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and
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[14]‘ [15]
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special considerations
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More
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penalties
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PDMPs
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CDC
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The
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Figure 10.9 Three Waves of Opioid Overdose Deaths
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10.7a
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Table 10.7a Morphine Medication Grid
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lesions
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special considerations
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button
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PCA
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CBC
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BUN
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Table 10.6d Ketorolac Medication Grid
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[16]‘[17]
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as prophylactic
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symptoms
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If
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Dose
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BUN
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CBC
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Table 10.6b Aspirin Medication Grid
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Table 10.6a Acetaminophen Medication Grid
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symptoms
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confusion
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Syndrome. Reye’s syndrome
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effect
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24 hour
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4000 mg for adults, 3200 mg for geriatric patients, and 2000 mg for patients with chronic alcoholism
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rectally
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Medication
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[4]‘[5]‘[6]
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C this
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Percocet
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2000mg
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3200mg
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NSAIDs.
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but not limited to
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Figure 10.8 The WHO Pain Ladder. This diagram below shows the step-wise approach to cancer pain management recommended by the World Health Organization (WHO)
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IM
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“wasting”
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Figure 10.5 Mnemonics for Pain Assessment
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Pain, usually intense Swelling Redness Heat Gout is caused by a condition known as hyperuricemia, where there is too much uric acid in the body. The body makes uric acid when it breaks down purines, which are found in your body and the foods you eat. When there is too much uric acid in the body, uric acid crystals (monosodium urate) can build up in joints, fluids, and tissues within the body. Hyperuricemia does not always cause gout, and hyperuricemia without gout symptoms does not need to be treated. The following make it more likely that you will develop hyperuricemia, which causes gout: Being male Being obese Having certain health conditions can also increase your chances of developing hyperuricemia. These conditions include the following: Congestive heart failure Hypertension (high blood pressure) Insulin resistance Metabolic syndrome Diabetes Poor kidney function Additional factors may increase your chances of developing hyperuricemia: Using certain medications, such as diuretics (water pills) Drinking alcohol. The risk of gout is greater as alcohol intake increases Eating or drinking food and drinks high in fructose (a type of sugar) Having a diet high in purines, which the body breaks down into uric acid. Purine-rich foods include red meat, organ meat, and some kinds of seafood, such as anchovies, sardines, mussels, scallops, trout, and tuna. A medical doctor diagnoses gout by assessing your symptoms and
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disease which is
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Diseases
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also known as
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also known as
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Figure 10.3 (a) Skeletal muscle; (b) Smooth muscle; (c) Cardiac muscle
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spasm
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etc.,
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