assuming this was completed, change this to "was"

same

—no spaces

—no spaces

—no spaces

add a comma before and after this sentence

add comma after flyway

remove

lowercase bell

change this to something about boat and water toy rentals

This link is broken, I don't think they do tours anymore. Maybe swap it out for the boat rental site? https://jocasseeoutdoorcenter.com/boat-rentals

this link is broken

em dash, no spaces for both of them

what visitor center? is there one for the gorges or is it one of the state park ones?

add "the" before Jocassee

do we want to link this?

an

change to the specific link: https://www.fs.usda.gov/r08/francismarionsumter/recreation/chattooga-wild-and-scenic-river

and add a comma after River

change to the specific link: https://www.fs.usda.gov/r08/francismarionsumter/recreation/chattooga-wild-and-scenic-river

remove hyphen: backcountry

is there a way to fix the amp: addition here?

em dash, no spaces

em dash, no spaces

em dash, no spaces

lowercase bells

em dash, no spaces

add a period

consider making these em dashes for clarity, because that's a lot of commas

do we want to link this?

lowercase bell

em dash, no spaces

em dash, no spaces

em dash, no spaces

capitalize Oconee

no hyphen

—

—

—

were

an

—

lowercase f

period inside of "

lowercase

suggest adding "boat" after junk so it doesn't sound like there's just a bunch of Chinese stuff in the lake.

This caption refers to something that hasn't yet happened in the text. Maybe move it lower? Or change the caption to something generic about scuba diving.

em dash, no spaces

period inside the quotes

em dash, no spaces

add comma after by

add a comma after classes

em dash no spaces

add hyphen stand-up

one word: paddleboarding

em dash no spaces

only three dots, with a space before: boarding ...

no s on saving

no space around hyphen

comma inside the "

change to "the entire"

—no spaces

I can't highlight things to annotate in the briefs because they're links, so I'm putting them here:

under "...on foot or by boat" add a hyphen in ranger-guided under "5 unexpected things..." change synchronized to synchronous

amid

no spaces around the hyphen: 4,600-acre

add a comma

change to "getting to the destination" because "getting there" sounds like it means the journey

—no spaces (in both places here)

change the period to an em dash here. Inlet—or drop

—no spaces

—no spaces

Do we want to mention it is set to reopen later this year?

19th- and 20th-century

add a space after the period

maybe just snap?

I wouldn't use "outsider" to mean "someone who enjoys being outside." maybe "a nature fan's paradise"? or something of the like.

website at the link says it's only 600 acres

remove comma after recreation

restaurant is out of business and link is spam. suggest ending this sentence at "oyster bar."

link broken, replace with: https://mcconkeysjungleshack.com/

replace with specific link: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/botany-bay-hp-wma

this link changed when they changed the name of the company. replace with: https://discoversouthcarolina.com/articles/get-a-mouthful-of-history-at-marsh-hen-mill

I don't know if we can add links willy nilly but I found a very cool article about the restoration: https://savingplaces.org/stories/the-house-that-hutchinson-built-preserving-a-touchstone-to-edisto-islands-black-history

since this is a parks link it should open in a new window

Either bring "Get" up to the previous paragraph or drop it down so there's a paragraph break like there is on the others.

capitalize Beach

Do we want to add that it's also $5 SC seniors?

I think you can just take this paragraph out.

offers

—no spaces

are

—no spaces

—no spaces

—no spaces

suggest changing link to specific page: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/donnelley-wma

add a hyphen in 18th-century

—no spaces

change to map-specific link: https://dnr.sc.gov/gis/docs/donnelleydrivingbroc.pdf

suggest changing link to specific page: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/donnelley-wma

remove comma

suggest changing to specific site: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/bear-island-wma

suggest changing to specific link: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/botany-bay-hp-wma

suggest changing to Donnelley-specific link: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/donnelley-wma

add rivers after Edisto

traditional outdoor pastimes

This link goes to a main bird watching site, and you'll never find Dungannon if you don't know where to look. Suggest changing to the DNR site: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/dungannon-plantation-hp-wma

Link is to main DNR page, suggest changing to https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/bear-island-wma for Bear Island-specific page

Link is to main DNR page, suggest changing to https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/donnelley-wma for Donnelly-specific page

This headline's got to change, suggest adding "on which" or "from which" after Lands

https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/dungannon-plantation-hp-wma

This link goes to a generic DNR page, consider changing it to the Bear Island specific one: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/bear-island-wma

Same here: https://public-lands-scdnr.hub.arcgis.com/pages/donnelley-wma

missing an n on heron

em dash, no spaces

here too

you know what to do

em dash, no space

em dash, no space

one word: superheroes

change to "and"

fix link to open in same window

remove

change link to https://www.icrc.net/programs-and-activities/kayak-rentals-saluda-shoals-park

change to a colon

remove

Ravenel

A kayaking

If it needs a link: https://earlybirddiner.com/

does this need a link? If yes: https://www.hilton.com/en/hotels/chsasht-home2-suites-charleston-west-ashley/

fix this link so it opens in the same window

suggest adding "back" after further

should this have a link or no? If yes: https://rockhillpumphouse.com/

remove space in filet

This needs to be its own line.Link is: https://blackmarlinhhi.com/

This one doesn't have a restaurant name

add hyphen

remove

United

their

only one l in traveling

its (no apostrophe)

remove

—

remove

add hyphen

—

remove comma

remove comma

The first and third photos (zoos and experiences) don't have any captions, do they need them?

make an em dash—

The albino alligator passed away in like 2019. Sub this out for another animal, maybe the bald eagle or river otters?

U.S.

no hyphen in roundup

add hyphen

capitalize

capitalize All

add hyphen to people-watching

one word: stingrays

remove

hot dogs

no accent

—also change it in the photo caption

add space in light show

U.S.

—

no accent on cafe

—

add hyphen

—

—

no s on rate

This website is no longer correct and Google says this is temporarily closed. I've reached out to some contacts to see if I can find out what's up with it.

go kart

attraction

zip line

Stand-up paddleboarding

Stand-Up

paddleboarding is one word

paddleboarding is one word

add "town" at the end of this. family resort town

should this be linked too? https://thenosedive.com/

this should be part of the link

Do we have a way of confirming this place still exists? Their last FB post was 2016 and they haven't uploaded a YouTube video in two years.

day trip

two words: Day Trip

remove

remove

—

add hyphen

change to: students

comma inside '

add hyphen

add she after but

—

remove

our

50

brought

—no spaces

remove

remove