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  1. Last 7 days
    1. My family lived like that for a few year. Finally, my mom found a job at a small company and has good money. My brother and sister all graduated and have jobs. My small family now has come back with laughter and love that I never thought it would be again. I am so proud of my mom who always stands by her kids even when she was broke and lost. She never left us alone. (420 words)

      Upgraded thesis statement: The family passed for two phases, one before the parents got divorced and after it, but it both you can see they had happy moments. The second had more sacrifices to do, but in the end they had a good life.

    2. He left my mom who did not have any job and three children who were still in school.

      This sentence shows one of the most difficult causes that made the hard moment the family had to live. Struggling with that must be really difficult, because they were by themselves and no one else.