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  1. Oct 2024
    1. But, regarding this warning as coming from one whose spirit had been crushed by misery the American did not give up his design.

      Again - what is this saying about being American?

    2. He descended to the cabin to bid a ceremonious, and, it may be, tacitly rebukeful adieu

      I know you're nice but just leave lol, it's okay to be rude if you don't feel good about a situation

    3. Don Benito recoiled, as if at some bland satirical touch, delivered with such adroit garnish of apparent good breeding as to present no handle for retort. He is like one flayed alive, thought Captain Delano; where may one touch him without causing a shrink? The servant moved before his master, adjusting a cushion; recalled to civility, the Spaniard stiffly replied: “you are right. The slave appears where you saw him, according to my command; which is, that if at the given hour I am below, he must take his stand and abide my coming.”

      Suspicious and like he accidentally figured something out and they're trying to cover for it...

    4. Captain Delano heard a voice faithfully repeating his orders. Turning, he saw Babo, now for the time acting, under the pilot, his original part of captain of the slaves.

      Babo seems pretty in charge here!

    5. But while this was being done, the American observed that, though his original offer of assistance

      What is this trying to say about being American? I feel like it's relating being American to wanting to offer assistance/a friendly or kind attitude

    6. But if there be that in the negro which exempts him from the inflicted sourness of the morbid or cynical mind, how, in his most prepossessing aspects, must he appear to a benevolent one? When at ease with respect to exterior things, Captain Delano’s nature was not only benign, but familiarly and humorously so. At home, he had often taken rare satisfaction in sitting in his door, watching some free man of color at his work or play. If on a voyage he chanced to have a black sailor, invariably he was on chatty and half-gamesome terms with him. In fact, like most men of a good, blithe heart, Captain Delano took to negroes, not philanthropically, but genially, just as other men to Newfoundland dogs.

      The racism is strong in this one

    7. warped as a camel’s skeleton in the desert

      "warped as a camel's skeleton in the desert" is suchh good, spooky imagery. It has that sense of being foreign (to Americans, because we don't have camels over here unless I'm wrong), and has the reminder of death from the skeleton.

    8. Left to himself, the American, to while away the time till his boat should arrive, would have pleasantly accosted some one of the few Spanish seamen he saw; but recalling something that Don Benito had said touching their ill conduct, he refrained; as a shipmaster indisposed to countenance cowardice or unfaithfulness in seamen.

      I want to analyze again how this characterizes Americans

    9. Ah, ah–if, now, that was, indeed, a secret sign I saw passing between this suspicious fellow and his captain awhile since; if I could only be certain that, in my uneasiness, my senses did not deceive me, then–

      The quick pacing makes you almost feel his heart rate accelerating!

    10. Captain Delano thought he observed a lurking significance in it, as if silent signs, of some Freemason sort, had that instant been interchanged.

      Ominous! Also the Freemason reference is fascinating

    11. Deploring this supposed misconception, yet despairing of correcting it, Captain Delano shifted the subject; but finding his companion more than ever withdrawn, as if still sourly digesting the lees of the presumed affront above-mentioned, by-and-by Captain Delano likewise became less talkative, oppressed, against his own will, by what seemed the secret vindictiveness of the morbidly sensitive Spaniard. But the good sailor, himself of a quite contrary disposition, refrained, on his part, alike from the appearance as from the feeling of resentment, and if silent, was only so from contagion.

      Hmm there's a lot of characterization to unpack here

    12. An iron collar was about his neck, from which depended a chain, thrice wound round his body; the terminating links padlocked together at a broad band of iron, his girdle.

      Uh oh

    13. Is it, thought Captain Delano, that this hapless man is one of those paper captains I’ve known, who by policy wink at what by power they cannot put down? I know no sadder sight than a commander who has little of command but the name.

      Tossing this back to "what is the author saying about being American" because I think you could analyze this in that lens

    14. Suddenly, one of the black boys, enraged at a word dropped by one of his white companions, seized a knife, and, though called to forbear by one of the oakum-pickers, struck the lad over the head, inflicting a gash from which blood flowed.

      Uhh this reminds me of that racist stereotype that black people are violent. Yikes

    15. When Don Benito returned, the American was pained to observe that his hopefulness, like the sudden kindling in his cheek, was but febrile and transient.

      What is he trying to say about being American here?

    16. As master and man stood before him, the black upholding the white, Captain Delano could not but bethink him of the beauty of that relationship which could present such a spectacle of fidelity on the one hand and confidence on the other. The scene was heightened by, the contrast in dress, denoting their relative positions.

      Interestingly symbolic...

    17. Here there was a sudden fainting attack of his cough, brought on, no doubt, by his mental distress. His servant sustained him, and drawing a cordial from his pocket placed it to his lips.

      Reminds me of Victor Frankenstein beginning to tell his story

    18. But this the American in charity ascribed to the harassing effects of sickness, since, in former instances, he had noted that there are peculiar natures on whom prolonged physical suffering seems to cancel every social instinct of kindness; as if, forced to black bread themselves, they deemed it but equity that each person coming nigh them should, indirectly, by some slight or affront, be made to partake of their fare.

      Again, what is the author saying about being American here?

    19. A prey to settled dejection, as if long mocked with hope he would not now indulge it, even when it had ceased to be a mock, the prospect of that day, or evening at furthest, lying at anchor, with plenty of water for his people, and a brother captain to counsel and befriend, seemed in no perceptible degree to encourage him. His mind appeared unstrung, if not still more seriously affected.

      Sounds like depression

    20. Struggling through the throng, the American advanced to the Spaniard, assuring him of his sympathies, and offering to render whatever assistance might be in his power.

      What is the author trying to say about American mentality/culture/demeanor?

    21. But as if not unwilling to let nature make known her own case among his suffering charge, or else in despair of restraining it for the time, the Spanish captain, a gentlemanly, reserved-looking, and rather young man to a stranger’s eye, dressed with singular richness, but bearing plain traces of recent sleepless cares and disquietudes, stood passively by, leaning against the main-mast, at one moment casting a dreary, spiritless look upon his excited people, at the next an unhappy glance toward his visitor. By his side stood a black of small stature, in whose rude face, as occasionally, like a shepherd’s dog, he mutely turned it up into the Spaniard’s, sorrow and affection were equally blended.

      ...correct me if I'm wrong, but is the captain here the only white person? If so, ughh

    22. who, in venerable contrast to the tumult below them, were couched, sphynx-like, one on the starboard cat-head, another on the larboard, and the remaining pair face to face on the opposite bulwarks above the main-chains.

      In-human, creepy description of black people...yikes

    23. , had swept off a great part of their number, more especially the Spaniards.

      As far as I know, I don't think Spanish people are particularly susceptible to scurvy?? What is the author trying to say with this?

    24. f Castile and Leon, medallioned about by groups of mythological or symbolical devices; uppermost and central of which was a dark satyr in a mask, holding his foot on the prostrate neck of a writhing figure, likewise masked.

      Tell me you're scared of paganism without telling me you're scared of paganism

    25. As the whale-boat drew more and more nigh, the cause of the peculiar pipe-clayed aspect of the stranger was seen in the slovenly neglect pervading her. The spars, ropes, and great part of the bulwarks, looked woolly, from long unacquaintance with the scraper, tar, and the brush. Her keel seemed laid, her ribs put together, and she launched, from Ezekiel’s Valley of Dry Bones.

      Personification of the ship - genuinely if I heard this out of context and ship-specific stuff wasn't mentioned, I would've just thought of a woman. It's either really pervading personification or I'm just too sleepy lol

    26. nd the true character of the vessel was plain–a Spanish merchantman of the first class, carrying negro slaves, amongst other valuable freight, from one colonial port to another.

      YIKES...

    27. Peering over the bulwarks were what really seemed, in the hazy distance, throngs of dark cowls; while, fitfully revealed through the open port-holes, other dark moving figures were dimly descried, as of Black Friars pacing the cloisters.

      Ghost ship?

    28. On the second day, not long after dawn, while lying in his berth, his mate came below, informing him that a strange sail was coming into the bay. Ships were then not so plenty in those waters as now. He rose, dressed, and went on deck.

      I feel like there's an interesting, eerie tone in this.

    1. Failing to fetch me at first keep encouraged, Missing me one place search another, I stop somewhere waiting for you.

      Someone else said this already, but I agree that it doesn't feel like a solid ending. Like he just kind of forgot to finish or wrap this up? Or maybe he's making a statement with the lack of closure.

    2. I sound my barbaric yawp

      Yawp: noun a harsh or hoarse cry or yelp. "the cur did not bark, other than a single yawp" verb shout or exclaim hoarsely. "the fans screeched, yawped, and pounded their palms"

    3. Perhaps I might tell more. Outlines! I plead for my brothers and sisters. Do you see O my brothers and sisters? It is not chaos or death — it is form, union, plan — it is eternal life — it is Happiness.

      This sounds like a cult leaderrr

    4. I know perfectly well my own egotism,

      Yeah, okay. So far I feel like Walt Whitman would be a great cult leader and that's not a good thing. Maybe that can be an essay topic?

    5. Easily written loose-finger’d chords — I feel the thrum of your climax and close. My head slues round on my neck, Music rolls, but not from the organ, Folks are around me, but they are no household of mine.

      Buddy, not in public

    6. By my life-lumps! becoming already a creator,

      ...life lumps? Concerning think about what he means by that and becoming a creator of life...but also, kind of funny if he means what I'm guessing.

    7. I have embraced you, and henceforth possess you to myself, And when you rise in the morning you will find what I tell you is so.

      ...this sounds toxic. Leave the people you hook up with alone, Walt.

    8. On his right cheek I put the family kiss, And in my soul I swear I never will deny him.

      This doesn't sound like a "family" kiss, unless you're from Alabama /j. But really it could be that he'd do anything for family, but this feels sketchy with all his talk about women and men being lovers and siblings

    9. The hiss of the surgeon’s knife, the gnawing teeth of his saw, Wheeze, cluck, swash of falling blood, short wild scream, and long, dull, tapering groan,

      I mean, he's been great at story telling

    10. I am a free companion, I bivouac by invading watchfires, I turn the bridegroom out of bed and stay with the bride myself, I tighten her all night to my thighs and lips.

      WHAT

    11. Under Niagara, the cataract falling like a veil over my countenance,

      I know he's talking about the waterfall here with "cataract" but I laughed because I thought he was calling it an eyesore/pain at first.

    12. A gigantic beauty of a stallion, fresh and responsive to my caresses, Head high in the forehead, wide between the ears, Limbs glossy and supple, tail dusting the ground, Eyes full of sparkling wickedness, ears finely cut, flexibly moving. His nostrils dilate as my heels embrace him, His well-built limbs tremble with pleasure as we race around and return. I but use you a minute, then I resign you, stallion, Why do I need your paces when I myself out-gallop them? Even as I stand or sit passing faster than you.

      This feels like a really weird way to describe a horse. Like it's weirdly sexual. Please leave the horse alone

    13. The slow march play’d at the head of the association marching two and two, (They go to guard some corpse, the flag-tops are draped with black muslin.)

      The Black Parade???? (MCR reference for those who don't get it)

    14. You my rich blood! your milky stream pale strippings of my life! Breast that presses against other breasts it shall be you! My brain it shall be your occult convolutions! Root of wash’d sweet-flag! timorous pond-snipe! nest of guarded duplicate eggs! it shall be you! Mix’d tussled hay of head, beard, brawn, it shall be you! Trickling sap of maple, fibre of manly wheat, it shall be you! Sun so generous it shall be you! Vapors lighting and shading my face it shall be you! You sweaty brooks and dews it shall be you! Winds whose soft-tickling genitals rub against me it shall be you! Broad muscular fields, branches of live oak, loving lounger in my winding paths, it shall be you! Hands I have taken, face I have kiss’d, mortal I have ever touch’d, it shall be you.

      I feel like this can also go into the "bisexual theory bucket"

    15. Copulation is no more rank to me than death is.

      I think this comment is about how sex was viewed as disgusting or shameful, especially in the religious aspect. Death is not "rank" to him, and neither is sex.

    16. Hurrah for positive science! long live exact demonstration! Fetch stonecrop mixt with cedar and branches of lilac,

      Going back to the part about teaching the kid about grass because I'm petty about that - if you believe in science and its value so much, teach your kid about science! Tell them what grass is!

    17. I am the poet of the woman the same as the man, And I say it is as great to be a woman as to be a man, And I say there is nothing greater than the mother of men.

      This would be fun to analyze from a queer lens.

    18. I know I am deathless,

      I think this is less literal and more following the belief that while we may die, our bodies will decompose and contribute to the development of further life.

    19. I do not snivel that snivel the world over,

      To be fair, I feel like people have been saying "This is it! The world's gonna end!" for centuries. I think maybe we have more hope than we realize.

    20. Vivas to those who have fail’d! And to those whose war-vessels sank in the sea! And to those themselves who sank in the sea! And to all generals that lost engagements, and all overcome heroes! And the numberless unknown heroes equal to the greatest heroes known!

      History and its nuances, those left behind in textbooks!

    21. (The moth and the fish-eggs are in their place, The bright suns I see and the dark suns I cannot see are in their place, The palpable is in its place and the impalpable is in its place.)

      Reminds me of the question of "how separate are humans from nature, really?"

    22. I am of old and young, of the foolish as much as the wise, Regardless of others, ever regardful of others, Maternal as well as paternal, a child as well as a man, Stuff’d with the stuff that is coarse and stuff’d with the stuff that is fine,

      It's all about perspective!

    23. The crowd laugh at her blackguard oaths, the men jeer and wink to each other,

      I looked up what a blackguard oath is and all I got was info about D&D 5e paladins. I already knew about how oaths work for paladins lol. But I'm guessing maybe a "blackguard" oath is one that's disingenuous?

    24. The young fellow drives the express-wagon, (I love him, though I do not know him;)

      This could be genuine love for fellow human beings, but since it wasn't mentioned for others, I'm throwing it in the "Bisexuality Bucket" for that theory lol. Maybe I'll write my essay about this?

    25. The lunatic is carried at last to the asylum a confirm’d case, (He will never sleep any more as he did in the cot in his mother’s bedroom;)

      Good to mention how awful asylums were in that time period for patients. There's a reason why we have the "Asylum" season in American Horror Story...

    26. His blue shirt exposes his ample neck and breast and loosens over his hip-band, His glance is calm and commanding, he tosses the slouch of his hat away from his forehead, The sun falls on his crispy hair and mustache, falls on the black of his polish’d and perfect limbs.

      More for the "Bi Walt Whitman"

    27. The young men float on their backs, their white bellies bulge to the sun, they do not ask who seizes fast to them, They do not know who puffs and declines with pendant and bending arch, They do not think whom they souse with spray.

      Someone else said "bi Walt Whitman" and I agree lol

    28. She owns the fine house by the rise of the bank, She hides handsome and richly drest aft the blinds of the window.

      This has the vibe of "women are to be pursued and attained". Very Rapunzel in her tower.

    29. She had long eyelashes, her head was bare, her coarse straight locks descended upon her voluptuous limbs and reach’d to her feet.

      I don't like how sexualizing this description is...it feels weirdly racist. Kind of tokenizing, even? It follows that vibe of "if I can sexualize this minority, then they're tolerable!"

    30. What do you think has become of the young and old men? And what do you think has become of the women and children?

      Maybe it'd help to engage in that small talk you were complaining about before, if you want to know how other people are doing :) (yes this is a very passive aggressive smiley)

    31. Or I guess it is the handkerchief of the Lord,

      Blades of grass would make for a pretty terrible handkerchief. I know I'm just being petty here, but like...just help the kid learn.

    32. How could I answer the child? I do not know what it is any more than he.

      I guess that's fair, but you could tell the kid that it's a plant? I understand the idea that we don't know much more than children as we discover our ways around life/the earth, but...we probably do know the plant & its scientific classification at least, and I doubt the kid does. It could help them learn. This reminds me of that "Unschooling" trend for homeschooling kids (that's shown to be pretty harmful for learning development fyi)...

      https://www.researchgate.net/publication/232544669_The_Impact_of_Schooling_on_Academic_Achievement_Evidence_From_Homeschooled_and_Traditionally_Schooled_Students

    33. And that a kelson of the creation is love,

      Apparently a kelson is ": a longitudinal structure running above and fastened to the keel of a ship in order to stiffen and strengthen its framework."

    34. I mind how once we lay such a transparent summer morning, How you settled your head athwart my hips and gently turn’d over upon me, And parted the shirt from my bosom-bone, and plunged your tongue to my bare-stript heart, And reach’d till you felt my beard, and reach’d till you held my feet.

      I'm really not liking how sexual this is? It just feels...icky. I don't mind sex in literature as a plot point/topic/whatever, but the way it's being described here just icked me out a bit.

    35. I am satisfied — I see, dance, laugh, sing; As the hugging and loving bed-fellow sleeps at my side through the night, and withdraws at the peep of the day with stealthy tread, Leaving me baskets cover’d with white towels swelling the house with their plenty, Shall I postpone my acceptation and realization and scream at my eyes, That they turn from gazing after and down the road, And forthwith cipher and show me to a cent, Exactly the value of one and exactly the value of two, and which is ahead?

      This section reminded of rhetoric new age cults would use.

    36. Clear and sweet is my soul, and clear and sweet is all that is not my soul.

      The quick pacing in this is really well done! The poem's structure reminds me of a train of increasingly frantic then calming down thoughts.

    37. The atmosphere is not a perfume, it has no taste of the distillation, it is odorless, It is for my mouth forever, I am in love with it,

      Could this be a feminine personification? (choice of talking about perfume over cologne)

    38. I harbor for good or bad, I permit to speak at every hazard, Nature without check with original energy.

      Does he consider himself a part of nature? How separate are humans from nature in his eyes?

    39. Song of Myself

      Just a note - every line for as far as I can tell links back up to the title of the poem. Was this intentional in the site's design? It makes it a bit difficult to annotate on Hypothesis.

    1. Most men gamble with her, and gain all, and lose all, as her wheel rolls.

      It's interesting to note that I feel like fortune is most often personified as a woman, including here!

    2. Where is the master who could have taught Shakspeare? Where is the master who could have instructed Franklin, or Washington, or Bacon, or Newton? Every great man is a unique.

      This is ignoring a lot of progress and people who learned from those who came before them...everything we have right now has been steadily built up over time.

    3. As men’s prayers are a disease of the will, so are their creeds a disease of the intellect.

      This sounds very discrediting to those who find strength through prayer and their religious doctrine.