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  1. Feb 2020
  2. Dec 2019
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    1. mountain place also had a poisoned water supply, but not from agriculture. Therewas naturally occurring uranium, so you had to bring in bottled water

      this is dangerous. sets the tone of what his cabin is surrounded by

  4. Nov 2019
    1. She caught herself muttering while she was preparing her morning coffee and made herself stop.

      reminds me of the women in "Roy Spivey" where should we stand still for hours.

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    1. Robert but the Robert she’d imagined on the other end of all those text messagesduring break

      she misses the old Robert without face to face meeting.

    2. but if she took more than a few hours to respondhis next message would always be short and wouldn’t include a question, so it was up toher to re-initiate the conversation, which she always did

      why is she trying harder than him to keep the conversation keep on sparking?

    3. But he was on the heavy side, his beard was a little toolong, and his shoulders slumped forward slightly, as though he were protectingsomething

      very good imagery in this paragraph almost like we can picture who Robert really is. What was he hiding though?

    1. Indians just like to believe that whitepeople will vanish, perhaps explode intosmoke, if they are ignored enough times.

      this is a very intriguing but true statement. Back then, there were many issues amongst Indians and white people. Think kind of compares to a simile type of contrast.

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    1. If I really am O.K. with the fact that no one Iloved witnessed my death, why did I come all the way back here from the dead? Whydid I put on the esh of my body, and the clothes I wore my last day on earth? Why didI resume the voice I spoke with when I was living, and return to the weight I was at thetime of my death?

      I really got drawn into the story at this particular part because in my own personal short story I started it off with questions relating to what the rest of the story was about. I believe that stating questions in a short story draw the reader in to what is going to happen in the story. These specific questions help the reader understand what set tone for the rest of the story is.