Call: lm(formula = EFFECT_CARE_COMM ~ COMMUNITY + GROWTH, data = selectdata)
im fine with you guys keeping these outputs but ideally they should go into some other nicer looking table
Call: lm(formula = EFFECT_CARE_COMM ~ COMMUNITY + GROWTH, data = selectdata)
im fine with you guys keeping these outputs but ideally they should go into some other nicer looking table
(p= 0.369
with this p value does the unit increase in feelings really indicate the increase in care-based intervention support?
Figure 6
figure 6 does not appear labeled, maybe "figure 6" is cut off by the image being cut off? either way i dont see figure captions
Predictors of Perceived Effectiveness of Violence Prevention Approaches
going to need to fix presentation of the graphs, things are cut off, the legend is blocking a bit of the graph too
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from here on i wont comment on output, just get rid of it unless it contains something that you dont report in a figure caption/paragraph
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get rid of this output
Wilcoxon rank sum test with continuity correction data: selectdata$EFFECT_CARE_COMM and selectdata$EFFECT_FEAR_POLICE W = 2644, p-value = 3.19e-09 alternative hypothesis: true location shift is not equal to 0
this output isn't awful but since you're reporting the findings already i would say there's no need for this
inventions
interventions
4.80 and 4.76. On the other hand, policing, a fear-based strategy, has the lowest rated agreement regarding effectiveness, with a mean of 3.20.
these do not match your figure?
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output
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unnecessary
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get rid of this output too
Attaching package: 'ggplot2' The following objects are masked from 'package:psych': %+%, alpha
see if you can get rid of this output
Normality
section is nicely done
surveyed
comma before 29
plot(lm_primary_data
This is not ggplot, I would recommend using ggplot because the look of the graph will be a lot more customizable
geom_histogram(binwidth = .5)
With your scale for the x-axis, you should edit the binwidth so each bar on the histogram is more visible
While these results expand on earlier research, the study had some limitations
Probably best to make limitations its own paragraph
Gender Differences in Self-Efficacy
I like the structure of this section! I don't have any edits to make here.
Print the Test
I would add some explanation between each output. What do these numbers mean for your results?
Visualize
If possible, change "GENDER01" just to "Gender" as the legend title
Transform
Your inline comments are very good, I would recommend adding just a small paragraph at the end of this section explaining your preprocessing (removing NAs, transforming variables, etc)
This study explored whether self-efficacy differed between genders, asking the research question: Are there differences in different groups of self-efficacy based on gender?
I think the inclusion of the research question feels a bit forced and awkward. Unless Dr. Shane specifically said you have to include your research question like this, I would reword the sentence to just start with "This study explored..." and then just explain what you did rather than end the sentence with a question mark.
Discussion
Overall solid section, I like how you briefly reexplain the process and what the relationships turned out to be. Additionally, it was good to propose an explanation for your results. If I were to add anything, it would be explaining why you suggest those certain topics for future research.
These findings fail to reject the null hypothesis,
Good!
yellow
Again, the yellow is not very visible
Motivations to Start Using Social Medi
I know there are figure captions for each graph, but you should also have a small summarization at the end of each section (1.4.2, 1.4.3, etc) that motivates why you chose certain variables and explains your results a bit.
"yellow"
I'm not loving the color choice here it is not very visible on a white background. Some people might have dark mode but it should be visible in both modes.
status_plot + labs (x = "Participants' perceived social status on a scale of 1-10 (ladder method)")
Graph title?
Transform
After this section, you should include a small paragraph explaining your preprocessing (2-3 sentences maybe). Generally no need to explain your library imports, but you should give some broad info on what all your variables cover.