“Bad thing about tennis is week, after week, after week your mind and bosy needs to prepare for the next tournament again,” wika ni Alcaraz.
no direct quptes sa column
“Bad thing about tennis is week, after week, after week your mind and bosy needs to prepare for the next tournament again,” wika ni Alcaraz.
no direct quptes sa column
“I hate the media. I’m always trying to lose as less as I can,” pahayag ni Alcaraz.
no direct quptes sa column
terrible column structure in general lolol
Hindi naman nagpahuli si Djokovic nang ipamalas nito ang solidong depensa matapos ibalik ang palo ni Alcaraz sa pagitan ng kaniyang mga paa.
Mention the phase of the game in this point. We already lost the sauce.
“I have to say that for me it is always a pleasure to play against him. He is indeed one of those players that make you play harder and he really deserves the win,” wika ni Djokovic.
again, tactical highlight, you are not yet here yet.
si Djokovic ay nahaharap sa matinding pressure, pinilit ni Alcaraz ang dalawang puntos sa kampeonato sa pamamagitan ng perpektong pagbabasa ng signature wide serve ni Djokovic.
magsulat sa di-karaniwang anyo
naharap si Djokovic sa matinding pressure habang pinilit ni Alcaraz...
Nagsilbi
tanggalin
“One shot can change the game, one point can change the flow of the game,” pahayag ni Alcaraz. “Every time that I’m able to feel that aura from him on the other side of the net, for me it’s a privilege,” dagdag pa nito.
we need a tactical POV of the game
Pinabagsak ng rising star player na si Carlos Alcaraz ang beteranong si Novak Djokovic na 10-times champion (2–6, 6–2, 6–3, 7–5), sa kasagsagan ng 2026 Australian Open Final na idinaos sa Melbourne, Austraklia nitong ika-1 ng Pebrero.
angle???? highlight? key play? hello?
this whole thing is just not relatable to the intended audience
Papel ng dyunalismo upang komunidad ay maging konektado
Pagkonekta ng mga komunidad dahil sa pamamahayag
“By journalism we were able to provide opportunity even in the underpriviledged areas,” ani ni Prodigo.
mga quotation na umuulit lamang sa sinasabi ng naunang talata
“We do not only focus on winning but we always think about why we’re writing that paper,” wika p ni Prodigo.
mga quotation na umuulit lamang sa sinasabi ng naunang talata
n.
add another quotation here
Sa huli, hindi sapat na ituring lamang na extracurricular ang campus journalism. Kung tunay na layunin ang paghubog ng mga mag-aaral na mapanuri, mulat, at may malasakit sa katotohanan, nararapat itong isama sa araw-araw na pagkatuto sa loob ng silid-aralan—sapagkat ang campus journalism ay hindi lamang gawain, kundi isang kulturang dapat yakapin.
strengthen the tone
Kulturang
Hindi kultura ang campus journalism
“Grades ang basehan ng kaalaman ng bata. Kapag mataas ang grades mo, ibig sabihin matalino ka,” saad pa ng kaibigan ko. Ito umano ang sumusukat sa kaalaman at kakayahan ng kabataan.
no quotation
“Extra lang naman ‘yan, hindi naman importante,” giit pa nila. Doon ko napagtanto na kaya pala nakasara ang kanilang isipan ay dahil ito ay gawaing labas sa klase.
no quotation
“Ano ba ang campus journalism?” Iyan ang palaging tanong ng mga kaklase ko sa akin. Sa tuwing pinapaliwanag ko sa kanila nang maayos ang tunay na halaga nito, “ah, hindi naman pala gano’n ka importante,”
no direct quotations sa column
MANUNULAT NG KATOTOHANAN Boses ay huwag pigilan!
pangit ng titles
Ang campus journalism ay hindi palamuti ng paaralan. Ito ay salamin nito—buo, malinaw, at kung minsan ay nakakasakit. Ngunit mas mabuti ang masakit na katotohanan kaysa sa maganda ngunit kulang na larawan.
nawawala sa bwelo ang article dahil sa mga talatang ito
Sa huli, sa bawat panulat na nagtataglay ng katotohanan, ang boses ng campus journalism ay hindi dapat pigilan kundi dapat palakasin at pakinggan.
STRONGER LANGUAGE
Nakadidismayang isiping ang pagsulat ay kailangan munang dumaan sa pagdadalawang-isip at takot na baka may magalit sa artikulong ginawa bago ito mailathala. Sa bawat pagsulat ng isang campus journalist, kasabay nitong hinuhubog ang boses ng buong paaralan. Ngunit ano pa ang silbi nito kung nililimitahan ang pagpapahayag ng saloobin dahil sa pag-iisip na baka mapagalitan ang mga batang mamamahayag?
again, ilagay ang balita rito KAAGAD.
Sa gitna ng mga isyu tungkol sa press freedom limits, binigyang-diin ni Prodigo ang konsepto ng Responsible Journalism, bagaman may kalayaang magsulat, hindi dapat lumalampas sa limitasyon ang mga mamamahayag sa pamamagitan ng pag-iwas sa pagiging masyadong agresibo o bastos sa pagpapahayag ng saloobin. “Dito papasok ‘yung responsible journalism. We can write, but we should not go beyond the limit. Dapat hindi masyadong vulgar o harsh,” dagdag niya. Dagdag pa niya, ang balanseng ito sa pagitan ng kalayaan at responsibilidad ang nakikitang paraan upang mapanatili ang tiwala ng mga stakeholders at maitaas ang engagement rate sa mga susunod na taon.
This part is already mentioned on the primary angle....
EPS DepEd RXII:
[statement] — DepEd official
ni Prodigo
ng DepEd official (learn your modifiers blud)
MAHAHALAGANG DETALYE: Naging hamon ni Dave C. Prodigo, sa mga kabataang mamamahayag tungkol sa ugnayan ng paaralan at lokalidad, sa isinagawang press briefing bilang parte ng NSPC 2026. Ayon kay Prodigo, ang tunay na tagumpay ng isang campus journalist ay wala sa mga tropeyo ng NSPC, kundi sa kakayahan nitong maging boses ng katotohanan, at koneksiyonn sa pagitan ng paaralan at ng komunidad Nanawagan din siya sa mga guro at tagapayo na embody-in ang kultura ng CJ upang palaging handa ang mga bata na i-dokumento hindi lamang ang mga kaganapan sa silid-aralan, kundi pati na rin ang kultura at isyu ng kanilang kinabibilangan na komunidad.
again, i do not love that you repeat these "Important Details" tab
at ethics
censorship, ethics
Ang ganitong sitwasyon ay nagreresulta sa “babaw” na pamamahayag na nakatutok lamang sa mga positibong balita at isinasantabi ang mga tunay na hinaing at problema ng mga stakeholders.
either connect it to the recent paragraph OR cite the person here.
Matatandaang naglabas ng pag-aaral ang United Nation Research Group noong nakaraang taon, ang isyu ng pagpapatahimik sa mga mamamahayag na nananatiling isang kritikal na isyu ng bansa, kung saan lumalabas na 85% ng mga kaso sa buong mundo ay hindi napaparusahan at 162 mamamahayag ang napatay habang ginagampanan ang kanilang tungkulin noong 2023-2024, lalo na sa mga lugar ng tunggalian. Kapansin-pansing mapanganib ang Pilipinas, na may mahigit 175 mamamahayag ang napatay simula noong 1986, kabilang ang ilan sa ilalim ng kasalukuyang administrasyon ni Pangulong Marcos Jr.
Again, this is a backgrounder data. Should be on the last paragraph.
RESPONSABLENG PAMAMAHAYAG
could be one line no? also this is parroting from your headline
Players must have enough rest
these titles are so basic. can we have something na pinag-isipan?
DERRANGED SCHEDULING Fixing rest time for players
“I love tennis, but the bad part of tennis is that it has tournaments a week, I think it’s week after week after week and we don’t have the chance just to prepare. Sometimes you just have to stop yourself and think what you are doing.”
There's no quotation paragraphs on columns
Players must have
It'll enable them to have time....
MINIMIZE the preaching devices for columns (must, should)
It is okay to have tournaments,
bad precedent
add more quotation paragraphs on your feature! It holds the article together.
In the end, Alcaraz made history by winning his first Australian Open title and completing a Career Grand Slam.
the backgrounder feels lacking. kinsa pay lahi nga nakabuhat ani?
Also before this, any emotional statement from the winner? Any indirect quotation gikan sa atoang losing player
Through control and determination,
remove, since u already made the style earlier on the first para
To address these challenges, accountability must be shared among publications. Student journalists must take responsibility for reporting ethically and professionally. Advisers and publication teams should review for sensitive posts, provide guidance on online ethics, and monitor the accuracy of all published content..
this solutions section seems so one dimensional and should be adding more. maybe adding more guardrails in the competition.
CJs must know their responsibility. Campus journalists are not seasonal performers, they are the conscience of the community. CJs should justify their roles as an ethical storyteller. Be a real journalist that our community needs. Be a truth seeker, not a clout chaser. HONEST OPINION We must protect the press Campus journalists are trained to seek truth and speak for the school community, yet being a student writer that wants only to stand firm needs to hold back our words just because it was seen as harsh or aggressive. READ MORE Post with responsibility, not provocation Eastern Samar | Opinion Writer As I was scrolling through my Facebook feed, I noticed a post that had gone viral overnight. Comments poured in and suddenly, what started as a simple student report became a whirlwind of opinions and even misunderstandings. The digital world is where one click can amplify your voice to hundreds but can also put you under a microscope. READ MORE
consolidate your thoughts on two paras pls
Reducing the role of student journalists to trophies teaches them that recognition outweighs integrity, awards are more important than ethics, and comfort is preferred over courage.
could be another paragraph
According to the depedbataan.com Publications,
not even a reputable source what the helly
Campus journalists are not just students who write stories, they are shaping how the community should respond towards societal issues. Therefore, school publications must not limit the press freedom of its campus journalists, every story must be published with courage and integrity. Our community still needs truth seekers and eye-openers.
Tone kinda okay, but not good enough. Add stakes and intensity to the CTA.
Campus journalists are trained to seek truth and speak for the school community, yet being a student writer that wants only to stand firm needs to hold back our words just because it was seen as harsh or aggressive.
add context/news. it cannot be starting alone on an opening statement. Give an event or a happening.
“We are able to contextualize and publish datas.”
huh? you just repeated what he said..
The Education Program Supervisor (EPS) for Human Resource Development,
again, simplify
News Highlights Turning Point: A Decade of Necessary Reforms (2026-2035), addressing the increasing learning gaps in education. Education is underfunded for a long time and that the deficit is very broad and they cannot afford to cover all the shortcomings in just one or two years. The report includes the NatPlan, which offers us a ten-year plan to address the learning crisis that can be solved if we act in unity, and with determination and with consistency.
do not repeat this one ALL THE TIME
It [Campus Journalism]
just say campus journalism dawg
Former School paper adviser (SPA) and Education Program Supervisor (EPS)
again, no one understands these terms, simplify it for the reader
The issue of limited press freedom in schools arises when campus publications attempt to cover government-related topics but encounter restrictions from school authorities maintaining institutional boundaries.
add any citation/connecting devices para dili siya magmukhang lone statement.
Through adherence to responsible journalism principles, campus publications can continue to inform while aligning with institutional expectations.
end on a solid backgrounder.
Maintaining objectivity allows campus journalists to present issues clearly without favoring one side over another.
add any citation/connecting devices para dili siya magmukhang lone statement.
Responsible journalism is identified as an approach that promotes balanced and fair reporting while observing set limitations.
add any citation/connecting devices para dili siya magmukhang lone statement.
The contrast between these perspectives reflects the ongoing challenge of defining the role of campus media within academic institution
add any citation/connecting devices para dili siya magmukhang lone statement.
This situation highlights differing views on the scope of campus journalism, as student writers are also encouraged to stay informed on broader societal matters.
add any citation/connecting devices para dili siya magmukhang lone statement.
“You as Campus Journalist should also know National Issues,” he stated.
Bro surely said more, no?
“We are an education institution” stated by Prodigo.
Bro surely said more, no?
According to the Senate of the Philippines freedom of the press is tantamount to the right to self- expression of every Filipino. This gave birth to Republic Act 7079, otherwise known as the “Campus Journalism Act of 1991”. But long before the law has been passed, the Department of Education has already been conducting the National Schools Press Conference (NSPC), one of the highest academic competitions in the country which aims to test the communication skills of Filipino campus journalists. Based on records, the first NSPC was held in 1920.
a very miscategorized paragraph, could be on another section/subhead
they [Campus journalists]
campus journalists
Former School paper adviser (SPA)
A former school paper adviser/journalism teacher
(simplify terms for relatability)
The win improved Lothong’s professional record to 60-17 making it quite an achievement for a 17-year-old prodigy.
The second paragraph should have been written here.
Lothong Kruaynaimuanggym the rising prodigy of Thailand sets off his wings as he dominated the Vietnamese-Thai foe, Wanpadej NF Looksuan in the recently concluded ONE Friday Nights Fights 144 on February 27, held at Lumpinee Stadium, Bangkok Thailand.
no powerful angle on the lead
Having with him the unanimous decision after the three-round match, Lothong now holds 59 professional Muay Thai victories which made him stand out from his age group.
Should be an overview of the match rather than concluding it instantly.
But it also unearthed a truth the country must confront: No one should have to risk their life just to sort through the country’s waste. The mountains of trash will keep growing. The ground will keep shifting. And unless something changes—unless safety becomes more important than profit, unless workers like Juan, Ben, and Julio are given the protection they deserve—there will be more collapses, more mourning, more names forgotten beneath the rubble. Let this be the last tragedy of its kind.Let their stories be more than statistics.Let the country refuse to look away. Because no one should die for doing the work the rest of us depend on. Feedback ← BackThank you for your response. Name(required) Email(required) How could we improve? Please fill out the form correctly. Send FeedbackSubmitting form Δ document.getElementById( "ak_js_1" ).setAttribute( "value", ( new Date() ).getTime() );
Should be an integration as a proper ending
How many collapses does it take before warnings become action? What happened to Juan, Ben, and Julio is not an isolated accident. It is a symptom. A symptom of a system that lets people work on unstable mountains of trash without proper protection, contracts, rights, or recognition.
avoid putting personal opinions and inputs here.
Not even close.
unnecessary
It is here where three men—Juan, Ben, and Julio—began every day with the simple hope of ending it alive. And then came February 20, 2026—the day the mountain woke angry. When 420,000 cubic meters of trash broke loose at the Rizal Provincial Sanitary Landfill (RPSL), it was not just a collapse. It was an avalanche of everything the country had thrown away—plastic memories, chemical remains, forgotten things and forgotten people—rushing down in a roaring tide. Three waste workers were swallowed whole. Juan. Ben. Julio. Only one body has been recovered, lifeless. Two remain missing beneath the weight of a country’s neglect.
My main issue here is this should be consolidated on paragraphs rather on lines. I might be saying these because of visual value but also, this is an implication that you are just trying to make it dramatic rather than factual.
There is still hope. EDSA lives in the heart. Its resurrection is in our hands. The fire was wasted, yes. But fires, in the right hands, can always be rekindled. Feedback ← BackThank you for your response. Name(required) Email(required) How could we improve? Please fill out the form correctly. Send FeedbackSubmitting form Δ document.getElementById( "ak_js_1" ).setAttribute( "value", ( new Date() ).getTime() );
what a weak ending. it doesn't encapsulate the article well.
Then he turned the mirror on the faithful sitting right there in the shrine.
delete
That was 1986. That was EDSA.
unnecessary
And so he said everything.
unnecessary
Villegas did not hide from this truth. He named it.
unnecessay. just intergrate it with the last paragraph lol
This time, he did not come to reminisce. He came to reckon.
again, unnecessary. keep it direct as much as you can.
I cannot accept a system where excuses justify repeated loss of life.
God yarn
Disinformation intensifies institutional vulnerability.
dont use the same transitional device consequently. You can always cite it immediately.
Concrete responses have begun but require broader reinforcement.
dont use the same transitional device consequently. You can always cite it immediately.
Freedom once reclaimed can slowly weaken when vigilance fades.
Remove these thesis sentences. WE JUST NEED A NEWS + INITIAL STAND + REACTION.
That's it. We don't ned to complicate our lead like this.
Lothong Kruaynaimuanggym the rising prodigy of Thailand sets off his wings as he dominated the Vietnamese-Thai foe, Wanpadej NF Looksuan…
Again, these leads are terrible. These should be re-written as primers rather than a copy paste of the lead inside.
On February 27, 2026, ONE Friday Fights 144 took place at the legendary Lumpinee Stadium in Bangkok, Thailand. The co-main event featured a flyweight Muay Thai clash between Wanpadej NF Looksuan and teenage sensation Lothong Kruaynaimuanggym. What many expected to be a competitive showcase of Thai striking artistry turned into a tactical lesson delivered by a 17-year-old prodigy, as Lothong claimed a convincing unanimous decision victory. This article breaks down the key tactical, technical, and psychological reasons why Wanpadej came up short on the night. Wanpadej NF Looksuan, born in Vietnam but raised in Thailand, entered the contest as the…
Again, these leads are terrible. These should be re-written as primers rather than a copy paste of the lead inside.
Catholic Bishops’ Conference of the Philippines (CBCP) called on young Filipinos at the EDSA Shrine on February 25, 2026, to reclaim the spirit of People Power — warning that the generation who fought for democracy is dying, and the role has yet to be…
this should be complete at least, no?
move the pull quote to the bottom so it kinda resembles the whole of her dreams
.
explain how the financial institutions DIRECTLY HELP to these farmers. Like the literal way how they do it.
Government initiatives, through agencies like the Department of Agriculture (DA) and institutions like Land Bank, are bypassing the traditional financial system and directly empowering these agricultural centers.
is there any link that refers to the program?
the Director of the Office of the United Nations Secretary-General’s Special Advocate for Inclusive Finance for Development (UNSGSA)
who is she then?
With many users holding more than one account, there are estimated 258 million active digital wallet accounts in 2024, ranking the country fifth globally in digital wallet penetration, and reflecting the nation’s efforts to address financial inclusion.
cite where did you get the data
She pointed out the characteristics of students who are financially illiterate. “First of all, they lack a sense of understanding the value of money. They also have a scarce knowledge to decide where to put their excess money,” she noted.
repeating
PH bank
BSP
Financial illiteracy hits record high;
I recommend adding a number here for MORE IMPACT since this news is centered around numbers of illiteracy
“3 out of 4 students…” 75% of PH students"
add two paragraphs of your thoughts, it can't just be a mere reporting of what happened and just presenting all sides. THIS IS YOUR OPINION.
Uphold transparency
transparency of what?
no solutions proposed???!
Greenwashing is the practice of making brands appear more sustainable than they really are. It may involve cynical marketing ploys, misguided PR stunts, or simply changing the packaging of an existing product while continuing to use unsustainable ingredients or practices. In simple words: fake news.
move this part of the paragraph to the next one so it explains how greenwashing works as a credible expert tells her POV on the problem.
with another survey
what is that another survey, then?
The proliferation of false and misleading content calls for an immediate action. Awareness and education is what we need to detach disinformation from the minds of the Filipinos.
Unite the thought into a straightforward actionable opinion.
but
But
add more practical paragraphs after the fifth paragraph so the masses can join the cause
The Philippines undermined with financial illiteracy is a reflection on how broken the learning system in the country. According to Pia Roman-Tayag, director of the Office of the United Nations Secretary-General’s Special Advocate for Inclusive Finance for Development (UNSGSA), financial literacy in the country remains low. The fact that statistics shows only about 25 percent of Filipinos understand basic financial concepts should alarm the education sector, the government and the country. Thrusting finance and economics in our learning system and making it robust is a must to excise the rotting financial literacy our nation has.
the context paragraph is too long. IT should be directly saying the source of the news + the news + immediate opinion.
Then drop the statistics on the second paragrapn.
First of all, it creates public distrust, and leads to protest,” she said. Moreover, she emphasized that without clear fund reporting, the public remains in the dark — a condition that destabilizes accountability, weakens civic engagement, and threatens the overall integrity of public service.
REMOVE the current quotation para Then convert the fourth paragraph into a direct quotation.
ARE WE SURE to repeat the quote on the pull quote?
“Greenwashing or misleading the masses through supposed environmental campaigns heavily affects how people view climate action,” she said.
if she cited any reasons for Greenwashing, it would be much better.
She also linked environmental issues to real-world disruptions, citing the extreme heat that happened in recent weeks that forced widespread class suspensions and further paralyzed the country’s education system. “Past weeks of extreme heat have led to multiple no-class days, affecting students’ learning,” Tayag noted.
kinda okay, pero at least sa quote, let's include why she is linking it.
‘Greenwash’ imperils PH climate action —
remove
Poverty continues to endanger the Pantawid Pamilyang Pilipino Program, as stated by Pia Roman, the Assistant Governor of Bangko Sentral ng Pilipinas.
state the why after the first sentence.
The delaying
Drop "the"
delayed.
PH bank exec
are we sure that she is a PH bank exec? They are bank regulators, not an executive of a bank.
Smashing Victory
Please make a more creative title that reflects on the journey of the player.
In a thrilling display of skill and determination
Give me a technical angle
American rising star Coco Gauff.
error in fact. it was jessica pegula
.
You could have added more details in the game.
she added.
remove this one
History in her hands
HERSTORY MADE would be a fire hammer
Overall, this PAGE is kinda okay. However, it is heavily restrained with complete lack of information, quotations and misarranged anecdotes.
against
of
Soon after Undersecretary Atty. Castro walked into the Press Briefing – cameras, laptops were already laid out, ready to hear the wisdom the Undersecretary has to affirm. The moment that Undersecretary opened her mouth, all were anticipating various thoughts on what she might announce. “Simulan natin sa mga magandang balita,” said Atty. Castro.
You could have ONLY said
"Simulan natin sa magandang balita"
And you have a FIRE lead
Brief of Benefit
Demanding raw answers How journalists can push government officials for transparent press sessions
In my opinion
cringe-ass transition device
Securing land for large-scale housing projects is a hard process. Many urban areas are already saturated, while relocating people to far-flung areas could lead to job displacement and urban sprawl.
Issue on separating ideas through punctuation marks.
Will 4PH succeed in integrating these communities into formal housing without disrupting their way of life?
It's cringe at this point
Will 4PH ensure that these homes are not just affordable, but also livable, safe?
Remove these questions. I HATE TO SEE IT
But can this project truly address the housing crisis, or will it face the same challenges that have plagued past housing programs?
STOP ASKING QUESTIONS
Does this project solve the housing crisis?
Stop asking questions.
Pivoting Project
Use subtitles for your titles
Solution for Scarce
Costly solutions would be a fire title though
How long can the government afford rice at this price?
remove this.
What About Local Farmers?
It should never be like this, you will lose credibility if you can't properly use transitionary devices.
But while this initiative provides immediate aid, the question remains: Is this a sustainable solution to inflation and the long-standing problems in the agricultural sector?
Stop asking questions. You are supposed to give answers and opinions, not passing the burden.
In a state of an issue, communication between the government and the public is essential. Regular briefings held by the Presidential Communications Office (PCO) with the Malacañang Press Corps (MPC) play a crucial role in shaping public discourse. The main persona from the briefing was Undersecretary Claire Castro, the briefing was to address pressing issues, and respond to public concerns all under the media.
Remove this one. It doesn't even discuss the main issue. Use all of your brain power to isolate ONE AND ONLY ONE ISSUE in all of the discussions on the press conference.
Overall for this page, you have three major issues.
MALACANAÑG, Philippines – Asserting that it doesn’t recognize the International Criminal Court’s jurisdiction over the country, the Philippine firmly rejected the cooperation for the interim release of the former president Rodrigo Roa Duterte in a press conference on Thursday, March 27, 2025.
Again, remove dateline, and use another lead.
PCO undersecretary defends Duterte, rejects ICC’s jurisdiction
Very wrong headline. It doesn't even reflect on your facts, nor in your lead.
You could have said,
Palace firmly rejects ICC's assertion of jurisdiction
“If their goals no longer match, it’s best for her to part ways with the group, because if she doesn’t want to follow the programs, there won’t be a good relationship in the alliance”
The quotes are too big. Make it the same font size as your whole article, then make it bold.
said Castro.
dont leave this out the water. keep it on ther same paragraphs.
Executive privilege is a constitutional doctrine that allows the president and high ranking individuals to withhold sensitive information especially if it has an encroachment from a branch over to another branch
forgot your quotation lines
Emphasizing the constitutional measure to protect sensitive information to national security, Undersecretary of Presidential Communications Office reacted to Imee Marcos’ criticism regarding the government’s invocation of executive privilege in a press briefing on Thursday, March 27, 2025.
use another type of lead.
also since PCO Undersec is the representation of Malacanang itself, you could have said that
Malacanang reacts to Senator Imee Marcos' criticism regarding the governments's invocation of the "Executive Privilege" in a press briefing.
MALACANAÑG, Philippines
remove dateline format.
Imee Marcos
Sen. Marcos
Empowering Filipinos Government expands subsidies for marginalized filipinos
I HAVE ISSUES WITH THIS HEADLINE Because giving aids doesn't really "empower Filipinos"
WEATHER FORECAST
The weather section should have been at least on the middle of the homepage. or at least, the "WEATHER FORECAST" has a smaller font. BECAUSE WE NEED TO EMPHASIZE THAT THE FOUR MAIN SECTIONS are FAR MORE IMPORTANT.
HOMENEWSOPINIONFEATURESSPORTSABOUT US
I would like you to change these tagline: ONE STORY AT A TIME. It doesn't reflect any journalism value to it.
The Insight
Nice page banner. Glad you kinda did it the right way.