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  1. Sep 2019
    1. using electronic technologies will contribute to students’ abilities

      I feel like we write most in our day to day using technology. Almost all of my writing and reading is done through a screen. If it's not for school, its through social media or other digital communication like email, snapchat, or texting. Realistically, this is what reading and writing of the future will most likely look like. Knowing this, we can meet students where they are and help them in the spheres that they know best. For example, it wouldn't hurt to teach students how to debate on Facebook with their cooky aunt if they're doing it all the time. Aren't we trying to teach students how to strengthen their arguments? Why not teach students how to sound like knowledgable individuals online when we have so many examples of them wanting to know how to be better writers and trying in their own way?

    2. useinquiryasaprocesstodevelopquestionsrelevantforauthenticaudienceswithinavariety of disciplines

      It's important to get students to start asking their own questions. I never really realized until recently how much I've learned from developing and asking questions, but it definitely has helped my learning. In order to ask questions, you need to recall what you know and determine what you don't know. Also, if students learn how to start asking questions at this point in their learning, hopefully they'll continue asking questions throughout their lives.

    3. Students can become better writers when they have multiple opportunities to write in classes across the curriculum throughout their education

      I think they also need encouragement if we ever want them to want to keep writing. I'm not saying we need to necessarily boost students up when they don't need it. But I will say that a little bit of praise goes a long way. I remember my own eagerness to write did at least somewhat come from my desire for approval and praise. I think teachers need to remember that students at this level need something to keep going for, and teachers can play a big part in this.

    4. mechanics

      I almost hate this word; it's so vague. Especially when teachers write this as feedback on your paper. It almost tells you nothing about what you did wrong.

    1. ociety could control its citizens,

      This reminds me of when the Nazis got into book burning. If people weren't able to read, the ones that could would be able to manipulate a lot of factors. Being able to read is able to seek out the truth from multiple places and not just have to rely on what we hear from others. Along with this, being able to write is holding the capability to reach out and spread information with the world. It's a lot of power.

    2. composed his last hours on whatever paper he could find in order to assure his loved ones that his death was not pain-ful

      And honestly who wouldn't do this? If we knew we were going to die in a few minutes I'm sure most people would send out a mass text to their loved ones. That's really scary to think about but it's also interesting that writing makes it possible to be able to leave your words with loved ones even after you've passed on.

    3. ongoing conversations

      Discussing work outside of the classroom makes a huge difference. The lessons that stood out to me most in my mind from high school were the ones I talked about outside of class and genuinely cared about.

    4. How do we define a composing practice that is in-terlaced and interwoven with email, text-messaging, and web-browsing?

      We have to meet kids where they are. I really think we should incorporate more social media writing. For instance, there may be good reason to want to speak eloquently online. Just because the writing may be done on sites such as Facebook or Twitter doesn't change the fact that it is still writing. And it's the mode students are using most often and being most impacted by. Students are debating and learning in these places. I think that realistic writing activities could be put together on the premise of a social media status update or response to one.

    5. Facebook users “flocked” to join the group Everybody Write “THIS IS SPARTA!”—in fact over 30,000 students. A

      This honestly reminds me of the storm area 51 event thing. This really is a great example of how trends do repeat themselves in certain ways. Big internet memes can really impact students and get them talking.

    6. he role of writing for the public.

      This goes back to social media. I'm sure even high school students read articles that they find on Facebook and whatnot. These can be opportunities for genuine practices.

    7. They understand both the reach and the impact of networking. They understand circulation of messages

      Students will probably always understand some aspects of technology more than their teachers.

    8. a period where composers become composers not through direct and formal instruction alone (if at all), but rather through what we might call an extracurricular social co-apprenticeship

      Sometimes I think composers don't even realize they're composing.

    9. testing industry that too often substitutes a test of grammar

      I feel like too many tests take a lot of good stuff out of writing. At least graded tests and assignments.

    10. s a practical matter, however, especially in the case of writing, what immediately happened was that writing became a phenomenon to be measured

      I hate the obsession with absolutely perfect writing. I don't think absolute perfection exists and it just creates anxiety trying to strive for it

    1. After making a draft, it is often helpful for writers to discuss with peers

      In high school, I had no idea what to ask my peers. I think if the teacher showed how and what to ask it would be very effective.

    2. The relationship between features of finished writing and the actions writers perform to create that writing

      We need a bigger emphasis on revision. I never knew how to do it in high school.

    3. teach students how to edit their writing

      Editing is such an essential process that I never started until higher education. High schools really should place more emphasis on this process.

    4. Internet resources for remaining up-to-date on technologies.

      I definitely believe we need to be teaching students to understand and navigate the internet, but that reminds me of this book I read for another class called "Feed" where school for them was basically learning how to use the internet software in their brains. This reminded me of that.

    5. writers find that it is not necessary or desirable to eliminate the ways their family and people in their neighborhood use words to express themselves.

      I think it brings some voice!

    6. The Internet brings global languages into contact

      The internet also brings writing about social issues in different places to a lot of people. The way things are written, with their wording and phrasing, can completely shape a person's opinion about something going on in another part of the world or in another culture.

    7. Furthermore, particular people surround the writer–other writers, friends, members of a given community–during the process of composing.

      I've also noticed that sometimes when a writer is immersed in another writer's work, they can start to sound more like that writer they're immersing themselves with.

    8. Geographic location and embodied presence have become more salient to writing than at most times in human history.

      I definitely see this with people on Instagram traveling. Instagram influencers and travel bloggers are definitely on the rise.

    9. students write only to prove that they did something

      I feel like, not only do they write to prove they've done something, they also write just to get the grade. I've done this and I actually like writing so I can only assume what others that don't like it do.