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  1. Apr 2017
    1. she couldn’t resist unzipping her purse and touching the fat green wallet just for a second, for the contraction it made her feel around her heart.

      She was addicted to stealing...and the fat green wallet. Ironic that money is kind-of green?

    2. five sets of keys, fourteen pairs of sunglasses, a child’s striped scarf, binoculars, a cheese grater, a pocket knife, twenty-eight bars of soap, eighty-five pens, ranging from cheap ballpoints she’d used to sign debit-card slips to the aubergine Visconti that cost two hundred and sixty dollars online, which she’d lifted from her former boss’s lawyer during a contracts meeting

      Very precise on the numbers!

    3. Lassimo Hotel

      The name of the hotel seems as if it is elegant and fancy, inferring that weathly people stay here. Therefore, there must be some "good" objects to steal.

    4. will steal the hair off your head if you give them half a chance, but you leave your stuff lying in plain sight and expect it to be waiting for you when you come back?

      Not sure what she is meaning about the stealing of hair. I sthis a simile to the rest of the sentence? I defintiely agree with the ending of the sentence about leaving stuff lying around in plain sight.

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    1. After the masons would depart, the builder

      Aren't masons and builders the kind-of the same thing? I know masons work on cemetary work, but just a thought of mine...

    2. Like Babel’s, its base was laid in a high hour of renovated earth, following the second deluge, when the waters of the Dark Ages had dried up and once more the green appeared.

      This is a comparison of Bibical time -- comparing to a bell tower

    3. At that period, no large bell was made to sound otherwise than as at present, by agitation of a tongue within by means of ropes, or percussion from without, either from cumbrous machinery, or stalwart watchmen, armed with heavy hammers, stationed in the belfry or in sentry boxes on the open roof, according as the bell was sheltered or exposed.

      These lines allow us to get insight on as to what at least somepart of the bell will doing

    4. Round and round the bell, twelve figures of gay girls, garlanded, hand-in-hand, danced in a choral ring the embodied hours.

      Very descriptive of how the bell operates and somewhat looks.

  3. Mar 2017
    1. pushed the guard to his knees. He handed up the shotgun to his partner and yanked the guard’s wrists up behind his back and locked them together with a pair of handcuffs. He toppled him onto the floor with a kick between the shoulder blades. Then he took his shotgun back and went over to the security gate at the end of the counter.

      Very descriptive and chronological order is seen here. This is a time when you can see imagery. You can imagine this setting.

  4. Feb 2017
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    1. From his neat head unquestionably rises a small balloon

      Why a balloon? I think this might be imagery - like a little light bulb - symbolizing a key point to him, and some insight.

    2. A third draws aimless patterns in the dirt

      Who is the "third"? Is the third a child or someone she loved? I feel as these lines could be somewhat confusing to readers because we go from one setting (her kids) to another setting (someone she once loved). One may thi nk that the third is someone who she once loved seeing as these lines are enjammed and there are no puncuation. However, after reading further and specifically in line 5, I see that it says "to feign indifference to that casual nod." Now, I feel as if this is someone she once loved. Ultimately, I don't think any parent would just give a nod to one of their childre--someone who they love unconditionally.

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    1. The sky it fell from, pale as oatmeal, bears up like sheep before shearing.

      In this phrase, I believe that the author is trying to describe the white powered snow by saying "pale as oatmeal." This is an example of Imagery.

    2. broken hearts

      I feel as if this is focusing on a change in tone. In the beginning, it was calm - and then "broken hearts" was mentioned. I personally interpret "broken hearts" as something sad.

    3. after long silence

      I think that this is interpreting that the snow has finally arrived after a long period of time of no snow or precipitation alike.

  8. Jan 2017
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    1. I remember how I’d smile

      This phrase shows how the poem is going go forward (and then changes!)... it kind of starts the tone of the poem after she says her Spanish is not good enough

    2. I will be deaf when my children need my help

      I think she is saying that there is no point in learning the English language if she stops trying because she is embarrassed and supposedly the laughter of her children.

    3. I bought a book to learn English.

      I think the author is trying to tell us that she is having a hard time with just Spanish as noted previously. She wants to talk to everyone without being "dumb."

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    1. The first Thing he must do, now that he is home, is decide who This woman is, this old, white-haired woman

      I think that this phrase gives us the understanding of what Alzheimer's is and how this elderly man is suffering. Alzheimer's causes loss of memory and this is a prime example of it.

    2. There is no time for that now. No time for music, The peculiar screeching of strings, the luxurious Fiddling with emotion.

      Is the author implying that there is no time due to his health conditions? Is he going to pass away soon? While his health is important, I feel that there is at least time for music - he could listen to it while he is at home or in the hospital...