108 Matching Annotations
  1. Oct 2024
    1. “you are saved: what has cast such a shadow upon you?” “The negro.”

      Is he now scared of all black people?

    2. all is owing to Providence

      would providence really apply to saving a slaver?

    3. Most negroes are natural valets and hair-dressers

      Negative stereotyping that re-enforces the belief that black individuals are not being treated equally as previously stated

    4. dare say, Spaniards in the main are as good folks as any in Duxbury, Massachusett

      This seems unlikely given past descriptions of their actions

    5. the tyranny in Don Benito’s treatment of Atufal, the black

      Overall getting the message that Melville is trying to depict old Europeans as monsters and Americans as more "humane"

    6. But they were too stupid. Besides, who ever heard of a white so far a renegade as to apostatize from his very species almost, by leaguing in against it with negroes

      More prejudice!

    7. they seemed at once tender of heart and tough of constitution; equally ready to die for their infants or fight for them.

      So do most other mothers thus showing how stupid the concept of racism is.

    8. His attention had been drawn to a slumbering negress,

      The fact the spainards take women as slaves shows their cruelty and how contradictory they are to being "civilized"

    9. Don Benito’s confessed ill opinion of his crew

      showing how just because someone is a certain race or nationality, does not mean they are competent or better than another

    10. but poor Babo here, in his own land, was only a poor slave; a black man’s slave was Babo, who now is the white’s.”

      A detailed potryal of the awfulness of both sides of the atlantic slave trade where tribal leaders sold slaves to white europeans

    11. like a brave prisoner

      Is he not a prisioner?

    12. shepherds to your flock of black sheep?”

      Could be a double meaning for converting the slaves to christianity?

    13. “Pretty serious sport, truly,

      Bro thinks he's Gatsby

    14. South Americans of his class. Though on the present voyage sailing from Buenos Ayres, he had avowed himself a native and resident of Chili,

      Does the setting also make this american literature then (takes place in south america)

    15. “Don Benito, I envy you such a friend; slave I cannot call him.”

      Then does this not kind of invalidate the whole concept of slavery and racism the spainards participate in?

    16. Oh, my God!

      Shocked a publisher would allow this in Melville's time

    17. biting his lip, biting his finger-nail, flushing, paling, twitching his beard

      Herman's description here is an excellent use of show dont tell. Good Job!

    18. American

      The identity of the american is a lot less descriptive then the spainard, possible eluding to the concept of the melting pot

    19. unsophisticated Africans.

      Melville shows a common belief of civilzed vs uncivilized

    20. Manilla

      Philipines?

    21. more especially the Spaniard

      Same ethnicity as past writers like De la Casas

    22. Whether the ship had a figure-head

      could this mean the captian or the actual ship itself?

    23. carrying negro slaves, amongst other valuable freight

      Author calls people "valuable freight"

    24. white-washed monastery

      Is this a double entendre?

    1. I exist as I am, that is enough,

      Possible top 5 quote in poetry ever?

    2. I swear I will never again mention love or death inside a house,

      Good luck. You did it like a million times in this poem

    3. Sit a while dear son, Here are biscuits to eat and here is milk to drink, But as soon as you sleep and renew yourself in sweet clothes, I kiss you with a good-by kiss and open the gate for your egress hence.

      Whitman's perspectives seem to be very varied and detailed while all retaining the same message about life

    4. I do not despise you priests, all time, the world over, My faith is the greatest of faiths and the least of faiths, Enclosing worship ancient and modern and all between ancient and modern, Believing I shall come again upon the earth after five thousand years, Waiting responses from oracles, honoring the gods, saluting the sun, Making a fetich of the first rock or stump, powowing with sticks in the circle of obis, Helping the llama or brahmin as he trims the lamps of the idols, Dancing yet through the streets in a phallic procession, rapt and austere in the woods a gymnosophist, Drinking mead from the skull-cup, to Shastas and Vedas admirant, minding the Koran,

      Whitmans opinions on religion are seen of high tolerance, a rare sight even now

    5. bestowing them freely on each man and woman

      using both genders puts them on a equal standing almost unheard of from contemporary writings such as Emerson

    6. I am the hounded slave, I wince at the bite of the dogs, Hell and despair are upon me, crack and again crack the marksmen,

      in this metaphor who is the owner that prevents his freedom.

    7. I exist as I am, that is enough,

      This might be the most reassuring and beautiful quote I have heard in a poem.

    8. I hear all sounds running together, combined, fused or following, Sounds of the city and sounds out of the city, sounds of the day and night, Talkative young ones to those that like them, the loud laugh of work-people at their meals, The angry base of disjointed friendship, the faint tones of the sick, The judge with hands tight to the desk, his pallid lips pronouncing a death-sentence, The heave’e’yo of stevedores unlading ships by the wharves, the refrain of the anchor-lifters, The ring of alarm-bells, the cry of fire, the whirr of swift-streaking engines and hose-carts with premonitory tinkles and color’d lights, The steam-whistle, the solid roll of the train of approaching cars,

      Whitman details the aspects of life and death through describing auditory scenarios

    9. What is a man anyhow? what am I? what are you?

      Does Whitman feels less secure with his identity than earlier?

    10. The heavy-lipp’d slave is invited

      Stereotype

    11. And of these one and all I weave the song of myself

      Walt Whitman mirrors the concept from letters from an american farmer as he describes many lives in america and how they "weave the song of myself"

    12. The sharp-hoof’d moose of the north, the cat on the housesill, the chickadee, the prairie-dog, The litter of the grunting sow as they tug at her teats

      nature motif is prevelant

    13. I believe in those wing’d purposes,

      God?

    14. Twenty-eight young men bathe by the shore, Twenty-eight young men and all so friendly; Twenty-eight years of womanly life and all so lonesome.

      what is the signifigance of 28?

    15. He staid with me a week before he was recuperated and pass’d north, I had him sit next me at table

      Whitman shows he favors the north in the civil war era and detests the acts of slavery.

    16. Her father and his friends sat near cross-legged and dumbly smoking, they had moccasins to their feet and large thick blankets hanging from their shoulders, On a bank lounged the trapper, he was drest mostly in skins, his luxuriant beard and curls protected his neck

      Accurate portrayl or ethnic stereotyping?

    17. The suicide sprawls on the bloody floor of the bedroom,

      Isn't this too much of a drastic tonal shift?

    18. all just as immortal and fathomless as myself, (They do not know how immortal, but I know.)

      Religiously or does he actually belive he is immortal?

    19. dead young men and women,

      are the dead men and women metaphorical or actually dead?

    20. Growing among black folks as among white, Kanuck, Tuckahoe, Congressman, Cuff, I give them the same, I receive them the same.

      Rhetoric that match later individuals like MLK

    21. The sickness of one of my folks or of myself, or ill-doing or loss or lack of money, or depressions or exaltations,

      Does this not contradict his past statements and outlooks on the world?

    22. I am satisfied

      what lead him to be so comfortable in his own skin?

    23. Clear and sweet is my soul, and clear and sweet is all that is not my soul.

      if everything is "clear and sweet" then nothing would be as the existence of filth is needed to contextualize cleanness.

    24. Have you felt so proud to get at the meaning of poems?

      Will we ever really know a poems true meaning unless an author explicitly states what it is?

    25. My respiration and inspiration, the beating of my heart, the passing of blood and air through my lungs, The sniff of green leaves and dry leaves, and of the shore and dark-color’d sea-rocks, and of hay in the barn, The sound of the belch’d words of my voice loos’d to the eddies of the wind,

      Wordsworth inspiration of writing?

    26. I CELEBRATE myself, and sing myself,

      self acceptance or narcissism?

    1. the soldier should receive his supply of corn, grind it in his hand-mill, and bake his bread himself.

      someone still has to supply him the corn, making him rely on someone else for his food, thus breaking self-reliance completely down

    2. Shakspeare will never be made by the study of Shakspeare

      Then why preserve or analyze Shakespeare 100s of years later if it is not made by its study?

    3. Welcome evermore to gods and men is the self-helping man. For him all doors are flung wide

      Is man self helping if he relies on a deity?

    4. Consider whether you have satisfied your relations to father, mother, cousin, neighbour, town, cat, and dog; whether any of these can upbraid you.

      Contradictory advice as the Emerson who supported christianity, is actively telling people to not trust their father and mother in direct violation of the fifth commandment

    5. If we cannot at once rise to the sanctities of obedience and faith, let us at least resist our temptations

      Won't human impulse and genetic desires make this next to near impossible

    6. But now we are a mob

      Mobs and group thinking is not new for the 1800's because of past historical examples in places like Greece.

    7. ‘I think,’ ‘I am,’

      It that not the result of what self reliance may preform?

    8. A great man is coming to eat at my house. I do not wish to please him; I wish that he should wish to please me

      Does he mean religion or god?

    9. I suppose no man can violate his nature

      Then how can individuals reform if they cannot violate their nature

    10. It seems to be a rule of wisdom never to rely on your memory alone, scarcely even in acts of pure memory

      Would it not help then to rely on others to take the load of remembering so much?

    11. Meantime nature is not slow to equip us in the prison-uniform of the party to which we adhere.

      How do we get freedom from nature then?

    12. but the great man is he who in the midst of the crowd keeps with perfect sweetness the independence of solitude.

      How can this be beneficial to reject others?

    13. There is the man and his virtues.

      Assumption that all men are inherently virtuous

    14. truth is handsomer than the affectation of love

      Should there not be a balance to avoid a life of misery?

    15. though the wide universe is full of goo

      how do we know/sources?

    16. private heart is true for all men, — that is genius

      can that also breed self-handicapping blind spots?

    17. “Man is his own star;

      does man also not rely on others for sanity.

  2. Sep 2024
    1. I have seen the extreme vanity of this world

      Why believe that god is just then?

    2. And the Lord thy God will put all these curses upon thine enemies, and on them which hate thee, which persecuted thee

      For being christian there is a hilarious irony to the almost Pharisee like attitude of strict Old Testament interpretation

    3. for thy Work shall be rewarded, saith the Lord

      The book of Job (Referenced before) theologically contradicts her statement as the message is that even the most holy and hard working can be screwed over

    4. I was not before so much hemmed in with the merciless and cruel heathen, but now as much with pitiful, tender-hearted and compassionate Christians

      Her own text paints a more nuanced picture of this black and white statement

    5. Lord answered my poor desire

      really discrediting the natives or her husband

    6. strangely did the Lord provide for them; that I did not see (all the time I was among them) one man, woman, or child, die with hunger.

      Contradicts her perception that God is always on the sides of the natives

    7. I cannot but remember how the Indians derided the slowness,

      does this make her somewhat unreliable?

    1. I told them, they had as good knock me in head as starve me to death.

      She was fed why is she talking about the native starving them

    2. where they were boiling corn and beans, which was a lovely sight to see, but I could not get a taste thereof.

      Feels entitled to others food

    3. We took up our packs and along we went, but a wearisome day I had of it.

      Contradicting the previous remove where she almost smugly complemented her ability to carry stuff

    1. Whereupon I asked one of them, whether they intended to kill him; he answered me, they would not

      Either an act of kindness or a profit motive for ransom

    2. Commit thy way unto the Lord; trust also in him; and he shall bring it to pass.

      Then how come you compare yourself to job where it is shown that the world is not fair in the story of job

    3. Then also I took my Bible to read, but I found no comfort here neither

      Im shocked as she always copes with her bible

    4. thought of the English army, and hoped for their coming, and being taken by them, but that failed. I hoped to be carried to Albany, as the Indians had discoursed before, but that failed also

      expecting to be personally saved continues her thoughts of narcissism

    5. Have pity upon me, O ye my Friends, for the Hand of the Lord has touched me

      chosen syndrome continues

    6. fortnight

      FORTNITE!!

    7. Instead of going toward the Bay, which was that I desired

      Self-centered narrative continues

    1. I went with a good load at my back (for they when they went, though but a little way, would carry all their trumpery with them)

      Either complains or brags about carrying her load

    2. Be still, and know that I am God”

      I think she might literally interpert herself/ Self insert into a god role

    3. But the thoughts of my going homeward (for so we bent our course) much cheered my spirit, and made my burden seem light

      She is gonna thank god and not her husband/natives

    1. Then I went to see King Philip

      Why did the natives take her to see the most important leader of the united native revolt against the colonists

    2. the Lord gave, the Lord hath taken away,

      One of the only times her biblical application is logical

    1. If we had been God would have found out a way for the English to have passed this river

      Mary shows the superiority complex believing god would personally help the Englishmen

    2. In this travel, because of my wound, I was somewhat favored in my load

      Mary shows how common the natives and Englishman are in many cases

    1. One of the Indians that came from Medfield fight, had brought some plunder, came to me, and asked me, if I would have a Bible, he had got one in his basket

      Mary is inconsistant with her portrayal of natives as one minute they are savages, the next they are doing very considerate actions

    2. my sweet babe like a lamb

      Reuse of christian imagry

    3. I then remembered how careless I had been of God’s holy time; how many Sabbaths I had lost and misspent

      I think she has worse problems to worry about then keeping the sabbath

    4. Oh the number of pagans (now merciless enemies)

      Anyone who is not of an abrahamic religion is instantly a pagan according to Mary

    1. One of the Indians carried my poor wounded babe upon a horse; it went moaning all along, “I shall die, I shall die.”

      Yeah Mary, real savage people who nursed and cared for your harmed infant

    1. yelling of those black creatures in the night, which made the place a lively resemblance of hell

      This could either be a literal racist depiction or a metaphorical depiction of her mental state

    2. Now away we must go with those barbarous creatures, with our bodies wounded and bleeding, and our hearts no less than our bodies

      Immediately takes the angle of dehumanizing natives

    1. as we make our voices heard in a public context.

      Is it a public context if its tailored to plymouth state english students?

    2. even weave some comedy and sass in there

      Does that not make your work less serious or academical?

    3. “America” can mean the United States and all that comes with being a resident in such a nation, but it is also the entirety of two continents and wherever their influence spreads

      How come all the full novels we are reading are all taking place in the U.S?

    4. merican literature and contemporary culture (such as films and other references)

      What examples of films or other modern literature relate to early american lit?

    5. he voices of old white men talking about even older white men.

      While told by old white men, many examples of "early american literature" tell stories of other people

    6. Who determines what counts as American literature?

      It might depend on reigion, politics, ect. (Somewhere in texas may consider something to not be literature that is literature in NH)

  3. Aug 2024
    1. They held a joint council and determined to make their victims dream of snakes twining about them in slimy folds and blowing their fetid breath in their faces, or to make them dream of eating raw or decaying fish, so that they would lose appetite, sicken, and die. Thus it is that snake and fish dreams are accounted for.

      Probelms arise as animals also visously kill eachother. Is this an "enemy of my enemy is my friend scenerio?"

    2. but as it is the hunter does not even ask the bear’s pardon when he kills one.

      Why would the bear simpily accept death as his fate?

    3. After each in turn had made complaint against the way in which man killed their friends, devoured their flesh and used their skins for his own adornment,

      Were animals then vegetarians before men massacared the animals?

    4. man invented bows, knives, blowguns, spears, and hooks, and began to slaughter the larger animals, birds and fishes for the sake of their flesh or their skins, while the smaller creatures, such as the frogs and worms, were crushed and trodden upon without mercy,

      This is a different perspective from the roman catholic one of man being born above animals I was forced to learn about in Genesis from Sunday school