So soft!—a handful of intangible ash with fixed, ignited eyes.
The innocence of the rabbit is contrasted by the devastation of the fire.
So soft!—a handful of intangible ash with fixed, ignited eyes.
The innocence of the rabbit is contrasted by the devastation of the fire.
frail, illegal fire balloons appear. Climbing the mountain height, rising toward a saint
Juxtaposition between the "illegal balloons" and their movement towards something as holy/venerable as a saint. Italic
for Robert Lowell
Elizabeth Bishop and Robert Lowell were such good friends and often wrote poems in relation to each other. I believe that she wrote this poem as a response to his poem "Skunk Hour" or he wrote his poem as a response to this one.
she had felt from the first that, in a community where the amenities of living could be obtained only at the cost of efforts as arduous as her husband's professional labors, such brief leisure as they could command should be used as an escape from immediate preoccupations, a flight to the life they always dreamed of living. Once or twice, now that this new life had actually drawn its magic circle about them, she had asked herself if she had done right; but hitherto such conjectures had been no more than the retrospective excursions of an active fancy. Now, for the first time, it startled her a little to find how little she knew of the material foundation on which her happiness was built.
the downside of the affluent lifestyle
But almost with the next tick of the clock the ambiguous figure, gaining substance and character, showed itself even to her weak sight as her husband's; and she turned away to meet him, as he entered, with the confession of her folly.
relate to northanger abbey- ways in which the gothic is projected onto everyday things?
Song, like a wing, tears through my breast, my side,
Goes against the romantic (masculine) view of poetry that says that the art=child and poet=parent
This flesh will never give a child its mother,
rejection of motherhood
tricks of lust and pride.
two of the seven deadly sins
Cassandra
allusion to woman in Greek myth, cursed to give prophesies that no one believed.
Suggests female speaker who is considered to be an "other"-- rejection of standard femininity?
Upon a broken world.
Alludes to the first World War and how the world was literally broken into various alliances .
To-day I can only gather it And put it into my lunch-box,
Peace cannot happen in this moment. The speaker can only carry the hope of eventual peace with her going forward.
afternoon And turn it in my fingers,
Afternoon as something tangible and small like the berries placed in the pasteboard.
Two little boys, lying flat on their faces, Were carefully gathering red berries To put in a pasteboard box.
Describes a beautiful fall day alongside the image of two boys sitting. Youth equals innocence and peace.
September, 1918
In the middle of World War 1
Some day there will be no war,
The poem shifts at this moment. Breaks the picturesque moment of two boys peacefully sitting and reminds the reader of the realities of war.
dear familiar gods of home
Sarton again highlights the importance of the domestic, how these seemingly small parts of the home result in the happiness of people..
Out of the silence in the empty house each day
Emphasis on the simple moments of live as well as the solitary moments.
But is creation itself like the growth of a tree. No one has seen it happen, but inside the bark Another circle is growing in the expanding ring. No one has heard the root go deeper in the dark, But the tree is lifted by this inward work And its plumes shine, and its leaves are glittering.
The imagery of the outward growth of tree rings is connected to the idea of happiness. As the tree rings grows internally and moves outward, so does happiness, regardless if the person is aware that it is happening.
That blame is just as dear as Praise And Praise as mere as Blame -
These lines stand out from the rest of the poem and I am struggling to understand their meaning in relation to the rest of the poem. The poem could have very well ended with the stanza before these two lines and could have had a very different tone.
Hills you left for me to Hue - There was no Purple suitable - You took it all with you -
The flowers all grow in Spring and suffer when that season ends.
That April - Lock the Door - I will not be pursued -
Speaker wants to enjoy the time she has with the month of March, not rush it in order to let the next month in.
Letter, and the Birds -
Receiving the physical message as well as the signs that March was coming through nature.
That gentlemen so sprightlyConduct the pleasing scene!
Not only would her death not be life changing and peaceful, but people would be pleased by her death.
gurgle
I enjoy the way that the word "gurgle" is used in relation to time. The word is normally used in reference to water but having it describe time makes time feel much more fluid and unstructured.
If I should
Focuses on the hypothetical--not the probability or the reality of their death.
Rabbi of the Wise Book
Rabbi= Jewish word for teacher and was a title that Jesus' apostles used to refer to him. Is the speaker addressing God by this title or asking an religious authority after all earthly sources of knowledge (science, math, etc.) failed to give them an answer?
I went to School But was not wiser
things taught in the formal educational setting vs. the things taught through experience. Dickinson is highlighting the importance of the informal education formed through experience.
Knows how to forget!
She begins the poem with a statement that causes so many questions: Who knows? What is there to forget?
When one learn how
The irony of having to learn the skill of forgetting.
Flap past it to the Farmer’s Corn –
Consumers need new material to be satisfied so once they are finished with one thing, they quickly move on to the next and repeat the process with a new person.
THE river sings his ancient song Upon his stony bed,
River as masculine
the captive cries! Fade swiftly then, thou lingering year, Test with the storms our eager powers; For chains are broken with the hours, And Freedom waits upon thy bier.
In reference to the Civil War--wanting the war to end so that the speaker's soldier's death worth it
Under the flowers my soldier lies!
The tone switches in this stanza--the first two are beautiful homages to Autumn and now it switches to death.
My son.
Reminds me of the voice of God speaking in reference to Jesus in several stories in the New Testament
Woman of nerve and thought, Bring in the urn your power! By you is manhood taught To meet the supreme hour.
This stanza is really interesting for me because the speaker is encouraging women to act in ways that defy feminine standards and act more "masculine"
"The vine shall give her fruit, and the ground shall give her increase, and the heavens shall give their dew."
Zechariah 8:12-- the verse talks about Jerusalem.
tand thou with me and watch his eager feet. He stays not for the drought, Nor lingers in the shade, Save where the clover and the streamlet meet; There, quiet, unafraid, The tender lambs may feed While the calm noon gives rest to those who are in need.
The shepherd has to work in the bright sun and in uncomfortable situations in order to lead the sheep.
singing
creating art
the figure of a man who was crossing the meadow below looked like a malicious black insect. It was an old man, it was Enoch Holt; time had worn and bent him enough to have satisfied his bitterest foe. The women could see his empty coat-sleeve flutter as he walked slowly and unexpectantly in that glorious evening light.
The image of Holt, old and poor, can provide the women with a sense of justice
The sisters had been rich for one night; in the morning they waked to find themselves poor with a bitter pang of poverty of which they had never dreamed.
Not only the literal poverty that comes from them losing the gold, but also the fact that they lost the opportunity to make lives for themselves.
"Father never liked to leave no great of a fire, even though he slept right here in the bedroom. He said this floor was one that would light an' catch easy, you r'member." "Another winter we can move down and take the bedroom ourselves -- 'twill be warmer for us," suggested Hannah; but Betsey shook her head doubtfully. The thought of their old father's grave, unwatched and undefended in the outermost dark field, filled their hearts with a strange tenderness. They had been his dutiful, patient slaves, and it seemed like disloyalty to have abandoned the poor shape; to be sitting there disregarding the thousand requirements and services of the past. More than all, they were facing a free future; they were their own mistresses at last, though past sixty years of age. Hannah was still a child at heart. She chased away a dread suspicion, when Betsey forbade the wood, lest this elder sister, who favored their father's looks, might take his place as stern ruler of the household.
The sisters worked to be their father's "dutiful patient slaves" that they do not have the ability to make their own decisions without thinking of their father.
She had formed a pacific habit of suiting her remarks to his point of view to save an outburst.
Sacrificing her own speech for the sake of pleasing her husband
He knew at once that she loved Dick, and determined not to stay and see her his wife; for he couldn't be with her after that, you know, and then she might think he had killed himself. It was half revenge, and half sorrow, he s
Were his actions out of genuine sorrow for "losing" Jenny?
Neither of the brothers ever married, and both died years ago. Dick is buried by Jenny Garrow's side.
Demonstrates Dick's love for Jenny
He seemed to be entirely changed after that. Dick was liberated, of course; and they settled down together on the old Tyler Farm
Okay this is not a serious annotation but this has to be the weirdest family dynamic of all time.
"For Heaven's sake, William Tyler, where did you come from?"
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quick, sharp voice, so unlike her own that I wondered if it really was hers,
Speaker, Margery is now starting to notice that she doesn't really know everything about her friend
Jenny Garrow -- Jenny Garrow still -- was sitting by me on the grass. Poor Jenny! She wasn't so gay as she used to be, but more quiet and thoughtful -- sometimes sad.
Will's murder affected her in a way that she was unable to marry.
"Where's Dick?" to see what he would say. "I don't know nor care," said he; and some one spoke to me, and I left him.
I'm sensing some "Cain and Abel" tension going on. It reminds me of when Cain is asked where Abel is, he replies "I am not my brother's keeper" because he does not want to admit to murdering him.
Of course she had plenty of lovers, and no wonder; for, besides the nice girl she was, Farmer Garrow's purse was well filled. She was the only child.
Are these suitors interested in Jenny because she's wonderful or because she will inherit a large fortune?
the Friend those other fishermen found, who were mending their nets on the shores of Galilee!
Making an allusion to Jesus Christ into one that Georgie would identify with rather than just saying that they hope he meets God.
knew where the flowers grew under them, and where the ferns were greenest, and it was as much home to me as my own house. They grew on the side of a hill, and the sun always shone through the tops of the trees as it went down, while below it was all in shadow
Shows the speaker's attention to detail--especially in regards to nature
I always wanted to see something of the world. I never have been but dreadful little ways from home. I used to wish I could keep school; and once my uncle was agent for his district, and he said I could have a chance; but the folks laughed to think o' me keeping school, and I never said any thing more about it. But you see it might 'a' led to something. I always wished I could go to Boston. I suppose you've been there? There! I couldn't live out o' sight o' the woods, I don't believe."
Cynthia is torn between the life she knows and the want for self betterment and adventure.
"She's going to move up to Boston 'long of her son," said one of the women, who looked very pleasant and very tired. "I think myself it's a bad plan to pull old folks up by the roots. There's a niece o' hers that would have been glad to stop with her, and do for the old lady. But John, he's very high-handed, and wants it his way, and he says his mother sha'n't live in no such a place as this. He makes a sight o' money. He's got out a patent, and they say he's just bought a new house that cost him eleven thousand dollars. But old Mis' Wallis, she's wonted here; and she was telling of me yesterday she was only going to please John. He says he wants her up there, where she'll be more comfortable, and see something."
Tensions between city and rural life, especially leaving small towns for the city.
best jacket and trousers (which might have been most boys' worst)
Jewett's way of hinting that his family is poor
rest of the men never froze." That was it, -- the "rest of the men;" and he would work until he dropped, or tend a line until his fingers froze, for the sake of that likeness,
Demonstrates Georgie's desperate need to belong somewhere. He views the fishing community as the one place in which he can find that sense of community.
(I hope that day has already dawned)
When is Jewett's speaker writing this? How far into the future is she hoping this for him?
idle, pleasant days that I spent by the sea.
Jewett is describing the picturesque "lazy summer"
She's
Emphasizes lack of mother-- Ander is the father