“Gay porn gives an opportunity to look at the male form and male beauty and the male face when orgasming,” Neville said. “What women liked most about male-male porn is versatility, and with heterosexual porn you are going to get penetrated eventually, and that’s dull,” she added. “A lot of ways it can play out with men is more exciting, more experimentation, more open to negotiation.”
this quote is a great example that contributes a lot to your essay, specifically as a conclusion, because it very plainly says what is interesting or unique about gay porn. it does a good job of answering the central question (what is the appeal of gay porn?) and I think looking at it from a female lens is very interesting and I learned a lot reading this!