14 Matching Annotations
  1. Jun 2022
    1. wind seized our breath

      I like this description made!

    2. anthropomorphized

      I haven't heard of this word ever before.

    3. The landlady looked sour,

      I haven't thought to describe a person in this way, I like it!

    4. woodsorrel flower

      I haven't heard of this type of flower before

    5. hawthorns are black and green

      I have never actually seen or touch a hawthorn.

    6. nonfiction stories are true

      I always forget which is true and which is made up.

    1. Climax: This is the peak of the action

      This is my favorite part when reading or watching.

    2. ragged bursts, my quadriceps burning as I crested the summit

      Great descriptions and details. I love it!

    3. I include pacing with sequence because a change to one often influences the other.

      I also have never heard about this in reading or writing. This is a new term for me.

    4. WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON HERE?" and want to continue reading.

      Very important, in doing this all readers wont want to stop reading.

    5. Freytag's Pyramid: Chronological

      How long has this pyramid been around? I have never previously heard about it or have seen it before in classes.

    6. The term scope refers to the boundaries of plot

      I did not know this was what scope refers to and how it is described.

    7. painting a picture in the reader's mind

      I think it is important to piant a picture in the reader's head.

    8. if it is dropped, or squelching if it is squished underfoot

      I never thought to describe a fruit in this way, I would think to say yellow and sour, but I think describing how it would be once smashes is great.