114 Matching Annotations
  1. Jan 2023
    1. Boys only want love if it's tortureDon't say I didn't say, I didn't warn ya

      line repeated twice, emphasizes the point she's making, which is to warn her audience about the negative parts of love

    2. Rose garden filled with thorns

      beauty and perfection on the outside but painful and negative on the inside, could be reflecting her personality or the relationship she's describing

    3. Find out what you wantBe that girl for a monthWait, the worst is yet to come

      she acts like the ideal woman at first but once you get to know her she turns out to be different than expected

    4. Nice to meet you, where you been

      contradictory statements, "nice to meet you" implies it's their first time meeting, but "where you been" implies that she's been waiting or expecting this meeting

    1. Take me homeJust take me homeYeah, just take me home

      repetition of "take me home" implies her longing to go home and be alone, she maybe has finally had enough of the uncertainty of this relationship

    1. He will not go behind his father's saying, And he likes having thought of it so well He says again, ‘Good fences make good neighbors.

      still believes same idea, was his father's, conforming to generations of standards and expectations

    2. It comes to little more: There where it is we do not need the wall:

      the narrator doesn't fully believe in the walls importance, doesn't think it's necessary, but builds it anyway

    3. Stay where you are until our backs are turned

      the boulders only need to stay until their backs are turned, implying this wall only matters when it is visible and relevant the the author/neighbor

    4. No one has seen them made or heard them made

      could be referring to societal gaps, no one has seen/heard them because they are simply constructs and not physical things, possibly questioning life and its meaning

    5. they have left not one stone on a stone

      things are out of place, feel wrong or unnatural, could be speaking literally or referring to a metaphorical sense of discomfort/displacement

    1. (the joking voice, a gesture I love)

      phrase in parentheses disrupts poem structure, which has stayed the same throughout and now changes in the final stanza; descriptions, likely referring to a person

    2. two cities, lovely ones. And, vaster, some realms I owned, two rivers

      repetition of the number 2, "two cities," "two rivers," archetype refers to contrast, author has opinion contrasting with typically expressed opinions about losing

    3. places, and names, and where it was you meant to travel. None of these will bring disaster

      referring to forgetting or letting go, being carefree; encouraging loss of order or schedule, implying that going with the flow and not always having a plan isn't disastrous, message of not getting caught up in a plan or schedule

  2. Dec 2022
    1. pinkrice-grains, ink-       bespattered jelly fish, crabs like green       lilies

      once again using very descriptive language, emphasizing the beauty of the ocean

    2. there for the submerged shafts of the sun,split like spun       glass, move themselves with spotlight swiftness       into the crevices—              in and out, illuminating theturquoise sea

      very descriptive language of the sun illuminating the sea, emphasizes this connection between our world and the world under the ocean

    1. love’s austere and lonely offices

      to love someone, as the author's father loves him, puts regulations on your life and creates hardships, it's not always easy, but the narrator is appreciative of what his father gave him, further establishes the theme

    1. letting the play develop in front of him in slow motion, almost exactly like a coach’s drawing on the blackboard

      everything going according to plan, builds a sort of hopeful suspense

    2. scissoring past a flat-footed defender who looks stunned and nailed to the floor    in the wrong direction,

      very detailed description, narrator is paying a lot of attention to the game, must have an important part in narrator's life

    3. like a cherished possession

      comparison of basketball to cherished possession, demonstrates the importance of the game to the narrator and the significance of the moment being described

    4. A hook shot kisses the rim and hangs there, helplessly,

      personification of the shot, provides suspense and meaning, the contrast of positive connotation of the word "kisses" to the negative connotation of "helplessly" demonstrates the feeling of disappointment