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  1. Mar 2023
    1. Attach packages

      I know the code chunks is helpful (to me at least), but in a report, I would hidden them. Any reader interested in the code should read them in your Rmd file. Only highlight code chunk that is meaningful to the audience.

    2. Research Questions

      This is the case, but I want you to make it explicit why it is important to link heat wave/dome and health/heat vulnerability - why the cejst is the base data source for this.

    1. # AF_PFS: Current asthma among adults aged greater than or equal to 18 years (percentile) # DF_PFS: Diagnosed diabetes among adults aged greater than or equal to 18 years (percentile) # HDF_PFS: Coronary heart disease among adults aged greater than or equal to 18 years (percentile) # LLEF_PFS: Low life expectancy (percentile) # P200_I_PFS: Percent of individuals below 200% Federal Poverty Line, imputed and adjusted (percentile) # LSTF_COUNT: Land surface temperature data points (counts) within the census tract # LSTF_MIN: Land surface temperature minimum within the census tract in degrees fahrenheit (F) # LSTF_MAX: Land surface temperature maximum within the census tract in degrees fahrenheit (F) # LSTF_MEAN: Land surface temperature mean within the census tract in degrees fahrenheit (F) # LSTF_STD: Land surface temperature standard deviation within the census tract in degrees fahrenheit (F)

      This is very helpful, but readers of the map may not pay attention to the code comments - as a matter of fact you may want to hide the code snippet when presentation your product to non-technical audience. Consider rename your column to something expressive but concise.

    2. mapview

      The tooltip for this layer currently shows the FID column, which is not very meaningful/useful. Consider modify it to show CEJST column(s) you want to highlight.

    1. Note

      I thought we excluded unincorporated #11 (80%), but it seems it still show ing up. Since it is so much higher and you're using a continuous color gradient, this makes the map less readable.

      As I now look at it, the GRANT PARK in the bottom right is likely a neighborhood outside Portland and with duplicated name. We should exclude it.

    2. Note: All Portland neighborhoods were fully inventoried, with the exception of Arnold Creek, Ashcreek, Bridlemile, Collins View, Crestwood, Far Southwest, Forest Park, Hayhurst, Linnton, Maplewood, Markham, Marshall Park, Multnomah, Northwest Heights, Pleasant Valley, Southwest Hills, Sylvan Highlands, and unclaimed areas.

      Since this information is the same for all maps. I will put it somewhere less prominent. Maybe below the map?

    1. ## Rows: 45,497 ## Columns: 38

      note which data file is this. If server as a report to non-technical audience/client (e.g. Dr. Bates), it is better to summarize the extend of missing values on critical variables or non-matches.

    1. Filings That Ended in Eviction

      similar to the figure above, rename scale::percent(...) % Evicted and remove pct_evicted. Keep either owner_type or factor(owner_type).

    2. Eviction Filings Over Time

      I would create a new column for as.Date(...) and name it Month, similarly for as.factor(...). You want your dashboards to be approachable for non-technical audience.

    1. We found that vulnerability score was a cohesive measure of demographic factors

      Need more support for this claim. Or simply, we based our analysis on this score.

    2. grouped_HHMedianIncome Pedestrian

      same comments for this table. I'd consider collapsing income categories into a smaller number of groups (~5).

    3. grouped_PctPopNonWhiteOrHispanic Pedestrian

      Same comments as the table above: consider using kable, merged these two tables (additional column)

    4. There normalized view points to an obvious increasing trend as the vulnerability score goes up

      As I commented during your presentation, this trend may be affect the "outlier" neighborhood in the top right corner of the figure.

    5. grouped_vulnerability_score Pedestrian

      You can use kabble to make data frame printout better looking. Merge these two tables. Add table title.

    6. 100

      Provide a title for your figures. I know you already have the section title, but my preference is that each figure/table in your report should be self-contained, ie, your reader don't need to read your report to understand what the figure/table is about.