Thee I Call Thee
Could be Dada, but is this a typo?
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attendance
attending?
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then
A little confusing about when "then" is; maybe move the parenthetical to the end of the sentence?
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Julien Levy
Might it be worth mentioning here that Levy became Loy's son-in-law?
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are credited
Who credits Bunuel with this praise?
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are described
Who described them this way?
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took Buñuel
delete?
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Despite Buñuel’s comradery among Parisian Surrealists, extreme rightists often scrutinized his work. At the premiere of L’Âge d’Or on December 3, 1930, a group of rightist youths attacked the Parisian theatre and police mandated that the film be banned in Paris (Buñuel).
With what specifically did they take issue in Bunuel's film?
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sought
seek
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other fellow
I think you could just choose one of these adjectives.
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the rigid social structure
Could you be a little more specific here? With what did Bunuel take issue in regards to this social structure?
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died out
This wording is a little awkward.
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