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  1. Apr 2024
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    1. This

      S - Ray Bradbury

      O - Written in 1950 during the Cold War

      A - People involved in the Cold War, and nuclear happenings

      P - To show what life would be like after a nuclear war

      S - There Will Come Soft Rains Ray Bradbury

      T - Ominous and daunting

    2. n the kitchen, an instant before the rain of fire and timber, thestove could be seen making breakfasts at a psychopathic rate, tendozen eggs, six loaves of toast, twenty dozen bacon strips, which,eaten by fire, started the stove working again, hysterically hissin

      I wonder what the meaning behind this is

    3. The reserve water supply which filled thebaths and washed the dishes for many quiet days was gone

      No stopping the fire, the house has given up

    4. patter of okapi4 feet and the murmur of a fresh jungle rain,like other hoofs falling upon the summer-starched grass. Now thewalls dissolved into distances of parched weed, mile on mile, andwarm endless sky

      Plethora of description of the animals in this paragraph

    5. There was the sound like a great matted yellow hive of beeswithin a dark bellows, the lazy bumble of a purring lion

      A whole jungle of animals

    6. the stove was making pancakes which filled the house with a richbaked odor and the scent of maple syrup

      There is no human, the house is doing everything

    7. shut up its windows and drawn shades in an old-maidenlypreoccupation with self-protection which bordered on a mechanicalparanoia

      More personification of the anxiety-ridden house

    8. The five spots of paint—the man, the woman, the children, theball—remained. The rest was a thin charcoaled layer

      Personification and metaphor of the paints spots on the house

    1. Winn

      S - Marie Winn

      O - Concern about the effects of television on children

      A - People who want to know how TV effects the brain and who it effects

      P - to show what happens to the senses and the brain when watching TV and how adults are effected too, not just kids.

      S - The Plug-In Drug: Television, Computers, and Family Life Excerpt By Marie Winn

      T - critical and passionate

    2. not throughtheir own viewing (although frequently this, too, is the case) but at a remove, through their children

      Parents become addicted through watching their shows their children are watching

    3. There is indeed, no otherexperience in a child’s life that permits quite so much intake while demanding so little outflow

      And getting not much benefit out of it

    4. Studiesare conducted to discover whether television commercials make children greedy and materialisticor, as some have suggested, generous and spiritual

      Can TV commercials really effect kids behavior that much though?

    Annotators

    1. brains

      S - Nicholas Carr

      O - how the internet is effecting people's daily lives

      A - people interested in the link between technology and the brain

      P - the purpose of this was to discuss wether technology is beneficial or detrimental to society and our brains

      S - What the Internet is doing to our brains by Nicholas Carr

      T - analytical and inquisitive

    2. Ifwe lose those quiet spaces, or fill them up with “con-tent,’

      A lot of people nowadays don't even like to be alone with their thoughts, and fill those quiet spaces constantly.

    3. Inthe quiet spaces opened up by the sustained, undistractedreading of a book, or by any other act of contemplation,

      Of going back to our roots

    4. He couldn't foreseethe many ways that writing and reading would serve tospread information, spur fresh ideas, and expand humanknowledge (if not wisdom).

      The positives

    5. he idea that our minds should operate as high-speeddata-processing machines is not only built into the work-ings of the Internet,

      This thinking is also very flawed and unrealistic

    6. f our brains were supplemented, or even replaced, byan artificial intelligence is unsett

      That is very unsettling. People really think that?

    7. “to solve problems that have never beensolved before,” and artificial intelligence is the hardestproblem out there.

      There's always the race to do what others cannot

    8. the perfectsearch engine,” which it defines as something that “under-stands exactly what you mean and gives you back exactlywhat you want.

      Just like an AI robot

    9. It injects the medium’s contentwith hyperlinks, blinking ads, and other digital gewgaws,and it surrounds the content with the content of all

      Keeping your mind distracted with a million different things at once

    10. n decidingwhen to eat, to work, to sleep, to rise, we stopped listeningto our senses and started obeying the clock.

      We go against our own bodies

    11. we still awaitthe long-term neurological and psychological experi-ments

      When can these experiments take place though? Technology is still so fresh.

    12. The more they use the Web, the more they haveto fight to stay focused on long pieces of writing

      This reminds me of how our generations said to have a shorter attention span than past generations because of technology.

    13. reading and writing e-mails,scanning headlines and blog posts, watching videos andlistening to podcasts, or just tripping

      Chronically online

    14. I’ve been spending alot of time online, searching and.surfing and sometimes adding to the great databases ofthe Internet

      Developed a short attention span?

    15. Now my concentration often starts to drift after twoor three pages. I get fidgety, lose the thread, begin lookingfor something else to do.

      Sounds like ADHD

  3. Jan 2024
    1. S - by daily mail provider

      O - The life of Appalachians where almost 50% fall below the poverty line.

      A - Americans to show that this country isn't equal economically wise and there's people who live without running water or power.

      P - The purpose of this article was to show that there's still communities in America that seem to be frozen in time.

      S - America's poorest county: Proud Appalachians who live without running water or power in region where 40% fall below poverty line By Daily Mail Reporter

      T - the tone of this article is illuminating and eye-opening.

    2. , 48.6 per cent of the population in Owsley below 18-years-old fell below the poverty line - a seven per cent increase from their parents' generation.

      Why is it increasing?

    3. Married students Starr and Travis Lewis celebrated before the dance with their three-week-old daughter, Ariel.

      This town feels like they're still living in the olden days. I.e. getting married young and having kids.

    4. His modest trailer in Booneville has no electricity, and no running water. Pots and pans spill from the kitchen sink and litter the floor, sodden with dirt and worn through the years.

      This opens my eyes, and makes me really grateful to have things that a lot of people look past on a daily bases, such as, running water.

    5. Entertainment: James Moore, centre, plays the guitar as Robert Go, left, sings while revelers hug at Joe's Meat Market #2

      It looks like they have a good, close-knit community.

    6. $45,000 a year for a family of four. In Owsley, the median household income is $19,351 - the lowest in the country outside of Puerto Rico.

      Wow, this is insane. That's a big drop from what's considered "low income".

    7. U.S. Census Bureau c

      The Census Bureau publishes population estimates and demographic components of change, such as births, deaths, and migration.

    8. Job shortages hit the region hard due to declines in demand for coal, lumber and tobacco

      This reminds me of how in the Civil War, the South had no resources to fight because the North made everything for them. They were in high demand for simple necessities and couldn't get them.

    9. Appalachian county has the lowest median household income in the states - a staggering 41.5 per cent of residents falling below the poverty line.

      Where specifically is this talking about? Because the Appalachian mountains run from New York to Mississippi.

  4. Dec 2023
    1. S - Anna Quindlen, writer

      O - Global Financial Crisis, the most severe worldwide economic crisis since the Great Depression

      A - The audience of this article is people who tend to fixate on the materialistics, rather than neccessary means

      P - The purpose of this article was to show that meaningless items are not sustaining or, as the article says, "salvation".

      S - Why Stuff Is Not Salvation by Anna Quindlen

      T - The tone of this article is apprising and illuminating

    2. what they'd grab if their house were on fire,

      True, I always say the stuffed animal I got when I was born. It holds real meaning to me and I really couldn’t think of another answer.

    3. with three kids who somehow, incredibly

      I think this is also a huge part of it. If people are raised to care about the newest doll out, they're going to continue this mentality throughout life. Whereas, kids like in this example are raised in the outdoors and learn from a young age to give back.

    4. if it's so obvious, how come for so long people have not realized it?

      People get caught up in the rush of things and if there is a nation wide thought process, it takes a lot to break free from it.

    5. , that if enough money was spent by shoppers it would indicate that things were not so bad after all

      In present today, online shopping has created such a big boom, many malls are closing down. In turn this means less Black Friday, and every day, shoppers. I wonder what this has done to the economy.

    6. why did we buy all this stuff? Did anyone really need a flat-screen in the bedroom, or a designer handbag, or three cars?

      Our society tends to be very materialistic. If more people started asking themselves these questions, maybe we'd see a shift.

    7. A person in the United States replaces a cell phone every 16 months, not because the cell phone is old, but because it is oldish

      The appeal of the next new thing is so fascinating to this society. That when the newest phone comes out, and their old one is perfectly intact, it doesn't matter. They just need the satisfaction of having the newest item on the market.

    8. By 2010 Americans will be a trillion dollars in the hole on credit-card debt alone.

      Seems reasonable because it just hit a trillion recently and that was during the financial crisis.

    9. stock-market declines, the industries edging up on bankruptcy, the home foreclosures and the waves of layoffs.

      Wait so during Black Friday the stock market declines, or just after this specific event?

  5. Nov 2023
    1. S - Northeastern Global News, A source

      O - The protests after the killing of George Floyd, and observing/ hearing about, other protests around the world, led to the development of this text.

      A - The audience of this article is people who are interested in protesting and the right way to go about it.

      P - The purpose of this article was to compare if peaceful protests are more effective than violent ones.

      S - "Are peaceful protests more effective than violent ones?" by Northeastern Global News

      T - The tone of this article was didactic because the goal was to educate the audience about peaceful protesting.

    2. The results were inarguable visuals of peaceful Black protesters being attacked by dogs and beaten by police.

      How are they expected to endure that and not fight back when something as simple as protesting, puts their life on the line?

    3. Martin Luther King Jr.’s movement was peace. But the catalyst was violence

      How does something with a clear purpose of peace and harmony become the exact opposite?

    4. “Violence can scare away your potential allies. You need the people on the sidelines to say, ‘This is my issue, too,’

      It's like how if you come off too strong when making a claim, you'll scare the reader away.

    5. Who’s responsible for inciting this violence—the protesters or the police

      This is a valid question I never thought about. I think most just assume violent protests start from the protesters. My mind didn't even think about the cops having anything to do with starting the violence.

    1. Being self-taught, they

      I think people can mistake illusions for reality because when aren't fully educated and are unaware of what goes on in the world.

    2. S - Dialogue of Socrates and Glaucon

      O - This text is from Book VII of Plato's best-known work, The Republic

      A - The audience is people who seek knowledge of this topic of discussion

      P - The purpose of this text is to enlighten people on the nature of justice.

      S - The Allegory of the Cave, from The Republic by Plato

      T - The tone is authoritative and educational.

    3. then you may have a well-ordered State;for only in the State which offers thi

      Socrates is their teacher, but it's so different than teaching nowadays. He basing his information of his educated opinion. And it's actually about the world and what these individuals have to do to succeed.

    4. But is not this unjust? he said; ought we to give them a worse life, when they mighthave a better?

      Finally a rebuttal. And a good point too.

    5. this conversion is rendered useful and profitable; or, on the other hand, hurtfuland useless.

      Socrates shows two sides to everything he talks about in this story. He highlights both the negative and the positive to every situation he brings up.

    6. beatific vision areunwilling to descend to human affairs; for their souls are ever hastening into the upper worldwhere they desire to dwell; which desire of theirs is very natural, if our allegory may be trusted.

      I think he's saying some live in denial of anything but this blissfully happy view on life.

    7. idea of good appears last of all, and is seen only with an effort;

      It's hard to find the good, in a world full of hate and insecurity. Looking on the bright side or "finding the good", doesn't come without an effort.

    8. the prison-house is the world of sight, the light of the fire is the sun,

      This story is based off how Socrates views civilization in the world.

    9. then he will gaze upon the light of the moon and the stars and the spangledheaven; and he will see the sky and the stars by night better than the sun or the light of the sun byday?

      Everything the world revolves around.

    10. Will he not fancy that the shadows which he formerly saware truer than the objects which are now shown to him?

      Is this a story Socrates is telling his students? If so, I'm curious to know the lesson of it.

    11. chained so that they cannot move, and can only see before them, beingprevented by the chains from turning round their heads. Above and behind them a fire is blazing

      This reminds me of the painting Guernica by Pablo Picasso that we looked at in class. There was people burning in fire and locked in a room they couldn't escape.

  6. Oct 2023
    1. S - Virginia Woolf, women in the 1940s

      O - Written in August, 1940, current matters concerning women, how women need to raise a mental war for ways to adapt new rights for women.

      A - The audience of this text was women in the 1940s to get them to take a stance on this topic and fight

      P - The purpose of this text was to get the point across that women should have equal rights to men and to show how to spread world peace.

      S - Thoughts on Peace in an Air Raid by Virginia Woolf.

      T - The tone was demanding because Woolf wanted to see a change happen and was forceful with her claims.

    2. We must make happiness. We must free him from the machine. We must bringhim out of his prison into the open air.

      Why is she putting on this pressure on women to "free" men. It's a communal effort, not just fully on women.

    3. We must createmore honourable activities for those who try to conquer in themselves their fighting instinct, theirsubconsicous Hitlerism. We must compensate the man for the loss of his gun

      It almost sounds like she wants women to try to "fix" what's wrong in men to create a more peaceful world. Like "We must compensate the man for the loss of his gun", but that's not on women to do.

    4. . It was for this that my whole life so far had beendedicated, my education, training, everything.

      This reminds me of On the Rainy River when Tim O'Brien had felt like he was throwing all his hopes for the future, including his education, away to fight in a war he didn't believe in.

    5. are held down because ofa subconscious Hitlerism in the hearts of men

      She's saying men share the traits listen above with Hitler. Basically saying men are controlling and like to feel superior.

    6. Mental fight means thinking against the current, not withit.

      She wants women to be leaders, not followers. To stand their ground and fight for equal rights.

    7. he must fight, so far as shecan, on the side of the English. How far can she fight for freedom without firearms?

      If this is during WWII, then this would take place in the 1940s, which would be after the prime time of the fight for women's rights (1920s).

    8. n. Arms are not given to Englishwomen either to fight the enemy or to defendherself. She must lie weaponless tonight.

      This reminds me of what we're doing in history. Pro gun control vs rights. The basis of it being if people should be allowed guns to defend themselves.