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  1. Nov 2017
    1. The genre is dead. Invent something new. Invent a man and a woman naked in a garden, invent a child that will save the world, a man who carries his father out of a burning city. Invent a spool of thread that leads a hero to safety, invent an island on which he abandons the woman who saved his life with no loss of sleep over his betrayal.

      Explaining what people have done; or what they're going to do, what they're creating. Is this referring to the past or present?

    1. Yet none of it struck him quite as much as the sensation that there was someone or something else in that grim room, both unseen and present, and coming for him as much as for anybody. ♦

      What is coming for him? Death...the government because he had broken rules? I'm confused and this is a very strong cliff hanger.

    2. It would surely count toward completion of Module 19, which emphasized empathy for the dispossessed.

      It seems like this new government controls emotions, understanding of social experiences, intelligence, etc. This reminds me of Spiderhead and how their little jail system was able to control people and make them all the same; similar to that of robots.

    3. He was from nowhere, too.” “Nowhere?” “Like you.” Not for the first time the boy was struck by the great human mysteries of this world.

      Is there no civilization? Is Earth now "no where"

    4. He knew he was being cruel—but she was ruining his concentration. He stopped running and split the visuals, the better to stare her down. “Any system?” “No.” “Therefore no. No, you can’t.”

      Is the Augmentor a form of social status?

    5. “Everyone’s got a good angel and a bad angel,” she explained. “And if it’s a bad angel that picks you out”—she pointed to a craft swooping low—“there’s no escaping it. You’re done for.”

      Are they in hell? Are they comparing Earth (in the story Earth seems to be in ruins) to Hell or Heaven?

    6. I’ve done nothing wrong but still Melly’s gone and left me and one of them thing’s been following me, since the pier—even before that.”

      What has been following her? Are the "followers" what destroyed DC?

    7. He wanted to augment in clean, blank places, where he was free to fully extend, unhindered.

      Do you write history (facts) within this game? I feel like this story has not given us much background, as if the author just suspects this is the type of world we live in and that we simply understand it all.

    8. “Got something in his hands—or thinks he does.” She took a packet of tobacco from a deep pocket in the front of her garment and began to roll a cigarette, using the girl as a shield from the wind.

      Is this all imaginary? Is this part of a realistic video game or is it all actually happening?

    9. A hand, lousy with blue veins, reached out for the light encircling the boy’s head, as if it were a substantial thing, to be grasped like the handle of a mug. “Ooh, look at the green, Aggie. That shows you it’s on.” The boy was ready to play. He touched the node on his finger to the node at his temple, raising the volume.

      This sounds a lot like a black mirror episode

  2. Oct 2017
    1. Alexie, “How to Write . . .” Sherman Alexie, “How to Write the Great American Indian Novel” (1996) All of the Indians must have tragic features: tragic noses, eyes, and arms. Their hands and fingers must be tragic when they reach for tragic food. The hero must be a half-breed, half white and half Indian, preferably from a horse culture. He should often weep alone. That is mandatory. If the hero is an Indian woman, she is beautiful. She must be slender and in love with a white man. But if she loves an Indian man then he must be a half-breed, preferably from a horse culture.

      Why the use/repetition of "must." Perhaps it is emphasizing the usages of stereotypes within the lines?

    2. should express deep affection in a childlike way.

      We aren't born with revenge or hatred. We accumulate it somehow. However children don't accumulate it like adults do, they're somewhat immune and innocent. Children don't have stereotypes, and are not born mean. We as a population do these cruel things to ourselves and others overtime.

    3. For this, we need children. A white child and an Indian child, gender not important

      Hope for a new/better generation. We hope that each generation moves away from stereotypes.

    4. In the Great American Indian novel, when it is finally written, all of the white people will be Indians and all of the Indians will be ghosts. div.wpmrec2x{max-width:610px;} div.wpmrec2x div.u > div{float:left;margin-right:10px;} div.wpmrec2x div.u > div:nth-child(3n){margin-right:0px;}

      This is such a powerful way to end the prom. I believe it is saying that although the Native Americans were here first, the white men claimed it and still believe its always been there. The white people claim they're the native americans, while the actual native americans are dead because they were innocently murdered fighting for their home.

    5. An Indian man can be hidden inside a white woman. An Indian woman can be hidden inside a white man. In these rare instances, everybody is a half-breed struggling to learn more about his or her horse culture. There must be redemption, of course, and sins must be forgiven.

      Their is Indian culture inside all of us, it is only masked by our physical features. I believe this quote means that we're all more alike than we know.

  3. Sep 2017
    1. Upon its head, with red extended mouth and solitary eye of fire, sat the hideous beast whose craft had seduced me into murder, and whose informing voice had consigned me to the hangman. I had walled the monster up within the tomb!

      His paranoia and hauntings never die

    2. I soundly and tranquilly slept; aye, slept even with the burden of murder upon my soul!

      Definitely a bit confusing...was the cat and the wife the same individual? Or did the man just confuse the two separately because they liked one another and he was jealous? Were they both just reminders of past guilt/anger/sadness that he wanted gone forever?

    3. I soundly and tranquilly slept; aye, slept even with the burden of murder upon my soul!

      Blames the cat as the burden on his soul but truly he is only growing more ill with paranoia

    4. But this blow was arrested by the hand of my wife. Goaded, by the interference, into a rage more than demoniacal, I withdrew my arm from her grasp and buried the axe in her brain. She fell dead upon the spot, without a groan.

      I believe he crazily thought he had to kill his wife because she was merely just an obstacle keeping him from killing his demons...which is perceived as the black cat but is really his own mind.

    5. there came back into my spirit a half-sentiment that seemed, but was not, remorse.

      Why is it that at one point he feels guilt and then later on he feels "no remorse?" Is it just that he sickly get used to his cruel thoughts and actions?

    6. It was a black cat — a very large one — fully as large as Pluto, and closely resembling him in every respect but one. Pluto had not a white hair upon any portion of his body; but this cat had a large, although indefinite splotch of white, covering nearly the whole region of the breast.

      hallucination?

    7. One night as I sat, half stupified, in a den of more than infamy, my attention was suddenly drawn to some black object, reposing upon the head of one of the immense hogsheads of Gin, or of Rum, which constituted the chief furniture of the apartment.

      Example of suppressing his brewing emotions with alcohol

    8. On the night of the day on which this cruel deed was done, I was aroused from sleep by the cry of fire. The curtains of my bed were in flames. The whole house was blazing. It was with great difficulty that my wife, a servant, and myself, made our escape from theconflagration. The destruction was complete. My entire worldly wealth was swallowed up, and I resigned myself thenceforward to despair. I am above the weakness of seeking to establish a sequence of cause and effect, between the disaster and the atrocity.

      Karma for his murder of the innocent Black Cat; leads into examples of the cat's hauntings

    9. One morning, in cool blood, I slipped a noose about its neck and hung it to the limb of a tree; — hung it with the tears streaming from my eyes, and with the bitterest remorse at my heart; — hung it because I knew that it had loved me, and because I felt it had given me no reason of offence; — hung it because I knew that in so doing I was committing a sin — a deadly sin that would so jeopardize my immortal soul as to place it — if such a thing were possible — even beyond the reach of the infinite mercy of the Most Merciful and Most Terrible God.

      Example of where the paranoia starts to become evident within his thoughts. The paranoia also plays a role in the envy for the lack of love he is receiving, thus persuading him to kill the cat who he had no connection to anymore. He feels as though if he kills the cat he wont feel the guilt and envy any longer...obviously it doesn't work out that way...

    10. Who has not, a hundred times, found himself committing a vile or a silly action, for no other reason than because he knows he should not?

      Avoidance of conscience; creates a tremendous void in the man's ability to use moral sense and follow both loving and appropriate behavior. What triggered this first, alcohol or a desire for violence?

    11. I knew myself no longer. My original soul seemed, at once, to take its flight from my body; and a more than fiendish malevolence, gin-nurtured, thrilled every fibre of my frame.

      The narrator is experiencing an out of body experience where he has no sense of control. It is almost as if he blacks out traumatic events he causes even when he is not under the influence of alcohol. What does fiendish mean in the context of this sentence?

    12. I had so much of my old heart left, as to be at first grieved by this evident dislike on the part of a creature which had once so loved me.

      The man is feeling very isolated with thoughts of guilt for what he did to his once very loved companion. His mind is struggling to get over the demonic behavior he acted upon and cannot dig itself out of the pit because he is experiencing a underlying lack of love.