340 Matching Annotations
  1. Oct 2024
    1. and signed with his honor

      Without his honor...?

    2. hrine of our Lady of Mercy in Lima

      There's a basilica for this, right?

    3. mulatto

      Can we PLEASE just stop referring to people by "Race, Name"...I have had too much of this throughout this story

      Stop. being. racist

    4. humble slave

      I feel like we always see slaves being described as "humble"...

    5. six o’clock in the afternoon

      Probably 6pm, though I'd consider that more evening than afternoon (maybe I'm just being nitpicky lol)

    6. blacks

      Tone difference with how "black" is used

    7. and asked him whose skeleton that was, and whether, from its whiteness, he should not think it a white’s

      What logic is this? All of our skeletons look the same

    8. Lady of Succor:

      Is this referencing Mary...?

    9. where the deponent was

      Where Benito was!

    10. Babo

      There's Babo!

    11. Notary Public of the Holy Crusade of this Bishopric

      Not surprised that this is coming from a crusade

    12. Indian-like

      There's so much racism in this story...subtle and not

    13. But, regarding this warning as coming from one whose spirit had been crushed by misery the American did not give up his design.

      Again - what is this saying about being American?

    14. desperadoes

      Google says this means a bold or violent criminal

    15. but still Don Benito would not let go his hand.

      It feels like he's trying to escape??

    16. Don Benito would not let go the hand of Captain Delano, but retained it in his, across the black’s body.

      This is...weird

    17. With instinctive good feeling

      Maybe not

    18. Providence

      Ohhh is providence a theme here?

    19. Jew

      Rude :(

    20. He descended to the cabin to bid a ceremonious, and, it may be, tacitly rebukeful adieu

      I know you're nice but just leave lol, it's okay to be rude if you don't feel good about a situation

    21. “I cannot go,” was the response.

      I bet he literally can't leave

    22. The Bachelor’s Delight

      Rip, he would've loved bachelor's parties

    23. I will cheer up my poor friend, this time, thought he.

      Again - what is Melville trying to say about being American?

    24. Don Benito recoiled, as if at some bland satirical touch, delivered with such adroit garnish of apparent good breeding as to present no handle for retort. He is like one flayed alive, thought Captain Delano; where may one touch him without causing a shrink? The servant moved before his master, adjusting a cushion; recalled to civility, the Spaniard stiffly replied: “you are right. The slave appears where you saw him, according to my command; which is, that if at the given hour I am below, he must take his stand and abide my coming.”

      Suspicious and like he accidentally figured something out and they're trying to cover for it...

    25. salver

      A tray!

    26. Marking the servant still above

      "Above" possibly in a not-so literal way too (above in position/actually in charge)

    27. He went to see.

      The pacing of this being placed so separate feels ominous.

    28. Captain Delano heard a voice faithfully repeating his orders. Turning, he saw Babo, now for the time acting, under the pilot, his original part of captain of the slaves.

      Babo seems pretty in charge here!

    29. But he is mistaken for once. I will get his ship in for him, and prove it.

      This doesn't sound like the best idea

    30. But while this was being done, the American observed that, though his original offer of assistance

      What is this trying to say about being American? I feel like it's relating being American to wanting to offer assistance/a friendly or kind attitude

    31. uncommonly intelligent fellow

      Uncommon by what standards....?

    32. and then stood behind, not his master’s chair, but Captain Delano’s

      UH OH

    33. mulatto was hybrid, his physiognomy was European–classically so.

      Moreee racism, a bit eugenicist style!

    34. rajah-looking mulatto

      More racism

    35. But a sort of love-quarrel, after all, thought Captain Delano.

      A love-quarrel? What kind of relationship dynamic is going on here?

    36. Well, well, he looks like a murderer, doesn’t he?

      Hmmmm

    37. just then the razor drew blood, spots of which stained the creamy lather under the throat

      Foreshadowing :D

    38. Again Don Benito faintly shuddered.

      Absolutely Sweeney Todd!

    39. the close sight of the gleaming steel, Don Benito nervously shuddered;

      Very Sweeney Todd vibes

    40. But if there be that in the negro which exempts him from the inflicted sourness of the morbid or cynical mind, how, in his most prepossessing aspects, must he appear to a benevolent one? When at ease with respect to exterior things, Captain Delano’s nature was not only benign, but familiarly and humorously so. At home, he had often taken rare satisfaction in sitting in his door, watching some free man of color at his work or play. If on a voyage he chanced to have a black sailor, invariably he was on chatty and half-gamesome terms with him. In fact, like most men of a good, blithe heart, Captain Delano took to negroes, not philanthropically, but genially, just as other men to Newfoundland dogs.

      The racism is strong in this one

    41. as though God had set the whole negro to some pleasant tune.

      I think maybe Melville should try seeing how he feels when how he talks about race gets flip flopped...

    42. Most negroes are natural valets and hair-dressers;

      EWW

    43. cousins-german

      Is this just a german cousin??

    44. surrounding sea

      Yay alliteration!

    45. similitude

      Google says that a "similitude" is a counterpart or a double.

    46. Will master go into the cuddy?

      It's almost like they're bossing him around

    47. a white

      He's ALWAYS talking about race...

    48. “Cape Horn?–who spoke of Cape Horn?”

      So disjoint!

    49. warped as a camel’s skeleton in the desert

      "warped as a camel's skeleton in the desert" is suchh good, spooky imagery. It has that sense of being foreign (to Americans, because we don't have camels over here unless I'm wrong), and has the reminder of death from the skeleton.

    50. pumpkins

      I'm not sure if pumpkins were related to spookiness/fall/Halloween at the time this was written, but it would be a fun bit of imagery to use if it was!

    51. republican impartiality as to this republican element

      Interesting use of the word republican here!

    52. Yes, this is a strange craft; a strange history, too, and strange folks on board. But–nothing more.

      Oh buddy you should listen to that warning feeling lol

    53. Left to himself, the American, to while away the time till his boat should arrive, would have pleasantly accosted some one of the few Spanish seamen he saw; but recalling something that Don Benito had said touching their ill conduct, he refrained; as a shipmaster indisposed to countenance cowardice or unfaithfulness in seamen.

      I want to analyze again how this characterizes Americans

    54. phantoms

      Ghosts!! Yay!

    55. Ah, ah–if, now, that was, indeed, a secret sign I saw passing between this suspicious fellow and his captain awhile since; if I could only be certain that, in my uneasiness, my senses did not deceive me, then–

      The quick pacing makes you almost feel his heart rate accelerating!

    56. Upon this, the servant looked up with a good-natured grin, but the master started as from a venomous bite.

      OOP

    57. Captain Delano thought he observed a lurking significance in it, as if silent signs, of some Freemason sort, had that instant been interchanged.

      Ominous! Also the Freemason reference is fascinating

    58. the silky paw to his fangs

      Love the spooky imagery!

    59. invalid

      :(

    60. Deploring this supposed misconception, yet despairing of correcting it, Captain Delano shifted the subject; but finding his companion more than ever withdrawn, as if still sourly digesting the lees of the presumed affront above-mentioned, by-and-by Captain Delano likewise became less talkative, oppressed, against his own will, by what seemed the secret vindictiveness of the morbidly sensitive Spaniard. But the good sailor, himself of a quite contrary disposition, refrained, on his part, alike from the appearance as from the feeling of resentment, and if silent, was only so from contagion.

      Hmm there's a lot of characterization to unpack here

    61. The black was silent.

      This line is powerful

    62. An iron collar was about his neck, from which depended a chain, thrice wound round his body; the terminating links padlocked together at a broad band of iron, his girdle.

      Uh oh

    63. “Yes.” “But died of the fever?” “Died of the fever. Oh, could I but–” Again quivering, the Spaniard paused.

      This feels off putting

    64. shepherds to your flock of black sheep?”

      Eughhhhh this comparison feels gross

    65. Is it, thought Captain Delano, that this hapless man is one of those paper captains I’ve known, who by policy wink at what by power they cannot put down? I know no sadder sight than a commander who has little of command but the name.

      Tossing this back to "what is the author saying about being American" because I think you could analyze this in that lens

    66. Suddenly, one of the black boys, enraged at a word dropped by one of his white companions, seized a knife, and, though called to forbear by one of the oakum-pickers, struck the lad over the head, inflicting a gash from which blood flowed.

      Uhh this reminds me of that racist stereotype that black people are violent. Yikes

    67. organ-grinders

      Google says this is a street musician but I literally thought of like Fear Street esque literal organ grinding...

    68. invalid

      :(

    69. When Don Benito returned, the American was pained to observe that his hopefulness, like the sudden kindling in his cheek, was but febrile and transient.

      What is he trying to say about being American here?

    70. Such generosity was not without its effect, even upon the invalid.

      Bro leave disabled people alone. And stop being racist. And-

    71. invalid

      Let's not call disabled people this

    72. However unsuitable for the time and place, at least in the blunt-thinking American’s eyes

      Again - what is the author trying to say about being American here?

    73. As master and man stood before him, the black upholding the white, Captain Delano could not but bethink him of the beauty of that relationship which could present such a spectacle of fidelity on the one hand and confidence on the other. The scene was heightened by, the contrast in dress, denoting their relative positions.

      Interestingly symbolic...

    74. “Faithful fellow!” cried Captain Delano. “Don Benito, I envy you such a friend; slave I cannot call him.”

      What

    75. most of whom were become invalids

      "invalid" is a very derogatory way to refer to disabled people.

    76. His cough returned and with increased violence; this subsiding; with reddened lips

      [insert John Green's video essay about tuberculosis here] Jk here it is: https://youtu.be/7D-gxaie6UI?si=V8P_lZbhw-wOIQpS

    77. Here there was a sudden fainting attack of his cough, brought on, no doubt, by his mental distress. His servant sustained him, and drawing a cordial from his pocket placed it to his lips.

      Reminds me of Victor Frankenstein beginning to tell his story

    78. a privileged spot

      Maybe the author should think more about privilege lol

    79. Would Don Benito favor him with the whole story.

      Style of storytelling reminds me again of Frankenstein

    80. what the emigrant ship has,

      Again, slave ship, no need to "pretty it up" by calling it an emigrant ship

    81. The San Dominick was in the condition of a transatlantic emigrant ship,

      A slave ship you mean

    82. petty underling, either a white, mulatto or black

      Racism!

    83. But this the American in charity ascribed to the harassing effects of sickness, since, in former instances, he had noted that there are peculiar natures on whom prolonged physical suffering seems to cancel every social instinct of kindness; as if, forced to black bread themselves, they deemed it but equity that each person coming nigh them should, indirectly, by some slight or affront, be made to partake of their fare.

      Again, what is the author saying about being American here?

    84. Marking the noisy indocility of the blacks in general

      More racism...ugh

    85. A prey to settled dejection, as if long mocked with hope he would not now indulge it, even when it had ceased to be a mock, the prospect of that day, or evening at furthest, lying at anchor, with plenty of water for his people, and a brother captain to counsel and befriend, seemed in no perceptible degree to encourage him. His mind appeared unstrung, if not still more seriously affected.

      Sounds like depression

    86. Struggling through the throng, the American advanced to the Spaniard, assuring him of his sympathies, and offering to render whatever assistance might be in his power.

      What is the author trying to say about American mentality/culture/demeanor?

    87. But as if not unwilling to let nature make known her own case among his suffering charge, or else in despair of restraining it for the time, the Spanish captain, a gentlemanly, reserved-looking, and rather young man to a stranger’s eye, dressed with singular richness, but bearing plain traces of recent sleepless cares and disquietudes, stood passively by, leaning against the main-mast, at one moment casting a dreary, spiritless look upon his excited people, at the next an unhappy glance toward his visitor. By his side stood a black of small stature, in whose rude face, as occasionally, like a shepherd’s dog, he mutely turned it up into the Spaniard’s, sorrow and affection were equally blended.

      ...correct me if I'm wrong, but is the captain here the only white person? If so, ughh

    88. barbarous din. All six, unlike the generality, had the raw aspect of unsophisticated Africans.

      RACISM

    89. with the peculiar love in negroes of uniting industry with pastime

      This feels racist

    90. They accompanied the task with a continuous, low, monotonous, chant; droning and drilling away like so many gray-headed bag-pipers playing a funeral march.

      Ghosts!

    91. who, in venerable contrast to the tumult below them, were couched, sphynx-like, one on the starboard cat-head, another on the larboard, and the remaining pair face to face on the opposite bulwarks above the main-chains.

      In-human, creepy description of black people...yikes

    92. , had swept off a great part of their number, more especially the Spaniards.

      As far as I know, I don't think Spanish people are particularly susceptible to scurvy?? What is the author trying to say with this?

    93. negro transportation-ship

      Eughhhh...I don't like that phrasing.

    94. hearse-like roll of the hull.

      Yay death! Yay ghost ship!

    95. f Castile and Leon, medallioned about by groups of mythological or symbolical devices; uppermost and central of which was a dark satyr in a mask, holding his foot on the prostrate neck of a writhing figure, likewise masked.

      Tell me you're scared of paganism without telling me you're scared of paganism

    96. As the whale-boat drew more and more nigh, the cause of the peculiar pipe-clayed aspect of the stranger was seen in the slovenly neglect pervading her. The spars, ropes, and great part of the bulwarks, looked woolly, from long unacquaintance with the scraper, tar, and the brush. Her keel seemed laid, her ribs put together, and she launched, from Ezekiel’s Valley of Dry Bones.

      Personification of the ship - genuinely if I heard this out of context and ship-specific stuff wasn't mentioned, I would've just thought of a woman. It's either really pervading personification or I'm just too sleepy lol

    97. nd the true character of the vessel was plain–a Spanish merchantman of the first class, carrying negro slaves, amongst other valuable freight, from one colonial port to another.

      YIKES...

    98. Peering over the bulwarks were what really seemed, in the hazy distance, throngs of dark cowls; while, fitfully revealed through the open port-holes, other dark moving figures were dimly descried, as of Black Friars pacing the cloisters.

      Ghost ship?

    99. _saya-y-manta._

      Underscores? Also thanks to the person who commented what this is!

    100. To Captain Delano’s surprise, the stranger, viewed through the glass, showed no colors;

      Why am I reminded of the Creature's appearance on the ship in Frankenstein?

    101. waved lead

      Mmm lead, definitely not something thought to be harmless that turned out very dangerous...(sarcastic)

    102. The morning was one peculiar to that coast. Everything was mute and calm; everything gray

      What did I just say about eerie lol?

    103. On the second day, not long after dawn, while lying in his berth, his mate came below, informing him that a strange sail was coming into the bay. Ships were then not so plenty in those waters as now. He rose, dressed, and went on deck.

      I feel like there's an interesting, eerie tone in this.

    1. Failing to fetch me at first keep encouraged, Missing me one place search another, I stop somewhere waiting for you.

      Someone else said this already, but I agree that it doesn't feel like a solid ending. Like he just kind of forgot to finish or wrap this up? Or maybe he's making a statement with the lack of closure.

    2. I sound my barbaric yawp

      Yawp: noun a harsh or hoarse cry or yelp. "the cur did not bark, other than a single yawp" verb shout or exclaim hoarsely. "the fans screeched, yawped, and pounded their palms"

    3. Perhaps I might tell more. Outlines! I plead for my brothers and sisters. Do you see O my brothers and sisters? It is not chaos or death — it is form, union, plan — it is eternal life — it is Happiness.

      This sounds like a cult leaderrr

    4. I sleep — I sleep long

      I want sleep

    5. Toss to the moaning gibberish of the dry limbs.

      Interesting imagery here

    6. And as to you Corpse I think you are good manure, but that does not offend me,

      Have you ever been offended by anything, Walt? (yes I'm having fun being petty)

    7. Nor do I understand who there can be more wonderful than myself.

      There's that egotism!

    8. My face rubs to the hunter’s face when he lies down alone in his blanket,

      I don't think the bisexuality is just a theory anymore, guys

    9. I know perfectly well my own egotism,

      Yeah, okay. So far I feel like Walt Whitman would be a great cult leader and that's not a good thing. Maybe that can be an essay topic?

    10. Easily written loose-finger’d chords — I feel the thrum of your climax and close. My head slues round on my neck, Music rolls, but not from the organ, Folks are around me, but they are no household of mine.

      Buddy, not in public

    11. By my life-lumps! becoming already a creator,

      ...life lumps? Concerning think about what he means by that and becoming a creator of life...but also, kind of funny if he means what I'm guessing.

    12. I have embraced you, and henceforth possess you to myself, And when you rise in the morning you will find what I tell you is so.

      ...this sounds toxic. Leave the people you hook up with alone, Walt.

    13. On his right cheek I put the family kiss, And in my soul I swear I never will deny him.

      This doesn't sound like a "family" kiss, unless you're from Alabama /j. But really it could be that he'd do anything for family, but this feels sketchy with all his talk about women and men being lovers and siblings

    14. I am not to be denied

      If someone says NO, respect it!!!

    15. Man or woman, I might tell how I like you, but cannot,

      Again, bisexual theory

    16. Wherever he goes men and women accept and desire him,

      Into the bisexual theory we go

    17. The friendly and flowing savage

      You may be saying "friendly" but this still feels racist

    18. Corpses rise, gashes heal, fastenings roll from me.

      Interesting, Frankenstein-esque depiction

    19. That I could look with a separate look on my own crucifixion and bloody crowning!

      You're not Jesus bro

    20. The hiss of the surgeon’s knife, the gnawing teeth of his saw, Wheeze, cluck, swash of falling blood, short wild scream, and long, dull, tapering groan,

      I mean, he's been great at story telling

    21. White and beautiful are the faces around me,

      ...he talks about race a lot, and I think the only time he's clearly attributed race to beauty is when it comes to whiteness.

    22. I am the hounded slave, I wince at the bite of the dogs,

      I get empathizing but you are still a white man

    23. I am a free companion, I bivouac by invading watchfires, I turn the bridegroom out of bed and stay with the bride myself, I tighten her all night to my thighs and lips.

      WHAT

    24. Hot toward one I hate, ready in my madness to knife him,

      Let's not

    25. Where the bull advances to do his masculine work, where the

      More applying masculinity to things...

    26. Under Niagara, the cataract falling like a veil over my countenance,

      I know he's talking about the waterfall here with "cataract" but I laughed because I thought he was calling it an eyesore/pain at first.

    27. A gigantic beauty of a stallion, fresh and responsive to my caresses, Head high in the forehead, wide between the ears, Limbs glossy and supple, tail dusting the ground, Eyes full of sparkling wickedness, ears finely cut, flexibly moving. His nostrils dilate as my heels embrace him, His well-built limbs tremble with pleasure as we race around and return. I but use you a minute, then I resign you, stallion, Why do I need your paces when I myself out-gallop them? Even as I stand or sit passing faster than you.

      This feels like a really weird way to describe a horse. Like it's weirdly sexual. Please leave the horse alone

    28. Picking out here one that I love, and now go with him on brotherly terms.

      Reminds me of how he said that women are his sisters and lovers...

    29. And am stucco’d with quadrupeds

      Quadruped: "an animal which has four feet, especially an ungulate mammal."

    30. Logic and sermons never convince,

      Then what informs your decisions? Considering these two seem to be put at odds

    31. All truths wait in all things,

      Another rhetorical device I forgot the name of lol, but I know it's here!

    32. Landscapes projected masculine

      Interesting to masculinize land...

    33. Is this then a touch? quivering me to a new identity,

      This could go towards the bisexual theory, too, maybe?

    34. It sails me, I dab with bare feet, they are lick’d by the indolent waves,

      He talks about feet A LOT

    35. The slow march play’d at the head of the association marching two and two, (They go to guard some corpse, the flag-tops are draped with black muslin.)

      The Black Parade???? (MCR reference for those who don't get it)

    36. Encompass worlds, but never try to encompass me,

      I love this quote!

    37. You my rich blood! your milky stream pale strippings of my life! Breast that presses against other breasts it shall be you! My brain it shall be your occult convolutions! Root of wash’d sweet-flag! timorous pond-snipe! nest of guarded duplicate eggs! it shall be you! Mix’d tussled hay of head, beard, brawn, it shall be you! Trickling sap of maple, fibre of manly wheat, it shall be you! Sun so generous it shall be you! Vapors lighting and shading my face it shall be you! You sweaty brooks and dews it shall be you! Winds whose soft-tickling genitals rub against me it shall be you! Broad muscular fields, branches of live oak, loving lounger in my winding paths, it shall be you! Hands I have taken, face I have kiss’d, mortal I have ever touch’d, it shall be you.

      I feel like this can also go into the "bisexual theory bucket"

    38. Divine am I inside and out, and I make holy whatever I touch or am touch’d from,

      This is a gorgeous quote

    39. Copulation is no more rank to me than death is.

      I think this comment is about how sex was viewed as disgusting or shameful, especially in the religious aspect. Death is not "rank" to him, and neither is sex.

    40. Walt Whitman, a kosmos, of Manhattan the son, Turbulent, fleshy, sensual, eating, drinking and breeding.

      It's okay buddy, you're just a New Yorker

    41. Hurrah for positive science! long live exact demonstration! Fetch stonecrop mixt with cedar and branches of lilac,

      Going back to the part about teaching the kid about grass because I'm petty about that - if you believe in science and its value so much, teach your kid about science! Tell them what grass is!

    42. Dash me with amorous wet, I can repay you.

      Uhh

    43. I am the poet of the woman the same as the man, And I say it is as great to be a woman as to be a man, And I say there is nothing greater than the mother of men.

      This would be fun to analyze from a queer lens.

    44. I am the poet of the Body and I am the poet of the Soul,

      I'm forgetting the name of this rhetorical device, but it's a fun one!

    45. I exist as I am, that is enough,

      Woo!!

    46. I know I am deathless,

      I think this is less literal and more following the belief that while we may die, our bodies will decompose and contribute to the development of further life.

    47. I wear my hat as I please indoors or out.

      He'd despise dress codes.

    48. I do not snivel that snivel the world over,

      To be fair, I feel like people have been saying "This is it! The world's gonna end!" for centuries. I think maybe we have more hope than we realize.

    49. The heavy-lipp’d slave

      Specifying that the slave is "heavy-lipp'd" feels racist...

    50. Vivas to those who have fail’d! And to those whose war-vessels sank in the sea! And to those themselves who sank in the sea! And to all generals that lost engagements, and all overcome heroes! And the numberless unknown heroes equal to the greatest heroes known!

      History and its nuances, those left behind in textbooks!

    51. (The moth and the fish-eggs are in their place, The bright suns I see and the dark suns I cannot see are in their place, The palpable is in its place and the impalpable is in its place.)

      Reminds me of the question of "how separate are humans from nature, really?"

    52. I am of old and young, of the foolish as much as the wise, Regardless of others, ever regardful of others, Maternal as well as paternal, a child as well as a man, Stuff’d with the stuff that is coarse and stuff’d with the stuff that is fine,

      It's all about perspective!

    53. The crowd laugh at her blackguard oaths, the men jeer and wink to each other,

      I looked up what a blackguard oath is and all I got was info about D&D 5e paladins. I already knew about how oaths work for paladins lol. But I'm guessing maybe a "blackguard" oath is one that's disingenuous?

    54. The half-breed

      "Half-breed" feels very gross

    55. The young fellow drives the express-wagon, (I love him, though I do not know him;)

      This could be genuine love for fellow human beings, but since it wasn't mentioned for others, I'm throwing it in the "Bisexuality Bucket" for that theory lol. Maybe I'll write my essay about this?

    56. The lunatic is carried at last to the asylum a confirm’d case, (He will never sleep any more as he did in the cot in his mother’s bedroom;)

      Good to mention how awful asylums were in that time period for patients. There's a reason why we have the "Asylum" season in American Horror Story...

    57. Ya-honk

      This made me laugh lol. "Ya-honk!"

    58. His blue shirt exposes his ample neck and breast and loosens over his hip-band, His glance is calm and commanding, he tosses the slouch of his hat away from his forehead, The sun falls on his crispy hair and mustache, falls on the black of his polish’d and perfect limbs.

      More for the "Bi Walt Whitman"

    59. The lithe sheer of their waists plays even with their massive arms,

      Do I need to say more about bisexuality here lol?

    60. Blacksmiths with grimed and hairy chests environ the anvil,

      ...this also adds to the bisexual Walt theory lol.

    61. The young men float on their backs, their white bellies bulge to the sun, they do not ask who seizes fast to them, They do not know who puffs and declines with pendant and bending arch, They do not think whom they souse with spray.

      Someone else said "bi Walt Whitman" and I agree lol

    62. She owns the fine house by the rise of the bank, She hides handsome and richly drest aft the blinds of the window.

      This has the vibe of "women are to be pursued and attained". Very Rapunzel in her tower.

    63. She had long eyelashes, her head was bare, her coarse straight locks descended upon her voluptuous limbs and reach’d to her feet.

      I don't like how sexualizing this description is...it feels weirdly racist. Kind of tokenizing, even? It follows that vibe of "if I can sexualize this minority, then they're tolerable!"

    64. red girl,

      What?

    65. I mind them or the show or resonance of them — I come and I depart.

      "I come and I depart" - as us all.

    66. The little one sleeps in its cradle, I lift the gauze and look a long time, and silently brush away flies with my hand.

      A very haunting image!

    67. What do you think has become of the young and old men? And what do you think has become of the women and children?

      Maybe it'd help to engage in that small talk you were complaining about before, if you want to know how other people are doing :) (yes this is a very passive aggressive smiley)

    68. Or I guess it is the handkerchief of the Lord,

      Blades of grass would make for a pretty terrible handkerchief. I know I'm just being petty here, but like...just help the kid learn.

    69. How could I answer the child? I do not know what it is any more than he.

      I guess that's fair, but you could tell the kid that it's a plant? I understand the idea that we don't know much more than children as we discover our ways around life/the earth, but...we probably do know the plant & its scientific classification at least, and I doubt the kid does. It could help them learn. This reminds me of that "Unschooling" trend for homeschooling kids (that's shown to be pretty harmful for learning development fyi)...

      https://www.researchgate.net/publication/232544669_The_Impact_of_Schooling_on_Academic_Achievement_Evidence_From_Homeschooled_and_Traditionally_Schooled_Students

    70. And that a kelson of the creation is love,

      Apparently a kelson is ": a longitudinal structure running above and fastened to the keel of a ship in order to stiffen and strengthen its framework."

    71. And that all the men ever born are also my brothers, and the women my sisters and lovers,

      I second whoever said that this sounds really weird.

    72. I mind how once we lay such a transparent summer morning, How you settled your head athwart my hips and gently turn’d over upon me, And parted the shirt from my bosom-bone, and plunged your tongue to my bare-stript heart, And reach’d till you felt my beard, and reach’d till you held my feet.

      I'm really not liking how sexual this is? It just feels...icky. I don't mind sex in literature as a plot point/topic/whatever, but the way it's being described here just icked me out a bit.

    73. I am satisfied — I see, dance, laugh, sing; As the hugging and loving bed-fellow sleeps at my side through the night, and withdraws at the peep of the day with stealthy tread, Leaving me baskets cover’d with white towels swelling the house with their plenty, Shall I postpone my acceptation and realization and scream at my eyes, That they turn from gazing after and down the road, And forthwith cipher and show me to a cent, Exactly the value of one and exactly the value of two, and which is ahead?

      This section reminded of rhetoric new age cults would use.

    74. Clear and sweet is my soul, and clear and sweet is all that is not my soul.

      The quick pacing in this is really well done! The poem's structure reminds me of a train of increasingly frantic then calming down thoughts.

    75. Urge and urge and urge,

      The repetition of this makes for an interesting rhythm in the poem! It speeds up the pacing if that makes sense.

    76. And will never be any more perfection than there is now,

      I feel like the idea of perfection is relative. What's a perfect life for me could leave someone else miserable.

    77. nor feed on the spectres in books,

      What are the specters in books?

    78. You shall possess the good of the earth and sun, (there are millions of suns left,)

      I love the flow of this in the poem!

    79. Have you felt so proud to get at the meaning of poems?

      I feel like he's trying to point out here that there's never a singular, "true" meaning to any poem.

    80. The atmosphere is not a perfume, it has no taste of the distillation, it is odorless, It is for my mouth forever, I am in love with it,

      Could this be a feminine personification? (choice of talking about perfume over cologne)

    81. I harbor for good or bad, I permit to speak at every hazard, Nature without check with original energy.

      Does he consider himself a part of nature? How separate are humans from nature in his eyes?

    82. I loafe and invite my soul, I lean and loafe at my ease observing a spear of summer grass.

      What does "loafe" mean in this context?

    83. Song of Myself

      Just a note - every line for as far as I can tell links back up to the title of the poem. Was this intentional in the site's design? It makes it a bit difficult to annotate on Hypothesis.

    84. I CELEBRATE myself, and sing myself,

      Very enthusiastic all caps!

    1. Most men gamble with her, and gain all, and lose all, as her wheel rolls.

      It's interesting to note that I feel like fortune is most often personified as a woman, including here!

    2. Not so, O friends! will the God deign to enter and inhabit you, but by a method precisely the reverse.

      ...we can inhabit God?

    3. The Democrats from New Hampshire!

      Was this written before or after the party switch?

    4. Columbus found the New World

      Side-eyeing this one...

    5. For every Stoic was a Stoic; but in Christendom where is the Christian?

      What a line!!

    6. his libraries overload his wit

      No way libraries are being criticized right now...?

    7. Society never advances.

      I'd argue that it's definitely advanced. There's been change, and that's a form of advancement in of itself.

    8. Where is the master who could have taught Shakspeare? Where is the master who could have instructed Franklin, or Washington, or Bacon, or Newton? Every great man is a unique.

      This is ignoring a lot of progress and people who learned from those who came before them...everything we have right now has been steadily built up over time.

    9. Ameri- cans

      I wonder why there's a dash in "Ameri-cans"?

    10. Swedenborgism

      Never heard of this until now - I looked it up, and it's a religion referred to as The New Church and seems to be related to Christianity?

    11. As men’s prayers are a disease of the will, so are their creeds a disease of the intellect.

      This sounds very discrediting to those who find strength through prayer and their religious doctrine.

    12. Zoroaster

      Zoroastrianism?

    13. self-reliance

      Name of this paper/essay!!