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  1. Dec 2024
    1. factors

      here too, some citations are older and given the field, hope that newer ones can be located. Otherwise, I would suggest you make a statement explaining why such old references are used and how/why they are still relevant given the explosion of research in this area over the last few years.

    2. Shonkoff et al., 2012). These effects can also be passed on to their own children (Narayan et al., 2017; Schofield et al., 2018; Schofield et al., 2013)

      Shonkoff 2012 and Schofield 2013 are older and suggest remove or replace.

    1. References

      have you considered adding some of Nicole Letourneau's work? Here are some examples Letourneau, N. L., de Koning, A. J., Sekhon, B., Ntanda, H. N., Kobor, M., Deane, A. J., ... & APrON Study Team. (2020). Parenting interacts with plasticity genes in predicting behavioral outcomes in preschoolers. Canadian Journal of Nursing Research, 52(4), 290-307.

      Ross, K. M., Cole, S., Sanghera, H., Anis, L., Hart, M., & Letourneau, N. (2021). The ATTACH™ program and immune cell gene expression profiles in mothers and children: A pilot randomized controlled trial. Brain, behavior, & immunity-health, 18, 100358.

      Yu, Z., Cole, S., Ross, K., Hart, M., Anis, L., & Letourneau, N. (2024). Childhood Adversities and the ATTACHTM Program’s Influence on Immune Cell Gene Expression. International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health, 21(6), 776.

    1. Kerber, A. S., & Ledbetter, N. J. (2017). Standards of practice: Applying genetics and genomics resources to oncology. Clinical Journal of Oncology Nursing, 21(2), 169–173. https://doi.org/10.1188/17.CJON.169-173

      this article is seven years old... suggest a newer reference, we cited some in the Current Oncology article and the PS for CANO

    2. The United States and the UK have modelled the way about interdisciplinary genomics integration. These countries have developed evidence-based competencies for nurses delivering genomic services.

      suggested edit: However, other countries such as the United Stated and the United Kingdom have policies which can be used guide nursing practice and policy development in Canada.

    3. he contact advanced practice and specialist nurses have with patients means they are uniquely placed to participate in such work.

      suggested edit: Advanced practice and specialist nurses are uniquely situated to provide these services.

    4. the website’s Genomics in H

      suggest edit: To learn more about different practice contexts and medical specialties, visit the websites in the Genomics in Healthcare section of this book.

    1. recognizing the potential expertise of individuals, family members and caregivers with genomic healthcare needs, that develops over time and with experience.

      I am not clear how this point links with previous statements or this section.

    2. recognizing

      suggest aligning verb tense with stem to seriation: Examine your own... therefore use recognize areas where... maintain awareness

      Then third bullet needs an edit as it is not clear. Suggest: evaluate your understanding and capabilities to deliver genomics-informed healthcare including providing referrals, and follow-up care after genomic services.

    3. role

      suggest changing "role" to "contributions" Describe nurses distinct and overlapping contributions to the interdisciplinary team delivering genomics-informed care.