16 Matching Annotations
  1. Jan 2023
  2. Dec 2022
    1. perfectly, gathering the orange leather    from the air like a cherished possession

      Captivating the ball almost like a cherished moment. The poem is in memory of someone, so this line gives us a feeling of holding on to past memories of this person.

    2. A hook shot kisses the rim and hangs there, helplessly, but doesn’t drop,

      The wording causes this imagery to be more dramatic. This gives us a sense of despair and helplessness.