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  1. Nov 2025
    1. Call: lm(formula = EFFECT_CARE_COMM ~ COMMUNITY + GROWTH, data = selectdata)

      im fine with you guys keeping these outputs but ideally they should go into some other nicer looking table

    2. Predictors of Perceived Effectiveness of Violence Prevention Approaches

      going to need to fix presentation of the graphs, things are cut off, the legend is blocking a bit of the graph too

    3. Warning: Removed 2 rows containing non-finite outside the scale range (`stat_count()`).

      from here on i wont comment on output, just get rid of it unless it contains something that you dont report in a figure caption/paragraph

    4. <theme> List of 2 $ axis.text.x : <ggplot2::element_text> ..@ family : NULL ..@ face : NULL ..@ italic : chr NA ..@ fontweight : num NA ..@ fontwidth : num NA ..@ colour : NULL ..@ size : NULL ..@ hjust : num 1 ..@ vjust : NULL ..@ angle : num 45 ..@ lineheight : NULL ..@ margin : NULL ..@ debug : NULL ..@ inherit.blank: logi FALSE $ panel.spacing: 'simpleUnit' num 1lines ..- attr(*, "unit")= int 3 @ complete: logi FALSE @ validate: logi TRUE

      get rid of this output

    5. Wilcoxon rank sum test with continuity correction data: selectdata$EFFECT_CARE_COMM and selectdata$EFFECT_FEAR_POLICE W = 2644, p-value = 3.19e-09 alternative hypothesis: true location shift is not equal to 0

      this output isn't awful but since you're reporting the findings already i would say there's no need for this

    6. 4.80 and 4.76. On the other hand, policing, a fear-based strategy, has the lowest rated agreement regarding effectiveness, with a mean of 3.20.

      these do not match your figure?

    1. Transform

      Your inline comments are very good, I would recommend adding just a small paragraph at the end of this section explaining your preprocessing (removing NAs, transforming variables, etc)

    2. This study explored whether self-efficacy differed between genders, asking the research question: Are there differences in different groups of self-efficacy based on gender?

      I think the inclusion of the research question feels a bit forced and awkward. Unless Dr. Shane specifically said you have to include your research question like this, I would reword the sentence to just start with "This study explored..." and then just explain what you did rather than end the sentence with a question mark.

    1. Discussion

      Overall solid section, I like how you briefly reexplain the process and what the relationships turned out to be. Additionally, it was good to propose an explanation for your results. If I were to add anything, it would be explaining why you suggest those certain topics for future research.

    2. Motivations to Start Using Social Medi

      I know there are figure captions for each graph, but you should also have a small summarization at the end of each section (1.4.2, 1.4.3, etc) that motivates why you chose certain variables and explains your results a bit.

    3. "yellow"

      I'm not loving the color choice here it is not very visible on a white background. Some people might have dark mode but it should be visible in both modes.

    4. Transform

      After this section, you should include a small paragraph explaining your preprocessing (2-3 sentences maybe). Generally no need to explain your library imports, but you should give some broad info on what all your variables cover.