This commentary regarding the movie-making alternative for authors was well written as it touched on both the negative and positive aspects if an author were to follow this model. Marvin makes claims regarding the publishing industry, its changes, an author’s perspective and how they function in the industry today, but has not sources to back up his claims. While all of the claims to do with technological advances are obvious, it still needs evidence. This essay also states “Not every book is Harry Potter, and not every book achieves that kind of fame and success” – where examples of authors who have tried and failed through this business model would have been helpful. Examples for other statements in this essay could also have been provided, for example, when he claims that authors who produce replications of JK Rowling’s novels have unpolished or lower quality work – (who has? What types of authors? What books have failed?) I liked how Marvin touched on popular movies that people can relate to, like Twilight and Harry Potter, but 50 Shades of Grey would have also been a great example. The essay could have also elaborated on it, considering the movie essentially had no plot line but still made it to the big screen (even with the lack of substance in writing). Thus, showing that even shitty authors can still produce movies if they are popular enough. In addition, claiming that authors ride the bandwagon and don’t write outside of new genres in order to gain success is an interesting claim because even E.L. James, author of 50 Shades of Grey wrote a novel that did not ride that bandwagon, yet still had huge success. What I do agree with is that there is a lack of diversity on our book shelves, but whether that has to do with authors following suit of other authors who have had blockbuster hits, or because authors have followed suit of other authors who have just been best sellers for months, once again, more examples could have differentiated the two and supported his argument to make it stronger. Ultimately, this model is a great one to talk about considering that it is a current model being used today and has provided success for a variety of well-written books. I also found his essay well structured as it went back and forth stating how this model is beneficial and detrimental to the authors and the publishing industry as a whole.