Give some more facts about it to show how hard and scary it will be to solve this, if we even can.

I would instead start with this! show the leading cause and how scary it is that just one person behavior change can't do a dam thing!

Ends wrong you forgot something! just check it!

Good! this fits well

Climate change is a change in climate conditions. Climate is average weather patterns over the last 30 years in a said biome. This is why it's hard for some scientist to agree on set numbers.

Great opener but instead of this I would start with a personal story like she said. This will pull the writer in. Or maybe show a statistics of climate change? http://grist.org/climate-energy/5-terrifying-facts-from-the-leaked-u-n-climate-report/

Why is this in Italics?

Maybe change Is to are?

Change there to their.

Mv (Modern variety) I find this interesting thinking about most of the values compared the the maximum sustainable yield of what most values are today. Usually you'd see them all improve in the same way instead of just a few. Huh, Unusual.

This would be interesting to write about.Given the shown data and to individual sets of datum per country would be interesting as well.

Trying to find a substable yield that can completely feed the populace is a tough thing to do from what I understand. Fun fact for you to worry about... By 2050 our population is going to double by the "rule of 70." If we are already battling for resources, such as usable and drinkable water barely at 3%. And we are barely able to sustain feeding the population now. Where and how are we going to produce double the amount of resources and food? Just a little food for thought...

This reminds me of what is called "golden Rice." Referring to a GMO created rice that is orange because they added extra nutrients from carrots, to try to help developing countries get their proper nutrients

The "Green revolution" is a term for the evaluation of how we produce food. The ways we feed our massive populations around the world. This is a good way of describing it. Being it is Basically one of the most important scientific breakthroughs in the last decade.

Writing is a tough thing for some it needs a process like this to help.

I like how this gives an examples of what a good writer should be, I feel like if i do this with my next writing it will help me improve as a writer.

I think this is a good point the author makes because I feel as if I sat down before writing and made a deceit draft my writing would end up becoming so much better at the end.

Are you forgetting about google docs??

Agreed the author makes a valid point.

I agree with what they are saying with it doesn't seem to nice to do such a thing to educational learners trying to learn...

Agreed, but is that every university just gives away free websites to do what everyone pleases on them? I don't see that happening, I think that if you are using the website for work, school, and educational reasonings to further your field then it makes perfect sense to me. you could use them as a good way for jobs in your future to see how you've grown through college like a E-resume in away.

The author makes a good point here, I just think that it should remain an edu. because it's an education site.

I think there are better options than wordpress such as Weebly, which is free.

I think there are better options than wordpress such as Weebly, which is free.

I think this way it would have to be an edu to make sure it is educational, because you aren't paying for it, you're univerity is and it should be education like a way to further the university's research like a data base type deal

If only our school would figure out something better than moodel sadface

Agreed, because I think students don't get treated like adults they way they should be to slingshot them into the real world, but I think this issue goes far past just education technology.

This seems to me to be a serious topic the reason being is the web today is never what people thought it would be a long time ago, Nowadays there are layers people don't even know about that can't be seen by the public eye and companies pick and prod at any ad revenue they can get. I think theres needs to be away that if you have a tag on your internet usage saying you're from a university or college your info can't be used for ads or sold you companies this would fix this problem and help university students make a data for students to get together and further each other's research with out the worry of a "lumming figure" standing behind them trying to sell them things.

I think the biggest thing to take from this is that it helps others to. If other students are searching for this work all across the web trying to find examples of scholarly articles about these various subjects then things students have written could come up to help further research for other students which is what learning is all about. You just need to use it at your advantage!

I only say this isn't true, because they are giving this to you for this reason not to do whatever you want, the main goal of it is for you to use it for school work.

I think this subjects all students into one box.

I think it's not always a good idea to share your identity online like this.

I'd enjoy to do something like this at my university!

I would say this isn't the case that it's the teacher's personality and the way they construct their class, if they want to make it public then I don't think it would hurt. Also I think most of the time older audiences think younger students like us college students find most things like News that is up to date very interesting. Things discussing this would be fun to do, so I disagree Public is good.