Qualitative
Is there a way to format this more clearly?
Qualitative
Is there a way to format this more clearly?
meaning excellent
Might be better to format as "5 (excellent)"
Warning in left_join(., secondary_data %>% select("PASSWORD", "VEGGIESCORE", : Detected an unexpected many-to-many relationship between `x` and `y`. ℹ Row 1 of `x` matches multiple rows in `y`. ℹ Row 86 of `y` matches multiple rows in `x`. ℹ If a many-to-many relationship is expected, set `relationship = "many-to-many"` to silence this warning.
remove warnings
A large gap that exists within the current literature is the lack of research on the dietary quality of Binghamton University students.
Gaps in research are more conceptual, I would change to something like "dietary quality of university students."
When analyzing the data for Republicans, we found only two participants to be eligible to analyze, which is not a large enough data set.
Highlight this specifically as a limitation
While the results are limited, it does raise interesting questions about the small, negative correlation found between social identity beliefs and extreme polarization
Include limitations, implications, and delve into how these questions could be addressed in future research.
noted earlier
"aforementioned"
cannot
"fail to"
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"and"
First-year Research Immersion program students, and the rest being 3rd- or 4th-year peer mentors for the FRI program
"First-year Research Immersion (FRI) program students..."
1.6.5 Visualize Normality Histograms for SH T1 and T2 and Sleep Score
Include clearer axes titles
Tidy
Good commenting along the way! Might make it clearer to include a little general blurb on your data preprocessing at the end
A convenient sample
-> "a convenience sample"
to high-income countries
-> "to other high-income countries"
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Include discussion
Normaility Check
Change Axes titles to be easier to interpret for this section