matter of personal preference.

I'd stick with died rather than was killed (נהרג) as the more precise translation - "And Uriah the Hittite also died"

"Eber lived 30 year and 400 year"

"Adam lived 900 year and 30 year and he died"

I'd probably just delete these two words since this use of "plus" may not be common in "international English"

This is fine, but I wonder if we're wise to use a less common use of ראש here, because lacking the context the student/pastor would naturally assume that the meaning is "the head is one" or something akin to that.

Since with gender there are only two options I'm not sure this sentence actually helps.

but it often... (the words got transposed by accident I think)

"being" (singular), perhaps "of any being of the field"?

Up above there is an example with בתי הגדולה and we translated it "older", now here we're saying הקטן actually means "youngest" (not "younger"). Its fine as you have it, but I'm wondering if it will confuse people who might think that it ought to be "younger/youngest" just as the former one probably should be "older/oldest".

Perhaps "said" or "spoke" rather than "have spoken"?

Perhaps this is irrelevant, but it could also be translated as "My master is a wise man"

perhaps "bigger/older" for the third line (more literal) translation?