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    Mina Loy Biography Project
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    1. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      Thee I Call Thee

      Could be Dada, but is this a typo?

    2. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      attendance

      attending?

    3. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      then

      A little confusing about when "then" is; maybe move the parenthetical to the end of the sentence?

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    Kaitlin – Mina Loy Biography Project
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    1. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      Julien Levy

      Might it be worth mentioning here that Levy became Loy's son-in-law?

    2. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      are credited

      Who credits Bunuel with this praise?

    3. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      are described

      Who described them this way?

    4. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      took Buñuel

      delete?

    5. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      Despite Buñuel’s comradery among Parisian Surrealists, extreme rightists often scrutinized his work. At the premiere of L’Âge d’Or on December 3, 1930, a group of rightist youths attacked the Parisian theatre and police mandated that the film be banned in Paris (Buñuel).

      With what specifically did they take issue in Bunuel's film?

    6. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      sought

      seek

    7. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      other fellow

      I think you could just choose one of these adjectives.

    8. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      the rigid social structure

      Could you be a little more specific here? With what did Bunuel take issue in regards to this social structure?

    9. hadlockj 06 Nov 2017
      died out

      This wording is a little awkward.

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