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  1. Oct 2016
    1. Increased freedom to createmeans increased freedom tocreate throwaway material, as well as freedom to indulge in theexperimentation that eventually makes the good new stuff possible.
      1. I believe that this is Shirky's main argument. The internet does have an abundance of useless information that we can waste our time on, but it facilitates the possibility of becoming a better more advanced society.
    2. Clay Shirky's latest book is "Cognitive Surplus: Creativity and Generosity in a ConnectedAge."
      1. Writer and internet expert, Clay Shirky, in his novel Cognitive Surplus: Creativity and Generosity in a Connected Age, asserts that the internet like many past technologies has the capacity to improve society by facilitating the creation of new, beneficial, important content. He supports this claim by first recognizing why critics believe the internet is detrimental to society, then counters this with historical evidence and an analogy to the invention of printing, then he incorporates examples of the internet being beneficial to society, and finally he concludes with an analysis of the past that critics say we should return to and explains why it was not as great as they make it seem. Shirky's purpose is to inform readers about the positive aspects of the internet as well to encourage them to experiment with new ways to take advantage of the medium to distribute freedom of press, assembly, and speech. He adopts a conversational and optimistic tone for the audience, readers of his novel, The Saturday Essay, and anyone else interested in the topic of the internet.
    3. Similarly, open source software, createdwithout managerialcontrol of the workers orownership of the product, has been critical tothe spread of the Web. Searches foreverything from supernovae to primenumbers now happen as giant, distributedefforts. Ushahidi, the Kenyan crisis mappingtool invented in 2008, now aggregatescitizen reports about crises the world over
      1. This is an example of how a seemingly unimportant facet of the internet became an important tool still used 8 years after its creation. This proves that the internet can improve society.
    4. These claims were, of course, correct. Printfueled the Protestant Reformation, which didindeed destroy the Church's pan-Europeanhold on intellectual life. What the 16th-century foes of print didn't imagine—couldn't imagine—was what followed: Webuilt new norms around newly abundant andcontemporary literature.
      1. This evidence provides acknowledgment of the counter argument, but shows how when print was invented people thought it would be detrimental to society, but indeed it enhanced it and created a larger access to knowledge and idea. This is able to be compared to the proliferation of the internet in order to support its positive effects.
    5. . Reading is an unnatural act; weare no more evolved to read books than we are to use computers.
      1. Reading like computer use is an unnatural act, which allows these two things to be compared and for us to look at the history of books to understand how computers will affect society.
    1. If we lose those quiet spaces, or fill them up with “content,” we will sacrifice something important not only inour selves but in our culture. In a recent essay, the playwright Richard Foreman eloquently described what’sat stake: I come from a tradition of Western culture, in which the ideal (my ideal) was thecomplex, dense and “cathedral-like” structure of the highly educated and articulatepersonality—a man or woman who carried inside themselves a personally constructedand unique version of the entire heritage of the West. [But now] I see within us all(myself included) the replacement of complex inner density with a new kind of self—evolving under the pressure of information overload and the technology of the“instantly available.”As we are drained of our “inner repertory of dense cultural inheritance,” Foreman concluded, we risk turninginto “‘pancake people’—spread wide and thin as we connect with that vast network of information accessed bythe mere touch of a button.”

      This paragraph sums up why this matters. It provides examples of what is at stake and the horrible consequences that could result if we allow technology to control us.

    2. So, yes, you should be skeptical of my skepticism. Perhaps those who dismiss critics of the Internet asLuddites or nostalgists will be proved correct, and from our hyperactive, data-stoked minds will spring agolden age of intellectual discovery and universal wisdom. Then again, the Net isn’t the alphabet, andalthough it may replace the printing press, it produces something altogether different. The kind of deepreading that a sequence of printed pages promotes is valuable not just

      The author allows the reader to disagree with him, but in that moment of freedom gets them to do exactly what he wants, remain skeptical about everything and how everything may be affecting you.

    3. aybe I’m just a worrywart. Just as there’s a tendency to glorify technological progress, there’s acountertendency to expect the worst of every new tool or machine. In Plato’s Phaedrus, Socratesbemoaned the development of writing. He feared that, as people came to rely on the written word as asubstitute for the knowledge they used to carry inside their heads, they would, in the words of one of thedialogue’s characters, “cease to exercise their memory and become forgetful.” And because they would be ableto “receive a quantity of information without proper instruction,” they would “be thought very knowledgeablewhen they are for the most part quite ignorant.” They would be “filled with the conceit of wisdom instead ofreal wisdom.” Socrates wasn’t wrong—the new technology did often have the effects he feared—but he wasshortsighted. He couldn’t foresee the many ways that writing and reading would serve to spread information,spur fresh ideas, and expand human knowledge (if not wisdom).

      This paragraph provides a philosophical anecdote that further supports why technological advancement can harm how we think. It provides evidence of how these new advances hurt our memory.

    4. Still, their easy assumption that we’d all “be better off” if our brains were supplemented, or even replaced, byan artificial intelligence is unsettling. It suggests a belief that intelligence is the output of a mechanicalprocess, a series of discrete steps that can be isolated, measured, and optimized. In Google’s world, the worldwe enter when we go online, there’s little place for the fuzziness of contemplation. Ambiguity is not anopening for insight but a bug to be fixed. The human brain is just an outdated computer that needs a fasterprocessor and a bigger hard drive

      If we allow computers to do the thinking for us we become lazy and incapable and then we lose everything we have worked for. This paragraph emphasizes why it is important to be aware of how technology affects us.

    5. Where does it end? Sergey Brin and Larry Page, the gifted young men who founded Google while pursuingdoctoral degrees in computer science at Stanford, speak frequently of their desire to turn their search engineinto an artificial intelligence, a HAL-like machine that might be connected directly to our brains. “Theultimate search engine is something as smart as people—or smarter,” Page said in a speech a few years back.“For us, working on search is a way to work on artificial intelligence.” In a 2004 interview with Newsweek,Brin said, “Certainly if you had all the world’s info

      Google wants to allow their technology to become smarter than us so that we no longer have to be. This would, if all the previous facts are accurate, let us let go and stop trying altogether. This is another example of why this knowledge matters.

    6. oogle’s headquarters, in Mountain View, California—the Googleplex—is the Internet’s high church, andthe religion practiced inside its walls is Taylorism. Google, says its chief executive, Eric Schmidt, is “acompany that’s founded around the science of measurement,” and it is striving to “systematize everything” itdoes. Drawing on the terabytes of behavioral data it collects through its search engine and other sites, itcarries out thousands of experiments a day, according to the Harvard Business Review, and it uses theresults to refine the algorithms that increasingly control how people find information and extract meaningfrom it. What Taylor did for the work of the hand, Google is doing for the work of the mind.

      This paragraph proves that google knows the way people's minds work and use that to their advantage. They know that they are affecting us and they think it is beneficial.

    7. More than a hundred years after the invention of the steam engine, the Industrial Revolution had at lastfound its philosophy and its philosopher. Taylor’s tight industrial choreography—his “system,” as he liked tocall it—was embraced by manufacturers throughout the country and, in time, around the world. Seekingmaximum speed, maximum efficiency, and maximum output, factory owners used time-and-motion studiesto organize their work and configure the jobs of their workers. The goal, as Taylor defined it in his celebrated1911 treatise, The Principles of Scientific Management, was to identify and adopt, for every job, the “one bestmethod” of work and thereby to effect “the gradual substitution of science for rule of thumb throughout themechanic arts.” Once his system was applied to all acts of manual labor, Taylor assured his followers, it wouldbring about a restructuring not only of industry but of society, creating a utopia of perfect efficiency. “In thepast the man has been first,” he declared; “in the future the system must be first.

      This paragraph provides a historical anecdote that further proves how powerful technology is in influencing how we think and how that affects the function of society.

    8. Never has a communications system played so many roles in our lives—or exerted such broad influence overour thoughts—as the Internet does today. Yet, for all that’s been written about the Net, there’s been littleconsideration of how, exactly, it’s reprogramming us. The Net’s intelle

      This paragraph ties in why the subject matters to the reader. The author suggests that technology plays a role in every facet of our lives and therefore it is our responsibility to step back and see how it is affecting us.

    9. When the Net absorbs a medium, that medium is re-created in the Net’s image. It injects the medium’scontent with hyperlinks, blinking ads, and other digital gewgaws, and it surrounds the content with thecontent of all the other media it has absorbed. A new e-mail message, for instance, may announce its arrivalas we’re glancing over the latest headlines at a newspaper’s site. The result is to scatter our attention anddiffuse our concentration

      This paragraph forces the reader to think about their own experiences with the web as he refers to himself and the reader as we. The reader can relate to the distractions that come with surfing the web and can then further follow the author's argument.

    10. he process of adapting to new intellectual technologies is reflected in the changing metaphors we use toexplain ourselves to ourselves. When the mechanical clock arrived, people began thinking of their brains asoperating “like clockwork.” Today, in the age of software, we have come to think of them as operating “likecomputers.” But the changes, neuroscience tells us, go much deeper than metaphor. Thanks to our brain’splasticity, the adaptation occurs also at a biological level

      This paragraph provides scientific evidence that technology changes the way we think. His argument is now backed up by tested facts.

    11. As we use what the sociologist Daniel Bell has called our “intellectual technologies”—the tools that extend ourmental rather than our physical capacities—we inevitably begin to take on the qualities of those technologies.The mechanical clock, which came into common use in the 14th century, provides a compelling example. InTechnics and Civilization, the historian and cultural critic Lewis Mumford described how the clock“disassociated time from human events and helped create the belief in an independent world ofmathematically measurable sequences.” The “abstract framework of divided time” became “the point ofreference for both action and thought.

      This paragraph provides an example of another technology that altered the way we think. This allows readers to understand how easily we are affected by technology. It is relatable and therefore convincing.

    12. You are right,” Nietzsche replied, “our writing equipment takes partin the forming of our thoughts.” Under the sway of the machine,writes the German media scholar Friedrich A. Kittler, Nietzsche’sprose “changed from arguments to aphorisms, from thoughts to puns,from rhetoric to telegram style.

      This anecdote provides evidence that technology affects the way we think and produce our work. Even Nietzsche, who had a specific and famous way of writing changed as a result.

    13. e in 1882, Friedrich Nietzsche bought a typewriter—a Malling-Hansen Writing Ball, to beprecise. His vision was failing, and keeping his eyes focused on a page had become exhausting andpainful, often bringing on crushing headaches. He had been forced to curtail his writing, and he feared that hewould soon have to give it up. The typewriter rescued him, at least for a time. Once he had mastered touch-typing, he was able to write with his eyes closed, using only the tips of his fingers. Words could once againflow from his mind to the page

      This paragraph provides further anecdotal evidence, but this time from an easily recognized and famous person. It counters the argument the author is presenting by showing how technology improved his writing, but this positivity sets up the writer to break down why technology changed the way he worked.

    14. 9/19/08 8:30 PMThe Atlantic Online | July/August 2008 | Is Google Making Us Stupid? | Nicholas CarrPage 3 of 7http://www.theatlantic.com/doc/print/200807/googleSAlso see:LIVING WITH A COMPUTER(July 1982) "The process works this way. When I sitdown to write a letter or start the firstdraft of an article, I simply type on thekeyboard and the words appear on thescreen..." By James Fallows Thanks to the ubiquity of text on the Internet, not to mention the popularity of text-messaging on cellphones, we may well be reading more today than we did in the 1970s or 1980s, when television was ourmedium of choice. But it’s a different kind of reading, and behind it lies a different kind of thinking—perhapseven a new sense of the self. “We are not only what we read,” says Maryanne Wolf, a developmentalpsychologist at Tufts University and the author of Proust and the Squid: The Story and Science of theReading Brain. “We are how we read.” Wolf worries that the style of reading promoted by the Net, a stylethat puts “efficiency” and “immediacy” above all else, may be weakening our capacity for the kind of deepreading that emerged when an earlier technology, the printing press, made long and complex works of prosecommonplace. When we read online, she says, we tend to become “mere decoders of information.” Our abilityto interpret text, to make the rich mental connections that form when we read deeply and without distraction,remains largely disengaged

      This paragraph provides a legitimate psychological perspective on how reading has changed as the internet has grown. It provides a trusted source that confirms our attention spans have shortened and we expect instant gratification.

    15. nternet has altered his mental habits. “I now have almost totally lost the ability to read and absorb a longisharticle on the web or in print,” he wrote earlier this year. A pathologist who has long been on the faculty of theUniversity of Michigan Medical School, Friedman elaborated on his comment in a telephone conversationwith me. His thinking, he said, has taken on a “staccato” quality, reflecting the way he quickly scans shortpassages of text from many sources online. “I can’t read War and Peace anymore,” he admitte

      This paragraph provides an anecdote to relate readers to the issue at hand and engage them in a way that makes them care. It also provides an authority's opinion from the pathologist who provides facts that people can trust more easily due to his title. They both provide proof that the internet has stunted their concentration.

    16. or me, as for others, the Net is becoming a universal medium, the conduit for most of the information thatflows through my eyes and ears and into my mind. The advantages of having immediate access to such anincredibly rich store of information are many, and they’ve been widely described and duly applauded. “Theperfect recall of silicon memory,” Wired’s Clive Thompson has written, “can be an enormous boon tothinking.” But that boon comes at a price. As the media theorist Marshall McLuhanpointed out in the 1960s,media are not just passive channels of information. They supply the stuff of thought, but they also shape theprocess of thought. And what the Net seems to be doing is chipping away my capacity for concentration andcontemplation. My mind now expects to take in information the way the Net distributes it: in a swiftlymoving stream of particles. Once I was a scuba diver in the sea of words. Now I zip along the surface like aguy on a Jet Ski

      This paragraph almost begins to contradict his initial claim by recognizing positive outlooks on the development of the internet, but he goes on to site facts from a credible source about how media can affect the way the public thinks. The reader can then assume that the internet is no different. This sets up his coming argument that the internet is negatively affecting the way we think.

    17. I can feel it, too. Over the past few years I’ve had an uncomfortable sense that someone, or something, hasbeen tinkering with my brain, remapping the neural circuitry, reprogramming the memory. My mind isn’tgoing—so far as I can tell—but it’s changing. I’m not thinking the way I used to think. I can feel it moststrongly when I’m reading. Immersing myself in a book or a lengthy article used to be easy. My mind wouldget caught up in the narrative or the turns of the argument, and I’d spend hours strolling through longstretches of prose. That’s rarely the case anymore. Now my concentration often starts to drift after two orthree pages. I get fidgety, lose the thread, begin looking for something else to do. I feel as if I’m alwaysdragging my wayward brain back to the text. The deep reading that used to come naturally has become astruggle

      The author's main argument at this point in the piece appears to be that technology, specifically the internet is worsening our memory, concentration and the way we think. This argument is supported by this paragraph because Carr contributes his own personal anecdotal evidence about how his attention span and ability to read long pieces has been diminished as his use of the web has increased.

    1. "audience effect"

      The "audience effect" is human's tendency to perform better when they know someone is watching. This functions as evidence that we have a culture of avid writers because now that people know everyone is always watching they strive to perform for the audience. This not only makes more people write to put on a show, but as the sub-claim suggests, it makes them write better. So the internet has not only made us avid writers, but better writers.

    2. We are now a global culture of avid writers.

      The internet has revived the art of writing and created a new generation of avid writers. This is supported by the anecdote because an average citizen became an acclaimed writer by way of an internet blog. She would have never even considered writing a book if she hadn't had the platform to begin writing on her blog.

    3. In 2003, Kenyan-born Ory Okolloh was a young law stud~nt who was studying in the United States but still obsessed with Kenyan politics. There was plenty to obsess over. Kenya was a cesspool of government corruption, ranking near the dismal bottom on the Cor-ruption Perceptions Index. Okolloh spent hours and hours talking to her colleagues about it, until eventually one suggested the obvious: Why don't you start a blog?

      The moral of this anecdote is that the internet and invention of blogging has allowed average citizens to gain readership and attention without the assistance of big publishing companies. The internet has given people voice and power.