I appreciate when an author utilizes line breaks to "slow the readers pace" and add interest. I read a lot and so I have gotten used to speed reading. I think it is important to slow down when reading poetry but It has been a learning curve trying to stop my brain from grouping together words as to comprehend them quicker. It is especially helpful when the author forces you to slow down by breaking up words.

I think the starting image is particularly interesting because of its variety. The author gives us a visceral, layered, and somewhat disturbing image of moths being burned. This is then matched through metaphor with snow, something that is later described as a "simple." It's interesting to see how the author plays with description pulling you one way and then redirecting you another way.

The red wheelbarrow seems like an unimportant item, but it is a foundational piece that this farm relies on. It may not seem like much to us, but to a farmer and his farm, it is essential.

Every line ending in we seems like an interesting choice to me. I wonder if the author did this for emphasis, or for the rhythm of the poem