rhododendron
a type of flower
rhododendron
a type of flower
There are instances where the mountain narrows to a few feet, with sheer drops on both sides, like traversing a catwalk.
the mountain gets so thin its like a model's catwalk
gorge
def . narrow valley between hills or mountains
The peak is my destination where I will call home tonight.
the peak in this context provides a safety like a home
Undergrowth gives way to the harsh steep rock spires that crown the mountain top like ancient vertebra.
simile
pergolas
def. arch way in a garden or trailing plants
Varieties of maple fight for space among the ever-growing conifers that dominate the forest.
example of taxonomy
Mt. Hood sits high above its surrounding foot hills, like that special jewel that sits on a pedestal, above all the others in a fancy jewelry store
simile
Looking back, diving has taught me more about life, the ups and downs, the good and bad, and to accept and deal with life’s challenges. Everything I learn and discover underwater applies to the many different aspects of my life. It has also taught me that life is very short: I have to live in the moment or I will miss the opportunities that come my way. I allow myself to forget all my sorrow, despair and disappointments when I dive into the deep blue sea and savor the feelings of peacefulness and calmness. There is nothing around me but fish and corals, big and small. Floating along in silence with only the sound of my breath—inhale and exhale. An array of colors explodes in front of my eyes, colors that I never imagine I will discover again, an underwater rainbow as beautiful as the rainbow in the sky after a storm. As far as my eyes can see, I look into the depth of the ocean with nothing to anchor me. The deeper I get, the darker it turns. From the light blue sky to the deep navy blue, even blackness into the void. As the horizon darkens, the feeding frenzy of the underwater world starts and the watery landscape comes alive. Total darkness surrounds me but the sounds that I can hear are the little clicks in addition to my breathing. My senses overload as I cannot see what is around me, but the sea tells me it is alive and it anchors me to the depth of my soul.
despite the sea teaching harsh lessons about life to the author it's also a place of relaxation for them not only because of the childhood memories but also because it also shows with chaos there is also calmness
Sometimes, I feel like I am not moving at all, kicking away madly until I hyperventilate because the sea is against me with its strong current holding me against my will.
metaphor to describe the strong current the sea is not literally against her
then it is a hop and pull struggle, which reminds me of how life can be at times.
simile
invigorates
def. give strength or energy
Looking at the sky as it changes from the blackness with twinkling stars to the lightest shade of blue that is almost white, then the deep red of the sunset and bright orange of the sun.
describing every color in the 'scene' makes it come to life
Being free, happy, innocent, amazed, wowed.
words with similar meaning to add how much it makes you feel
As an ethnographer, your goal is to take in details without influencing those details. In order to stay focused, go to this place alone and refrain from using your phone or doing anything besides note-taking. Keep your attention on the people and the place.
basically people watching to see how they act naturally
Devices like metaphor, simile, and personification, or hyperbole can enhance description by pushing beyond literal meanings.
types of descriptions
Strong description helps a reader experience what you’ve experienced
more description helps with connection
description is an essential rhetorical mode. Our minds latch onto detail and specificity, so effective description can help us experience a story, understand an analysis, and nuance a critical argument.
paying attention to descriptions helps us feel more immersed
befuddling
def. to confuse or complex