move the pull quote to the bottom so it kinda resembles the whole of her dreams
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explain how the financial institutions DIRECTLY HELP to these farmers. Like the literal way how they do it.
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Government initiatives, through agencies like the Department of Agriculture (DA) and institutions like Land Bank, are bypassing the traditional financial system and directly empowering these agricultural centers.
is there any link that refers to the program?
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the Director of the Office of the United Nations Secretary-General’s Special Advocate for Inclusive Finance for Development (UNSGSA)
who is she then?
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With many users holding more than one account, there are estimated 258 million active digital wallet accounts in 2024, ranking the country fifth globally in digital wallet penetration, and reflecting the nation’s efforts to address financial inclusion.
cite where did you get the data
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She pointed out the characteristics of students who are financially illiterate. “First of all, they lack a sense of understanding the value of money. They also have a scarce knowledge to decide where to put their excess money,” she noted.
repeating
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add two paragraphs of your thoughts, it can't just be a mere reporting of what happened and just presenting all sides. THIS IS YOUR OPINION.
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Uphold transparency
transparency of what?
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no solutions proposed???!
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Greenwashing is the practice of making brands appear more sustainable than they really are. It may involve cynical marketing ploys, misguided PR stunts, or simply changing the packaging of an existing product while continuing to use unsustainable ingredients or practices. In simple words: fake news.
move this part of the paragraph to the next one so it explains how greenwashing works as a credible expert tells her POV on the problem.
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with another survey
what is that another survey, then?
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The proliferation of false and misleading content calls for an immediate action. Awareness and education is what we need to detach disinformation from the minds of the Filipinos.
Unite the thought into a straightforward actionable opinion.
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But
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add more practical paragraphs after the fifth paragraph so the masses can join the cause
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The Philippines undermined with financial illiteracy is a reflection on how broken the learning system in the country. According to Pia Roman-Tayag, director of the Office of the United Nations Secretary-General’s Special Advocate for Inclusive Finance for Development (UNSGSA), financial literacy in the country remains low. The fact that statistics shows only about 25 percent of Filipinos understand basic financial concepts should alarm the education sector, the government and the country. Thrusting finance and economics in our learning system and making it robust is a must to excise the rotting financial literacy our nation has.
the context paragraph is too long. IT should be directly saying the source of the news + the news + immediate opinion.
Then drop the statistics on the second paragrapn.
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First of all, it creates public distrust, and leads to protest,” she said. Moreover, she emphasized that without clear fund reporting, the public remains in the dark — a condition that destabilizes accountability, weakens civic engagement, and threatens the overall integrity of public service.
REMOVE the current quotation para Then convert the fourth paragraph into a direct quotation.
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ARE WE SURE to repeat the quote on the pull quote?
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“Greenwashing or misleading the masses through supposed environmental campaigns heavily affects how people view climate action,” she said.
if she cited any reasons for Greenwashing, it would be much better.
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She also linked environmental issues to real-world disruptions, citing the extreme heat that happened in recent weeks that forced widespread class suspensions and further paralyzed the country’s education system. “Past weeks of extreme heat have led to multiple no-class days, affecting students’ learning,” Tayag noted.
kinda okay, pero at least sa quote, let's include why she is linking it.
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‘Greenwash’ imperils PH climate action —
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Poverty continues to endanger the Pantawid Pamilyang Pilipino Program, as stated by Pia Roman, the Assistant Governor of Bangko Sentral ng Pilipinas.
state the why after the first sentence.
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The delaying
Drop "the"
delayed.
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PH bank exec
are we sure that she is a PH bank exec? They are bank regulators, not an executive of a bank.
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Financial illiteracy hits record high;
I recommend adding a number here for MORE IMPACT since this news is centered around numbers of illiteracy
“3 out of 4 students…” 75% of PH students"
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Smashing Victory
Please make a more creative title that reflects on the journey of the player.
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In a thrilling display of skill and determination
Give me a technical angle
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American rising star Coco Gauff.
error in fact. it was jessica pegula
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You could have added more details in the game.
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she added.
remove this one
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History in her hands
HERSTORY MADE would be a fire hammer
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Overall, this PAGE is kinda okay. However, it is heavily restrained with complete lack of information, quotations and misarranged anecdotes.
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Soon after Undersecretary Atty. Castro walked into the Press Briefing – cameras, laptops were already laid out, ready to hear the wisdom the Undersecretary has to affirm. The moment that Undersecretary opened her mouth, all were anticipating various thoughts on what she might announce. “Simulan natin sa mga magandang balita,” said Atty. Castro.
You could have ONLY said
"Simulan natin sa magandang balita"
And you have a FIRE lead
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Brief of Benefit
Demanding raw answers How journalists can push government officials for transparent press sessions
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In my opinion
cringe-ass transition device
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Securing land for large-scale housing projects is a hard process. Many urban areas are already saturated, while relocating people to far-flung areas could lead to job displacement and urban sprawl.
Issue on separating ideas through punctuation marks.
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Will 4PH succeed in integrating these communities into formal housing without disrupting their way of life?
It's cringe at this point
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Will 4PH ensure that these homes are not just affordable, but also livable, safe?
Remove these questions. I HATE TO SEE IT
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But can this project truly address the housing crisis, or will it face the same challenges that have plagued past housing programs?
STOP ASKING QUESTIONS
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Does this project solve the housing crisis?
Stop asking questions.
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Pivoting Project
Use subtitles for your titles
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Solution for Scarce
Costly solutions would be a fire title though
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How long can the government afford rice at this price?
remove this.
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What About Local Farmers?
It should never be like this, you will lose credibility if you can't properly use transitionary devices.
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But while this initiative provides immediate aid, the question remains: Is this a sustainable solution to inflation and the long-standing problems in the agricultural sector?
Stop asking questions. You are supposed to give answers and opinions, not passing the burden.
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In a state of an issue, communication between the government and the public is essential. Regular briefings held by the Presidential Communications Office (PCO) with the Malacañang Press Corps (MPC) play a crucial role in shaping public discourse. The main persona from the briefing was Undersecretary Claire Castro, the briefing was to address pressing issues, and respond to public concerns all under the media.
Remove this one. It doesn't even discuss the main issue. Use all of your brain power to isolate ONE AND ONLY ONE ISSUE in all of the discussions on the press conference.
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Overall for this page, you have three major issues.
- The arrangement of the angles (It should be 3rd news, 2nd news and 1st news)
- Your headlines really lack the power to stand in itself
- You are using your leads wrong, and it doesn't have any variety.
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MALACANAÑG, Philippines – Asserting that it doesn’t recognize the International Criminal Court’s jurisdiction over the country, the Philippine firmly rejected the cooperation for the interim release of the former president Rodrigo Roa Duterte in a press conference on Thursday, March 27, 2025.
Again, remove dateline, and use another lead.
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PCO undersecretary defends Duterte, rejects ICC’s jurisdiction
Very wrong headline. It doesn't even reflect on your facts, nor in your lead.
You could have said,
Palace firmly rejects ICC's assertion of jurisdiction
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“If their goals no longer match, it’s best for her to part ways with the group, because if she doesn’t want to follow the programs, there won’t be a good relationship in the alliance”
The quotes are too big. Make it the same font size as your whole article, then make it bold.
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said Castro.
dont leave this out the water. keep it on ther same paragraphs.
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Executive privilege is a constitutional doctrine that allows the president and high ranking individuals to withhold sensitive information especially if it has an encroachment from a branch over to another branch
forgot your quotation lines
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Emphasizing the constitutional measure to protect sensitive information to national security, Undersecretary of Presidential Communications Office reacted to Imee Marcos’ criticism regarding the government’s invocation of executive privilege in a press briefing on Thursday, March 27, 2025.
use another type of lead.
also since PCO Undersec is the representation of Malacanang itself, you could have said that
Malacanang reacts to Senator Imee Marcos' criticism regarding the governments's invocation of the "Executive Privilege" in a press briefing.
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MALACANAÑG, Philippines
remove dateline format.
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Sen. Marcos
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Empowering Filipinos Government expands subsidies for marginalized filipinos
I HAVE ISSUES WITH THIS HEADLINE Because giving aids doesn't really "empower Filipinos"
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WEATHER FORECAST
The weather section should have been at least on the middle of the homepage. or at least, the "WEATHER FORECAST" has a smaller font. BECAUSE WE NEED TO EMPHASIZE THAT THE FOUR MAIN SECTIONS are FAR MORE IMPORTANT.
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I would like you to change these tagline: ONE STORY AT A TIME. It doesn't reflect any journalism value to it.
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Nice page banner. Glad you kinda did it the right way.
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